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amazing ff.............cant wait to see things unfold in their life.................cont soon.............
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Geet open the eyes

She is scared………………….and she remembered that she fallen in lake.and some stranger picked her up……………………..

And the person bought .here what is the place………..

Why is she…………………here….

She felt happy as she is free from the world…………………..into her new life……………………..

She had never feared of life…

But she need to thank the person which saved her life…………………..

She thanked to god.

She came out.

It is a small house……..connected to a big mansion………………..it is like a palace………………………….

She feel like dream………….

She enter the mansion.with her lower steps…..she heard sound………..it is the payal sound of own…………………………..

She scared as when ever her payal sounds…………darji.used to……………scare her with the looks………………………..

She feared at stopped at the moment………………….

She move ahead…………………………………

She heard some…………sounds………………

She scared……………

And hid behind the wall…..

She is middle of the room.

The sound is the practicing…………………of maan……who is doing his tai chi…………….

He is shirtless………………..

He once again failed…………..

His anger………………………………..showed on the chair……….he broked……………she grasped remember the anger brij used to show on their old furnature……………..

She scared………………..

Maan suddenly felt some presence…………….in that room.and he heard the payal sound………

Geet grasped………………..before she could run……………..she slipped and a strong hands..caught her…………………..

Geet open her eyes as she didn't hit the ground…………..

She saw the dark brown eyes with lot of arrogance and anger looking at her………………….

She lifted her self……………………………….

And he asked still holdingher……

What the hell ur doing here….why u came here……………

Look I saved u because of humanity…..nothing more than else.

Now leave before my anger reach its stage………………

Geet feared………….at his arrogant voice………..

And she ran from there..without…………seeing back……………………………..

He got a call from the office……….

Ok I will be there in 20 minutes…………………………..

And he moved into his room………..

Geet ran from there……….

Kitna ajeeb insaan hay……itna gussa kyon…..are mein toh unee ………….thanks batane ke liye……………………….ayee tha…………yeh kya tareeka.baat karnee ka….but she felt happy……….babaji.pl acche insaan hay………samaal………..na………..ok..ab kya karoon……………..and she remember channi giving the address of…………pinky……………………..

Address:…….no-12…………karwadi……………….

Ok…….and she came from the haveli……..didn't see the photos………………….she ran away from the house………………………….

And she enter into the taxi……………………………and get in………….

Maan came out of the room…………….

His mind…………………….

Thought..why did I shout at her………..she may not the one which ur thinking of.maybe she came to say thanks……..and she seems to be an innocent village girl…………………

Innocent village girl.what the hell probably for her runaway boy friend………………………………………

Stop thinking about her maan…..you are not the one which run out of the problems…..u have lot of work …………focus maan……..

But still he feared of safety…………………………….

With in his thoughts he enter into the biggest……………………….construction company………his own company……………………………………..he had lot of companies…………………..but kc has its own image……………

His empire……..

No wonder he is the king…………………………………….

The office…………………………….

Sasha:his top artectect……………………………….the talented………….employee daughter of munshijii………….one of the………………..most old employee of kc…………………………..

Aditya:adi…………………………..the accountant…………………………….

Tasha:assistant to sasha….she is modern girl……………………………………….

And all others………………….

Geet exit from the taxi .she touched the bell……………….

A chirpy girl…………………………….open the door on seeing geet.she shouted geet and hugged her..

She is pinky manichanda…………………………..daughter of mr manichanda……….

And she work as receptionist with kc…………………………………………..

The destiny begins…………………………

New life………………….

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The door is opened

A bubbly girl……..saw geet.

And she hugged…………..and said…………….pinky………….

Pinky……………….hugged her……….and on the other side……………

Mr manichanda came and hug geet….

Geet is very much happy with……….her life………………

She open the cup board………….she remembers…………..

She wore dress of pinky…….she thought of buying of new clothes…………………………

She remember all the incidents.

She thought first thing she need to settle in this town……………she need to …………find a job very soon………………………….

She slept peacefully after so many years……………………..

She caught with sleep……………………….with in few minutes………

But one person cannot sleep……………….

It seems she is running from her home……………………….she didn't even know any one here….then why the hell he yelled at her,,,,,,,,,,,

At what is this why im thinking of the strange girl………………….

Due to her.he was late………………………………she is a stranger……….he saved due to humanity…no hard feelings……………………….

He is only…………………..just only.and tries to close the eyes…..the innocent face…………………..tiredness……………..in her face……………………….strains of crying……….like she is crying for years………………………….trembling in fear……………….her scary eyes……..attempt to cover herself………….her touch………………………….

