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Dadimaa enter into th kids room

Where there are busy……………………..

He called both of them……………….

Vicky concerned hey girl friend what happened why ar u upset

Is ur health ok………………………

Please tell me girl friend

Oh no boy friend im perfect fine

But the thing is

Anee beta Vicky beta tum dono jante hoo mere tabiyat aaj kal…………………lekin beta I want all the happiness of my kids

And u know ur MB more than anyone.

I am looking a girl for him.if u both approve.

They both remembered regarding samera……………..and .

They face changed

Beta its ok.if u both approved…………….

Im thinking if geet…………………………………….

And maan.

She fumble d with words

The voice shocked both and she turned to find the smiling faces of grand children,,,,,,,as they heard worlds beautiful news……..

Oh girl friend

Ok…….we all like geet

Geet,as my bhabi.and rajji come along .

Bonus.

Oh my god………………………………….i will be ediot if I reject……………………………and anee.she is top of world……………….

But one thing………………….

Dadi first we need to do some clarifications an d tests then we can go for conclusions

For that we need ur help.

Ok dadi lets us plan……………………..

Maan enter KM.he is still inthougths geet thinks of him…

And he.

Not knowing the curious faces looking at him,,

Dadi winked at Vicky..and anee

And she started

No Vicky means no.how many times I told u to not to waste on these and concentrate on studies……………….

She said in a huge tone shocked maan,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He looked at the puppy face…made by Vicky and anee,.

What s wrong…………

Its ok he can enjoy some time………………………

Bhai……I want to go for farmhouse for picnic……………..

Picnic………

He looked at dadi………………

U guys play and enjoy but I didn't have one to company……

Then I had a solution..

Anee said……………..

Why can't we take geet and rajji along with us

Vicky me.and even arjun also accompany us……………………….as there are fields belong sto him……….

I and arjun ……Vicky and rajji will have.

And geet will company to dadimaaa………..

She said a matter of fact

The name geet……………shocked maan …lifted his head……………..and a small twinkle.noticed by all but behaved a s nothing is happened

And geet she will be alone na………….

Vicky popped in………………………………to look the face of his elder who lost in his own world……………

But maan bhai……………he is not in a mood to leave

Don't worry adi will come

The n pinky also come along with us…………………………………

Maan said in………….a line

So ………………………

Maan top of the world the thought of geet 24 hours with him.not a bad idea

work assigned to adi………..

and pinky busy with…………………dadi……………………………………….

And he an d geet……………….

Dadi smiled the thoughts of her grandson…………………………..

Thinking how resemble her husband……………………………….

She pick the phone

To make agree her future grand daughter in law for so called house picnic…………….

But dadi had different plans

Maan u know what happened in previous days it is not good

And I don't want geet to get pressurized…………………………so if u can call geet and ask her to accompain her………….with us.

With that……………………she lef the dinning table giving a imaginary hi fi to other grand children,

After some time.

In maan's room

He resemb le a young teaneger going to propose his girl friend first time,.

He is pacing round

Dadi and gang……………looking at him

Maan what the problem….call her the second maan popped out

Look im already in trouble don'tput me I n get out…..from here.

Dadi and gang looked a tmaan and wondered whom is talking to………………………

Maan 2 not mood to leave

U know u want to talk to u

Want to hear her beautiful voice

Maan blushed………..

Dadi and gang shocked to the core

Dadi did u see……………………maan bhai is blushing

Shut up monkey we can se e that

They start fighting

Dadi told them to shut up in msk style…………..

Where the convo is still goingon

Come on maan pick up the phone……………………..and call her………………and aske her to come to farmhouse for picnic…………………………..simple

Ye s maan as simple as that ……………………….

Hetook a deep breath…..and di dsome excersise like he is going to give speech.

Then with nervousness he dialed the number……………………….

But unfortunate to him the phone lift by………………………his saali..

Hello……………………….

As the voice startled he accidently switch the speaker phone

He muttered dam………….

The other voice little bit high…………….hello……..

