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Posted: 14 years ago
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She knows she is falling into the life of darkness

She is at the edge………of her life

As she is going to marry a monster

Why her destiny is so cruel to her………

Why she

She is crying

And some ladies enter into the room..

To make her ready………

And take her to the temple………….

And she is ordered to fill the water in the pot.

As per the rasam……..

That will be holy water ……..and it is to pour on the wedding couple suppose………

And the water………….

And suddenly geet leg twists.

And the water……spills ……..

As to everyone 's shock…

It half fall on geet ………….

And other falls on the stranger……….who is going to the opposite direction……………………..

That is man……………………………………….

He wants to look at the direction…..

And make………………

He gets a call.

He forwards in that direction…………………………

Where as all the rasams are started……..

Geet is silently crying…

And everyone was not noticing.

Except a few pair of eyes………

They love her a lot..but cannot helpful…………………………

As they are binded……………..

Everyone was happy………

But geet is lying half dead…………..

She is not in her senses.
By that time………

A girl came in disguise

No geet.im not going to allow you to do sacrifice….

This Is because of me……..u saved me from that monster………..

But ur falling in his trap.

I had to stop this…..

This is very cruel……………………………………

Pls god.

And she bumped with a person

She is charni…..

And the person is gurvinder…..

But how it is possible.

Geet cannot escape.

As brij Is powerful person….

Guvrider……..where there is a will there is a way

Charni:god can give us idea…….

Its ok….

If she crosses the left side police barrot…….then she can go to delhi…………

And there is no point brij men can catch her…………..

But all the vehicles are checked………..

Gurvinder:I have plan

Charni:donot worry…………I will bring geet to the place.

And they feel very happy…

On the other hand,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

The person.asking something…………………

The other person.

No sir…………..i can't help

Look…nobody says no to me…….

Bcause u better know me…………..

Im MAAN SINGH KHURANA

What happens nex

Can guvinder and charni.saves..geet

Flashback

A boy……..

I hate u…………

U broke the promise

I hate u

I m going

And I promise u cannot find me

And he closed eyes in frustuation

And yelled…………

Vicky

And his promise

Beta…….pls take care of siblings…………………..

Anee and Vicky,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Pls take care'

I promise dad……………………..\

I will take care of them…………………

Pls god help me to find………………….vicky………………

Part ends

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice update. add me to ur pm list plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome update.
plz..stop this wedding.
do continue plz.
thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 7

Geet is getting ready

In a few minutes…her marriage is going to happen………………………………….

And she is in thoughts………….

She Is like a dead cell…………………….

At that time suddenly a sound from the window

Geet

Geet turned back to find charni…………………

Charni
:chalo geet..tume yeha se bhaag na hay…..guvin ne saari tayarri ki…….pls…………….

geet:yeh to kya kaha rahe hay charni.bhagne……….pata hay darji sab ko kitna badnami hogi………

charni:chatto geet….yeha tere zindagi katere men………too insaan se nahii ek khooni pyaasi………..daride se said kar rahi hay.woh tujse sirf badala lene ke liyee.shaadi kar raha hay………………………….dekh men tuje aag men khoodne ke nahii Chad sakthi hay……..dekho zindagi ne tujesaas lene ke liye ek m oka diya………………………..agar tu yeha se bhag jayagee.toh tu apna padaai kar ke apne zameen wapas kareed kar sakthi hay…………………..

geet:zameen wapas.kardena……….yeh kya .keha rahii hoo………….

Charni:haa geet.shayad tumee pata nahii……yeh zameen…………kivi ameer Adm. Ne karedaa.suna hay woh Delhi ka ………………sab se ameer Admi hay………………..

Aur haa………..

Kya…miami ne kaha.hay..ki agar mein ne rudraskh se Said karlee.toh woh zameen muje wapas degii……….

Charni:are zameen…………………………….uske bikari.kab ka ho chuki hay……………aur haa………agar mere baat ka yakeen nahii hay………..toh woh insaan abhi bhi.hp mein hay………………..