He open the eyes………………………..

raba ho rabaaaaaa rabaaaaa rabaaaa

Ishq da galla kargaya Challa Jisnu lag jave hojaye galla [x2]

Jag diya rasma ishq nehi janta [x2]

Dil betab hai tujhko hai mangta [x2]

Ishq ishq rab hai rab hai ishq ishq rab hai


and he open the eyes why the girl chases his dreams………………

but she should be fine…….

The firstthink I need to find out the where abouts of the girl.hope she is not in danger…..

Oh god………….tab gtak muje chain nahii milega…………………….

Next day fresh morning……………………..

A person getting ready.

A huge building…………….

Khurana constructions……………………………..

A long legged ……………red outfit lady is wandering around…

She bumped with a person……..

Adi………..

He is aditya ……………..he is accountant and most trustable person of…………kc

She is sasha….cheif arctecture…….want to be always good looks of his boss……………………….

A pony tail…blue skirt girl…………..says hi.

She is tasha……….

Everyone set alarme d….

Everyone he is coming…in 20 minutes so get ready.

Everyone alarmed….as if ………………………….some volcano is coming………………..yes the most handsome………angry…arrogant…….successfull business person and md ceo of khurana constructions……………………………………..

Mr maan singh khurana………….

No body beats………

He is coming after 2 weeks……………………………

By that time…………

He is wearing………….coat………….he is getting ready……………

He came out of the car.

Adi fumed….where…..is noida project file……..

It is with pinky…..

And where is ……………………………..she

Tasha …she is off……………………..

Just then…………….adi………and other s shocked….to find…..the terrific……….msk……………………….with his body guards…………………………..he is looking…………

Sasha:bring the Mehta an sharma files on my table………pronto.

And adi…………come with the noida file………………………………

With in seconds…….

I want ,meeting…get arrangements….fast…….and move………………..

He comes to his cabin…………….

He tooks the phone….

Yes the details……………………

Can't

Sir photo………………………………………..

Photo.if I have then why u hire u ediots………………….can't I find…………it my own.if u can't then …………….say to me directly…………………..

And he cuts the phone…….

It is past ten minutes………………………………..he is not got the noida…….file.he shouted……………..adi.

Adi.oh n………..abhi ek insaan…..hay jo mere jaan is waqt bacha sakthi hay……..

Pinky.

He called her………………

The phone is lifted by geet….

Hello………….a sweet voice replied

Adi.on the other side……………………terrified………….he checked the phone…..yes it is the same……………

Pinky voice is chirpy..not sweet..melodious………………………….

Pinky whats wrong with u ..ur voice………

Then geet answered.

Geet:this is geet

Not pinky pls be on hold…….i will call her right now……………….

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Awesome all parts .pls cont soon
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Mein adi…………..i mean aditya………….wants to talk to pinky………

adi:pls save my life it is in danger

pinky:what happened adi sir………………….

Adi:pls noida file………maan sir Is back..

What dd is back…..

Oh no…..shamat agayaa…

Haa.is se pehle vo volcano patee…………………pls……………jalde se……………….muje………………..iss musibat se bachaoo………………………………….

He is still mumering..

Where pinky ran like a marthon to head for FACE the DD of thee KC

Mr Maan singh Khurana

In the mean while……………geet is wondered is the world such a people who scare like ……….the world………………….he is like a 10 headed ravaan…….he got the description from pinky……

Oh.no.she checked for news papers…for ads………………….

She got one……….that is the position for house keeping in a hotel………….

She quickly got ready…………………..and gone for the interview…………………..

The interview run well.the manager impressed by the attitude of geet……so he appointed her…

It was a week………she is working.

As geet has a habbit of working at home……………….

she doesn't look tired even after the work…………………….

She had a two friends………………………

One is anjali……she is a waitress there………

And another is romeo……………….

He is a fun loving guy..always cracks jokes………..and makes other happy…………..

One elder lady………she is also from house department…………..

And mr Mehta.the manager……he is a very good person………………

Every night………..she used to listen to the interesting stories of pinky s office…………………….msk the dd,and sasha and her antics to impress her boss……and tasha her silly excuses……..and adi who solve the problems………

In few days…..even though she is not working at kc.she is very much familiar……………………..with the attitudes and skills……………..and knowledge……..of……….all the people……………….

She is wonder…………of………….

But destiny had stored different for ………..them.

Maan is not able to sleep

He is wondering of the girl which he saved………

Is she Is not in trouble

Her haunted beautiful eyes……………………..

Scared eyes……….lot of mixed emotions………………

Wrinkles at forehead……and tiredness in her eyes..dark circles………but still.increasing.her beauty….is her innocence……………………….and her…………………face……….

He closed his eyes..

To find her in his dreams…………………………

Maan had a meeting…………..at hotel…………………skylight….international……………..

