jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi

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My new story of an unfortunate girl'''

Which life had given her troubles

But she fought with courage and gets her the result'''''''.

Even though destiny given her challenges

She faced them'''''and she fight with them

And got succeded''''''.

Indeed she won the life'''got her actual''''''..life''''''''

This is the story of an young girl and her courage'''.and her strength to lead'''''''..success in her life''''''''..

Her name is Geet Handa'''''''.

She is not a orphan''''''

But her parents are died'''..and she is living with her darji'''''.darjii''..had three sons''..

One is manider''''''.

Other is veera''..

And the third is shekar'''.and suman'''''

Parents of geet''.died at the age of 8 leaving behind''''''the property''''''''of a land in hosiyilara pur

Dear Dairy:

Pata nahii'..kya hay mere naseeb'''''.

Sab muje abagan kehtee hya''''

Mere zindagi'''''.iss mere HP ke galiyoo mein gujuree hay

Please''''..

Muje aap se shikayat nahii hay''''

Mere maa aur bauji'''..ko apne mujse cheen liyee''''.lekin''''chachi aur chachu.muje pyar kartha hay''''''..

Lekin sab Duch''''''..teek huwa '''..jab tak hamera bade bhai'''''''..brij ke shaadi''''uss malini se nahii huwa hoti

Woh hamere ghar men rajya chalati hay'''''''..

Darji bhi uske baat manthee hay''..kyonki..wo h'''''''..

Muje abagan sabit karne par tuliye huwe hay'''''''

Please babaji.mere madad karo..

Uski.sister''''''''''''.aur bhai'''''.rudraskh'bahut katnara k log'.hay'''

Lekin'.muje ek baat ka vishwas hay,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Ke hamesha accha log ke saath..aachha hota hay''''''''''

Pata nahii agaee kya hone wala hay'''

Kyonky.us din men ne channi ko uss rudraskh se bachee ke'''''''.uske pyar gurvinder ke pass bejkar''.accha kiya yaa bura''''''..

Lekin''''''''..babhi ka koshish hay'''''''..ke mere shaadi uss ke lafunge''''''bhai ke saath karna chahtee hay''''''''''..

Babaji mere madad kariyee'''''''..

Roles:

Geet Handa:a sweet innocent girl''''''.unfortunate girl''''''''.helps all''.love to love''''''.

The story girl''''''..twists andturns'but still believes in love''.and waiting for perfect person in her life.and she believes Her babajii'''''''

MAAN SINGH KHURANA:THE RICH ARROGANT BUSSINESS MAN OF DELHI.THE ELDEST SON OF KHURANA TOOK HIS BUSSINESS AFTER FATHER 'S DEATH.AND EXPANDED''.HIS BUSSINESS''''''''''

HE ONLY LISTEN TO DADIMAA;S WORDS''AND LOVES HIS FAMILY BUT NEVER DISCLOSES''.

Darji:he is head of the family'''''everyone listens to him.he loves all the family loves his last son..shekar''but''''he loves geet but never express it

Manidar handa:his eldest son.loves his family.takes decision.but respects his father''. His wife is ragini

One son and one daughter

Daughter is simmi'..married and lives in other town'''''''

Hisn son is brij very much traditional and angry person

He is not bad''but listens to his wife.malini who is wicked person''''''''''''''

Wants land of geet''''''''she wants to marry her to her brother'''''''.rudraskh'''''''..who is evil

Veera:he is soft loves their family

His wife isranoo.she is good and loves geet as her mother

She has one daughter/////////////rajji and one son.tottu

Shekar and suman has only one daughter.geet''''..

Savitri Devi:grand mother''''.of Maan singh khurana

And she had raised their sons and daughter'''..and their poti'..and potaa''''..

She loves maan very much'''''''..

And .

Veer singh Khurana''''and his wife Nandini singh
Khurana''''''''parents of Maan'''''''''.

Dev Khurana:brother of Maan''loves him..little shy typeand sensitive''''''..not as strong as maan'''''

Vicky singh Khurana:last brother of maan''''''..

He loves his family'

Simran khurana.married to raj.who is writer'elder to the all''''loves her family''''''

And loves maan'''.too''.

NT:dev's wife'''''she is sister of Sameraa Gupta''''''wants to ruin.khurana family'''''.for that reason she married to dev''''''maan's elder brother'''''.

Anvesha khurana:she is last child of khurana family''''''''..

Maan loves her a lot''''''''.


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last part and epilogue

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A girl is in his room…………….

She is praying to the god……………….

At that time…a sweet girl comes to her

Geet didi

Kya hay rajji

A beautiful……………………….girl with a sweet smile……………………….sees her………………………

They both goes to the mandir………………….

And she sings the song……………….

Geet:rajji………school nahii gayee….chalo bahut kaam ha

She comes to a big haveli..

Where a lady…….she is not good……..

\calls geet……………

Ar emaha rani….kaha hoot um…………….kya subha subha apne sundar …..soorat sab ko dikhana jarori…………..hay kya.\where others look at her……\she lowers her head………

And move to kitchen…..and she cooks the food…………

A person which huge beard………….and with few people

He is darji……………………..

Head of the family……………………………

He listens to his sons……………

She gives him tea………………..

At that time.malini comes……………

She thinks…………

Jald se jald muje iss afaat ko(geet) muje iss ghar se bahar ………………………pekh na padega..