Geeet………yeh sab sochne ka waqt nahii.hay……..humne apne jaan jokat pe dalke.sirf tuje bachane ke liye…

Tere pass….sirf………………….2 gante……ka waqt hay…………..

Isse pehle tume yeha se bhagna hay…………dekho…..tume mere dres s pehenle……..jaldi se………..she closed the door………

And inside the bag…..she removed a clothe…….

And she know s in a storage room….there is a route to escape……….

She dragged geet to the store room……………

And with in the window……

The two girls made a escape……..at that time…..rajii.came into the room.calling…..geet 's name

They turned…………..

Rajji:didi aap bhag ne wale hoo…………

Charni:haa………rajji….pls..

Rajji:are charni didi……………..geet didi..ko eh kaam pehle karna hay………………….mere sweet sister……………………ko who saitaan nahii…kisis prince charming se shaadi kar nee hay……………..

And she sees her mother is coming in other direction….

And she slowly covers with red duppatta……………and ………….

Charni.and………….geet moves into the storage room………..

Where geet s completely covered ……………herself with duppatta.and her dress.is churni……color…………

So it is hardly anyone recognizes her………………

She covered bcause her mehendi………….may create havoc……

That is the reason.

Gurvi:geet and charni…………hhumyeha tak tere madad kar sakthe hya…………………

Abhi.shaam ko 6 baje ho rahi hay…

Bus pe toh nahii jasakthi hay………….

Ek truck hamesha………..santroo.ko lekar………….jaati hay……….

Tuje…usee se jaana hoga…………….

The time is running ut………………..

And geet managed to get into the truck………and other side………………………….

Brij and family found out geet is missing……

And he turned into anger……..

He wanted to kill geet…….and get rid of her.

Hp.he started roaming into the jeep..

Geet look at the jeep……………..

She is terrified……………………

she donotknow what to do………………………………..and at that time…………………………she almost caught……………..at that time……………………………

brij jeep and truck……………….

The mandir bells ring…………..

And suddenly a jeep comes in between………..them……………………..

He is maan…………………………

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Next part

Geet is confused………………….

And suddenly the jeep stops the truck……and everyone starts ………………………..searching………..

But they didn't find anything……even the person is surprised……….he knows that there is a girl in their truck……he is managed…………………….but he feels relaxed and also worried where the girl is…….

As anyone hardly knows where geet is….

She already……………ran from the truck………as the truck stopped and she saw brij and his men………….

She quickly jumped and run into the bushes……

She is running……….

She donot know……………..at that time she reached the dabaa……

And some weird people looking ather ………..

She sensed the danger.and run from there…………………

And suddenly she caught by some people.

She start running…..and bumped with a thing…..

Later on she realized that it is not a thing it is a person……………………..and the person is not reacting…………………………

He is disturbing mood………….

And she start running away from them……………….

And suddenly the person realized something and he start running after her……………..

And the people running at them…………………..

The person…….starts yeh uu stop………….

But geet is no mood to stop…..

She turned to find the person is open his jacket………………………

And she moved back

The person asked to stop…………………

She is running………until she reached the edge……………..

And she suddenly she fall in water…….and he too jumped in water and caught hold of her…………………

She lost consciousness …………………………….

Flash back….

Maan jeep stop at the mid point…..

He came to dabba…………..to get some water for his jeep…………

He suddenly bumped with geet…………

But geet hugged him tightly.due to this her chair stucked with…………..his chain………….

And it went with her…………………………

When he realized that his chain was missing

It is the chain where his mother and father last thing with him.……………….photo in it……………..it is with him always……………………….

He wants his chain back…….

He ran after her……..

But geet thought he is also……………member of the gang…..

So she start running…….and edge fall into the water……….

Maan lifted the girl…………..

He carried…..out………

Wow what a trouble.

When his jeep stopped…………..he checked the engine.it is so hot………………

He is……………so angry..he is on fire.