He cursed adi…….for…………………meeting…..

He is get ready.

Meeting at 6 .30 pm……………

He is waiting for the client………..

Two waiters are horrified…….as he already.screamed at him………………

He is in very bad mood…………..

Anjali………pertified…………………she already dropped..two glasses of water.

Geet horrified…what 's wrong with anjali………..

She is working in the same hotel..

As she is hardworking….

When ever her duty hours.complete.she even work in restaurant also…………..so her additional job Is waiter also…………………….

Anajli:oh no………………wapas agayaa…….

Geet:kaun ayaa hay…………..

Anjali:are wahi…………………………..kitna hot aur handsome.hay.lekin gussa volcano jaisa………………………………

And the manager called………………………

Delhi ka sab se ameer Adm. Hay who.agar usko inkaar kiya.toh tere zindagi………….barbaad hojayege………..bada clients hay hamara……………………………..pls…………….donot try to create problems……….with him….ok………………….

Geet……..pls maintain peace……………….he is our major client……………..

Geet:oksir I will take care………………

And she gone to him with water….

He is discussing with client……………….

Regarding project..

Geet enter to the table…………………

He is about to bark on her as she is in wrong time……………..to stop the conversation.

As he turned to the site…to bark on her ,,as he stood up…….with his anger.glare………………………..

All are petrified on seeing him,,,,,,,,,,,,

But as soon as he turnedto see the face……….

His anger………………………….seems to be turned down…………………….

On seeing the same innocent creature……………………….infron tof him………………………….

He started staring at her….

Geet:Sir sorry……………………..to disturb u………………………

Pls I forgive us…………………we will assure that…………………there will not be any hassle…………………………and without seeing his eyes.she moved fromthere

Mr khurana…………………client called………..

And he ended the meeting………..

He sat in the car……

Why his heart felt ver y happy after seeing her,,,,,,,,,,,,

No dark circles..she is happy……………..

Her innocent eyes had hopes………………

Her eyes are so beautifull.want to see her for the entire life…

This is first tim…………………….on seeing someone face………………………his anger.melt.

Even that is the shock for the entiree……………………………life……….

He enter into his room……………

That night geet's……………….night duty…………

She is taking in behalf of…mrs Melina…….she is house keeping…………she has 10 yrs old son who is weak………………

And suffering from flu……and geet assured tha t………..she will take up the night duty of………………her……………..

It is exchange…………..

Geet is in her routine……………….she come across a room.it is for a company……

She is going to enter the room.to keep the things in place.

It is a inter connection room.

Where she heard a conversation…………..

Aaj raat sab kuch hona chahiyee……….

Iss party mein who jaroor ayagee……………..

Aur kal subha ke pehle headlines……………

The great business empire head……mr msk ke choti behen ke hot shot mms……………..

Good job………….raj………………ur a rock star………..

Kitne asaani se….uss anee ………………..kobevakuuf banadiua//

Do not think…………..

She is under drugs………………………..

Geet listened………………….and shee taught she need to do something…to save the girl.

She ran fast.and she bumped with romeo….

She said something to him…

R:geet hey hamara,,,,,,,,,,,,,,kaam nahii hay…

G:romeo yesa mat karoo…yeh kisiki zindagi ke sawal hoo……..woh kisikibehen,beti.hay………………………………..

So donot forget……….

And she thinks of the plan…………………………………..

As she sees………….

A girl………in short dress….her hair is messed up.she looked like………………a completely drenched in drugs………………………

She is not in sense………………

Geet understood…………………..

But before she could reach the room……………………..

She quickly.with the help of romeo………….she got her to the back door where they generally used by the staf.f……….

As t o their luck the laundary room is empty.

She took the car keys………………

And she made her to sit in the car…………………

And brought her to the mentioned address……………….

it is the big mansion……………….km…………

she is the liitle sister of MSK…..that is………………anwesha khurana…………………………………….

A mid aged person………name nakul old servant of khurana…mansion.suprised to see a girl with his choti malkin……….

She asked the room.

She brought………………her to the room……………………

Geet quickly asked the direction of kitchen…………

She quickly made som e drink…………..and instructed nakul to mix it in water an d made her drink…….in the morning…………………………………

Part ends

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update..............maan ka gussa tanda ho gaya.............
geet has become brave..........
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awsome update.
bachari Anni...thank god geet save her.
lets see if maan n geet meets.
do continue plz.
love it.
thank u.
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Geet is in the room………

Just then…………………a car enters into the compound………………..

He came afte r the meeting…..

He went back to office to collect some files………………….

His daily routine…………he was alone after wards………..