Aur saath mein zameen……bhi……………….

Geet comes into her room

Malini:dekho rudraskh jab tak tere aur geet ke shaadi na ho jaate toh eisa kaam mat karna……….

Too kahi baar jail jaa juka…………phir bhi mein ne darji se………………….tere bare mein baat ke…….

Dekhoo……………………agar tuje geet chaheyee toh thodi din samaal kar rakhne kii……………………..

Other side a evil person answers………………….

Donot worry………………………….veera………………………

I will take car eof it………..

Muje geet har haal mein chaheyee………………………………….

Geet listens to this……………………..

Ab toh darji………..badimaa aur badipapa…..sab log………………………………..

Mere shaadi ke peeche par pade hay………………………..

Maa baba…….mein kya karoon…………………..

Rudraksh………..bahut………..boora insaan…..hay

At that time ranoo is discussing with his husband……………..

Kyon jii.malini ke baat kyon surnii……………..

Aap jante hoo na….woh rudraskh kitna boora insaan hya………………….

Phir bhi apne phool se bachii ko…….

Us rakashas ho………..

Kya kare…………..

Malini se geet ke saari rishte.ko yeh batadiya ake who abagan hay………………………………………….'tab tuu bat akaun shaadi kareaga…………hamere……………………………..bachii ko……………..

A t that geet is praying to the god…………………..

Meantime..kal subha dekhana……….yesa chakkar chalungi….ke……………………………….sab log geetke shaadi………………do din mei n karadenge……………

On the other hand…………………..

Geet is praying to god………………

By that time….

A pandit is saying

When ever there is a bad happens there will be ………………….

Always………….good will be there to save the prosperous……………….

When ever evil turn its wheel………..

God will send…………someone to protect……….the good from the evil……………..

There is something evil is going to happen

And this time also …………..god is already planned to Save the good from the evil………….

But how………….

And whooo………………………………

Who is the saviour of geet………….

Geet is praying with folding hands…………………..

And pandit also praying to god…….

At that time…….a person……….comes to a person

Sir……..the information……we find out

He is there it is pakka information

So let us inform to sir…

And he dails the number

It is alandline number

It is avery big mansion

KM,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

A person lifts the phone

Where is sir………………………………….

Sir…………..there is aphone call for u

He takes the phone…….

Hisfaceis not shown……………………….

No……I donot want to take risk this time…………

This tim e im coming……….

Where is the place

Hosilya pur………………………..

Sir……………………

The person…………………..moves from the wate

His muscular body…………

His arms…..

He is getting ready………………………….

He calls someone

And

I will be back in few days

That time make sure………………the work should be complete

I wan teverything t be perfect……………………….

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Next morning………………………..

Everyone was……………….in the room………..

Geet wakes early in the morning……………………..

She does all the work……………….

She is wetting her hair………………………..

She is beautiful…………………

She is so innocence like a flower………….

And she is like purity……………………in a devine…………….

She is made by god……………..

For only one person……………

He is on the way………….to his destination…

He is purpose for someother thing

But destiny bringing himto the place

To take his life with him..

The love and happiness…………………….

Lot of adventurous……….as god choose him for her…………

She is made for him,………..

And he is made for her………………

And their pair is made by god………………………………

Even crooked people………evil wishes….never stop them…………

Geet open the door……………..

The pandit….enter the haveli………

She donot know the trouble enter the house

Darji.and other men came ……..so she need to exit..

Other wise she will get punished……………………………

And she make her way to kitchen……………..

but she didn't know her world is going to change

she is going to facec the toughest challenge………..

and only fate can change.the life……………………..

she is not new to challenges…

but this isa big challenge……..

the person..said something;

then all the people of the house called all…

first time….geet also called…

her ears cannot believe………….

She is terribly afraid……as it is first time….she is called……………for a family meeting….

Handa family….never intervenes girls into their family

Only men take decision

But except manali.she is wife of.brij…has a upper hand…………….

Everyone failed…to attain the position….

On the other hand.the person…..finding something…………..

He is worried……………….

He is really searching…….

He open his luggage…………he formed a tent……..

And he came out…

He felt the breeze…………………………

First time there Is a flewing breeze like familiar one

And he felt strange feeling

On the other hand………..

Geet open the window…………

She feel the wind…..

And she felt the strange feeling

And she is in thoughts……………………….

She is thinking of morning conversation…………………….

As everyone decided for geet marriage…………….should be performed with in 2 days………as there is subh murat………….other wise boora sankat…is going to effect…………and geet marriage…………….happens after longtime…………….

And this is handa parivaar's happiness…………

And malini had planned her ekka……………..that soon……………..rudraskh and geet marriage …………….

As her plan is set right……….she is very……..happy…

But geet eyes are filled with tears……

Same time maan….felt something in his eyes…..

Check it as water………….

This is strange…

And he gets into the den….

And geet goes to the sleep

As ……………………………

She knows she is buried into the ground…

And there is no escape………

And dreams……

She is running………………so fast….

And all are after that …………with swords……….

She is running……….after………………………..

People

She is hiding tree.

And suddenly she struck with something……………..

And it strong chest…..and she falls in to the hands…….

She opens the eyes…………………………..

And she is dreaming………………………………

But she is completely in few days…………….her dream………is going to come true……………………….

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awesome update
geet s dreaming abt her prince charming

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