He saw dabaa……

He asked for water…..but the person is so rude……….he told him totake water.from the pond nearby…….

He went to the side

Suddenly he bumped with a girl……….which is running in a ramdom direction……………..

This jerk made him to leave the can…………in his hands……….

She hugged him so tightly……………………

His chain strucked with her chain………….and he asked her to stop…………..but she didn't …………………

he saw she is edge of the pond…..and exactly that is happened what he expected…………………

she falled in water………………………………..

and he lifted her up….and saw her lost senses……….

He is confused……..

So he get back to the jeep……..

He open the kit………….

And carry his stuff…and prepared a tent and also

And carried her to the tent…………..

To make her warm…………………..

He didn't see her face……..

As geet is altime covered herself with long dupatta………

He could see her eyes………………….

And he turned back to find her eyes……………………they are so bright………………………………………………………

He wanted to see her face in light…..but brushed off his thoughts……………hecame back to his senses…………………………

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awsome part.
cant wait for the nxt part.,
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He came back to the senses…………………………………

And another second…………………………….

He is still………

He checked…………….the pulse…it is dropping down……..he came out…………..

As it is going to be morning……………

He lifted her and drove back to the hut……………..

He called for help………………………….a person open the door…………………………………….

The person welcomes in…………..

He checks the girl.and gives him some medicines………………………………………………

He tooks her and brought to the big mansion……………………………………..

With a name……….written………..it is khurana…..mansion………………………

He enters and with a carrying ………………..into his out house……………………………………

As he puts her in the bed………………………

Winds blows and duppatta on her head………….flows and

He shocked to see the face………..

The most innocent face…..he ever seen………………her white face like a moon light

He brushed off the thoughts…….no maan there is no place for u for girls….these innocent face and innocent looks destroy…………………….the life…………………………..

And he moved intothe room…………………………

Geet open the eyes…………….

Tofind in avery big room.she is little dazzy…..and ……….she looked at her dress..it is messed up……..

Next day morning………….

Maan singh khurana……….

A person with lot of attitude………do everything what ever he wants……………………….

He saved the girl…..due to humanity nothing morethan that…..

His life revolves round only one olderly lady…………………she is savitha khurana………………….

His parents died on accident………………

At the time of death..he promised that he will take care of his younger siblings………both…………..vicky and anee……………….

Vicky.his younger brother………………………..had been into wrong people……………..he is addicted to drugs.

He was into the business and work……….so he didn't pay attention…………….

Due to this anee also left him and went to………………..london.

With his one mistake ………he believed sameera………….the most dangerous woman on the earth………………………..she wanted to marry him for money………………………….

She cannot succeed……………….as maan got his plan .and he dragged her out of his life..

He stopped smiling..and he always maintaineda safe distance for girls…………………………he knows that woman are problems……

His grandmother tried her level best to agree for the marriage…but he is very much recluant……………he never want girl in his life……………………

Where ……………as……another brother.dev………………………..

He had…………………married a girl………………..in which maan unaware of the fact that she is sameera 's sister…….

He hated her for core…..as she also married his brother for property…………………..

Maan had removed them from the mansion………………………….in order to save the remaining……….property which is managed……

This created hatred for his younger brother…..to fall for evil trap…and run away from him…………

He is trying level best to……get back to him…………………………….but his trails are veins…………………..

He always upset…………he always……………….stays from his home…….

He came to find his brother…..and also…………….land deal……….for his new construction.project………

The land which belongs to geet……………………as brij and malini wanted to sell……………..

And due to this .malini managed geet to marry rudraskh…………..

She mamaged to sell……..the land………………..but cannot marry geet…..to rudraksh…………………………but she failed.as geet run away from the mandap…………………………

But u nware of the circumstances…….

The destiny planned for the both………….

As geet is life with maan………….

As both are aware of…………….

This is game………………..

Going to start……………..the new journey name life

Let us see what happens next…………………………..

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