As he about to cut the phone the other sound………………….kaun hay rajji………………..

The voice……he loved the most the sweet.music to his ears.

Kaun hay rajji iss waqt……….aur to ab tak apnaa khana katam kyon nahi kiya…phir se who movie………………..kitni baarkaha hay,.ke khana katee waqt kisi aur par dyan mat dena………..

Ab chup kyon hoo hamesha chitar patar kathi hay,..

Uffo di…………break.dijeye………………………………………lagtha hay apka dimak kahii aur hay koya koya saa……………..

Nahit toh mein toh khana pehle hi katam kiya tha…….aurTV toh band hay………………………….

Di kal se aap parishaan hoo.sab teek ho na…………………..

She fumbled…………haa rajji.lekin tum phone yesinkyon………….pakdi huwee hay

Pata nahii koi awaaz nahii arahi hayu 2 baar baj chuke hay………..lekin awaaz nahii ararahi hay

Ok mein dekhte hoo………

As she took thebphone

Geet its me……..

Maan voice startled

Sir aap………………………….

Haa geet who muje tujse ek baat karne hay…

Jee sir sheis busy in hide her nervousness,

Maan smiled prob she ………….fidging her dupatta end……..

He smiled.

Who geet dadi Vicky anee sab chahtee hay ke tum aur rajji………………….

Hamere saath………………picnic ke liye farm house chalogi.toh ….

Toh……………….

Dadimaa aur sab ko achaaa lagegaa.

Satyanaash ho yeh tere.

Dadimaa Vicky anee shaadi karegaa use yaa tu

Tujse kuch nahii ho saktha ……………..

Geet shocked .

Maan sir asking her to accompany

She thought it is good occasion to share his problem.

Ok sir…

Iwill come along with rajji………………

She is completely lost………………………..

Maan put his phone down and close his eyes

Maan u need to do something before things out of control and this heart makes u crazy…………………………

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awesome update...
really loved it...maan sooo cute baby...
thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...
waiting fr nxt prt...
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Lovely Update
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Next day morning

Nakul came down running from stairs as he had seen a ghost………………………………

Dadimaa and gang got worried

Nakul kya huwa tum kyon gabrahe hoo.

Who dadimaa mein ne maan baba ke kamre mein

Kya maan

Kya huwa hay usko

They rushed to be shocked the sight of the room…

All clothes are shattered on the bed…………………

And maan is like a teenager looking out at his clothes for his first date…………………………..

He is busy in throwin g clothes

Where dadi and gang guessed as he is going to pick geet and rajji as it is Sunday…………………………………………………………

He is selecting dress to make presentable

But cannot find one he never gone for shopping and never paid any visit

Is the same maan..he looked at himself in the mirror

The day remembered when he met geet.

Her lovely eyes in pain

Her tremble seeing him…..

He closed his eyes to cherish the moment……………..and thanked god for sending geet into his life

Making his dream come true…………………………………………………..

And he remembered worrying for her..

And next day she came to office with flowers and cake how flowers and papers flow on her……………….

Their moments at dabaa..everything…………………………………………

He got a call.

On seeing it he flashed a beautiful charming smile

Thank u so much veer im expecting such a good news from u………….

With that he left to the house

When he reached the apartment all are looking at him……………….

Ofcourse he dressed in casuals.with first two buttons open

And his chalised body making him look hot.

The door open to find rajji ……………………..looking at him.

Ar e aap andar ayeeyee…………….sir………

Call me Maan jiju………(in mind) but said only maan……..these two girls had ahabbit of calling sir…………. Rajji he said casually

Ji maan ji……………aap mujse badi hay

Conventional answer from rajji

Helost when he sw geet in white dress.looking not less than a angel.

Then rajji looked at maan who is lost in her

Maan jiju……………………smiled and said maan ji chale…………………..

And they left the place.

As rajji sit along with him

Geet on back and maan is looking at geet……stoling glancing and holding his jumping heart want to come out.

They reached……………….Km.where all set for party.