He never attend any parties………………

He didn't enjoy any social life……………………………

Just then he found the same flower scent………………………

Same essence……………………

Her fragnance…………..oh no.maan what 's wrong with u………………u met her in the hotel.she is doing her job……………and pls take her from your dreams………………..she is following u every where…………….

Stop it maan…….

And without the second thought.he moved into the room…………………………………which is out house….he will stays………..in out house..he is alone and always like that ………………….

Geet……….looked at her watch………..

And as she move out……………………

She find taxi……………………luckly………it was her hotels…….she thanked babaji………….and at that time…………………….and she enter..and thank s romeo..as he is a true friend……………………..

He then quickly changes.

But geet mind is wandering………

How can be so irresponsible…………………………..if something happends to the girl.her life is mess……………………..

Even she didn't have any strong………….bonding with her……….being a girl………………………….

She didn't understand….and she is busy..with her work……………she came after…………long time………at the mornings………………

as soon as she is returning from her office…………….

She remembered something

Oh god how I forget.that

Geeet ur stupid……………….u know today is pinky 's birth day

She checked the time……

It was…………………..morning 9.00

And she knows that it is the time she reaches her office

Geet:yeh toh kya soch rahi hay………………..

U need to……………go to her office.and wishes her…….and come back….so simple………………..

She saw fresh flowers………………..

She pick up for her………as she know that pinky……………love flowers…but not aware of teeh fact……………………

Her boss……………………..

She is very much excited………………

At that time…………………………………

Maan is getting ready for his office………….

Anee woke up in her room…….

She is feeling dizzy……………

And she got a note…………………..

Note:hai…………..u don't know me……even idon't know u…………………\we are strangers………….but one thing…never do any thing in ur life so that others can take advantage……………………….ur………………filled with drugs………….no there must be problems………………….in ur life,,,im least person to know but one thing……………………………….if u do mistake ……………in your life……….then there is no chance of repent.because ur a girl……………………..being a girl I know……….pls follow……………..the advice….if u feel it really necessary..may be some people……….in your life..also effects it……………………

Anee reads it.and calls nakul…….

Nakul handover rthe drink……………and narrates all the story…

She slightly remembers that she had her regular dose.and she never felt dizzy.that means there is something wrong……………..

And she drank it in one gulp..and she felt better……………………………

She went to the wash room…………………………………………..

She is shocked………………….

On the other hand………………………………..

Geet is getting prepare herself for another….volcanic eruption……………………………….blow………………..

That is………………..msk…..vs geet……………………….

Geet infront of a huge building………………………….

A huge building………………..

Khurana constructions………………………………………………………..

The famous company………………………………………

She enter into the office…..witha red flowers……..in her hand…………………….in her green dress……………………………………

She is ………………………….with the cake in her hand..teh strawberry……………………………..cakes………………pinky's favourite…..

She smiled the face ……………………………..of brightness when pinky sees this………………………..

She entering in the office as everyone was watching her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

At the reception……….pinky is not there…………………………………..

And she is confused….ab mein pinky ko kaha doondooo……………she is muttering bumped with a blue……….dress girl….she fumed at her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

And geet,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,is confused………………………………………..

As she moved back………………………..

She didn't see ………the door.back……….and she slipped…………

With in fractions of seconds….

Everyone hold their breath…………on seeing………….the scene…………………….

Bang……………….bang………………..

Geet is in mid air………….

Flowers are falling from her hand……………………

On the air…with a mix of group of papers………………..

She is in hands.of a……………mascualar………………….peron holding by her waist………………………………………………

And she open her eyes…to find………………………………………….the strong……..dark brown eyes………with fire………………….volcano…………………………………….

Fb:maan is busy in the thoughts of……..his mysterious girl.hauting……..in his dreams.due to that he is 15 minutes late…………………..his client meeting……..so he came office without warning…………as often………………………………………………

He will be on time always.if it is late…………….that means he will attend client and come back………………

So he will not be in office………………………………….

But as soon a she came not noticed that there……..is agirl in green salwar………………with flowers in the hand………he did n't noticed as he is reading file……………………………….

He know this is the path……………..no one crosses it……………………………and he never expects any intruders in the office……………………………………..

With out seeing…………….

He saw she is falling

And he caught…………………………………in the right time

To find the beautiful hazzle eyes………..which is haunting him for nights and day…….

The same strange girl…………..which is making……….him impatient……….now she is back from his dreams to the reality……………………..

Mistake 1:she bought flowers in the office……………….\

Mistake 2 :she entered the office without permission…….

Everyone shocked to finda girl in ………………….msk…….hands………..

That too…………….a mysterious girl…………………….

His anger turned into fire…but still stared…………………………………….at the innocent eyes……………she is so beautiful……..

She is still staring at the dark brown eyes.which had saved her……….twicce……

The saviour………………………

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