Rajji and Vicky sat along with pinky………………where adi is about to accompain…….maan.in the front seat

Vicky stopped and said.

Are adi sir why won't u sit along with..pinky……………………..

The terror he cannot risk to sit beside………………..the great MSK

He quickly slided to next seat to his dream………….girl pinky

Where .geet has no option to sit with himin the next seat……………..

She sit bowing her head down………………………………

Seeing the …………………….floor of the jeep.

Why she is so much interested.on the jeep floor not on him……………..

All the four at the back enjoying.

Where suddenly arjun came and anee jumped on his bike…………………………

Maan looked at them as they warned

Geet stopped him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

What.

Sir please don't get angry.due to arjun anee is back

What.

Yes……………………………….when I got know about anee she blabbered on that night that she is alone when Vicky is not with her and at the same time she also lost arjun friendship………so she start drugs

I met arjun a the college……………he told everything

He likes anee but cannot stand her with drugs

I told him to continue his friendship as it gives her strength to fight with the bad habits.

So he played the friend role .to bring anee back………………

Sir….i know u don't believe people easily……………………

But still sir………

Sometimes………………..we can believe……….someone…..who can be stranger………………………………………….sometimes can change our lifes the n arjun is anees c hild hood friend.

Maan smiled…………

And moved closer to her……….

Geet trembled want to move back but he trapped.her and pulled her and whispered in her ear

I believe u……………so no need explinations geet he said so husky voice causing geet to tremble

She lost for sometime then came back to senses

Where maan smirked………..

And gave a look a t Vicky who is busy with rajji and adi with pinky………………..

He smiled.

And they reached the farm house.

And geet setted dadimaas room.

Everyone were happy.

Adi and pinky working as maan giving them instructions……………

Are kaha bagoogi……….i will catch u,,,

Trio lookeda thte sounds.where geet and rajji running after arabbit.

And finally.geet catched it and kissed him.

Maan felt jealous of the animal.

It got what he wanted the most

He remembered when he bend on her

It took all his self control to hold back the trembling lips inviting to touch by his.

Oh sweet torture …………..

He is lost.

Didi aap ne use pakad liye……………………….

Both are panting,

Vicky lost in rajji…………………….who is busy in pampered the rabbit.

Now he is also jealous with that poor animal…..getting lot of attention………………..

After some time he is reading some file

Where the jealous animal enter to his roomfor hideout

Where his angel came and running after that.

She got scared as her puchii(the name kept for the rabbit by both girls)

Puchii.not knowing that she enter the lion' den

It spill the coffee on the table and even destroyed the file.

Where maan got angry

Before he do something

Geet covered it and hushed it outside

Sorry sir.woh galti se.she is blabbering

Maan smirked…and got opportunity to take revenge…………………………

And as geet about to move.

He start walking towards her

By that time the puchii jumped out of the window.giving the hero and heroine some privacy.

They continue their walking…………….

As geet is cornered………………………….

And he put two hands side of the wall making her trapped ..

And u wan tthat I leave the animal which spoiled my coffee and file…………………..

Who sir.she is trembling not knowing that fear or his close.encounter……………………………………………….

Sir……………………

She bowed her head down

And he lifted the chin……………to see the beautiful……………eyes…………………

And said

Instead of animal I feel u need to be punished………..

She looked him wide eyes…………………………..

He bend his head………………………and whispered inears

And ur punishment is………………………….and he lifted his sexy fingers brushed on her cheek making her shivering with his touch…………….

And he bend……..and kissed her cheeks……………………………

She caught hold of her kurthi…………………………………..with her trembling hands

She want to lift her hands

But maan caught it right time and kissed her other cheeks….

He is was so lost in her………..

The soft cheeks against her lips.the taste of heaven…………………………….

After sometime he left her as the color of her cheeks is deep shade of red of shame………………..

And she runned leaving him enjoy the bliss.

His heart realived the jealous prang………………….from him ……………………………….

And he won against the animal……………………………………..

A smile curved his lips and touch his tips…………………………and close his eyes………………………

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