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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet closed her eyes

She boarded the bus…………..

Her mind shifted to flash back……….

A 8 yrs old girl running after a 6 yrs old girl.

Rajji ruk………yesi bagoogi…..mein tume pakad lungi…………………

No di aap muje pakad nahii sakthi hay………………

At that time…….they saw some people surrounded by their house

Saw their parents laid down…………………….

Soon their life changed and they are brought to……………………handa haveli and their life changed.

She always take care of rajji as a father and mother

And she cannot afford to…………loose her ………………

Tears flowing from her eyes…………..

As she about to get down the bus.

Some guys spotted her

Are yehto wahi ladki.hame kuch karne hay………………………………

And he called someone.

As geet felt some body following her

As the person going to caught her hand…………………..

Within a swing.

A strong hand on her waist and a hand on her mouth…………………

And the dragged to the corner………………………

Words stucked at her mouth.

As she about to scream………………..

Stopped the strong intense eyes……………infront of her

He slowly removed the hand…..

And she wisperedmaan aap yeha

But his concentration on the people finding them

'he slowly dragged to the car.

She started .saying

Sir…………..maan sir……yeh aap kya kar rahe hay………………………..

Shh.

Chalo mere saath………………….and he started the car.

And parked at the outskirts…..

Sir kaha jaa rahe hum………….

Sir…mein apse………

Geet hum delhi wapas jayengee………………………

Sir……………….

Muje yeha se……………kahi nahii jaana……………..kyonki………..

Muje…………yeha ek jarori kaam hay

Dekhoo……………

Muje tujse behes karke apne time waste nahii karne hay

Suno tum mere I mean dadimaa…………..ke responsibility hoo……………………………..

Isliye mein tere jaan…………katre mein dalsaktha.aur waisebhi……………………………

Sir.mere baat sun lijeye

Nahii sir mein apke saath nahii aa saktha …………………………………………………

Please sir……………

But he is not bulging………………….

Sir.muje mere behen ko bachana hayh

Mere wajah se who musibat mein hya aur mein apnemaa buaji se wada kiya hay ke marde dam tak uske raksha karungi…………………..

Aur mere behen ke alaw mere iss duniya mein koi nahii hay.us ke saheli ne bataya hay ke who wahi karne jaara hay.jo……..unoo ne……….mere saath kiyaa.hay.

She is blabbering………………..

But maan is not listening.

But at that time.suddenly a young man called geet.

Geet turned to find……………..guruvindar……………………….

The Punjabi person came front……………………

Guruvindar tum.yeha.

Geet ek dost ne tuje dekha.aur pata chala ke tum yeha hoo

Who unlogo ka peeche kar raha tha.

Lekin tu achanak…………………..gayab ho gayee thi.is liye mein ne tume bachane.yeha agaya……….

Chal yeha se………

Nahii guruvindar muje rajji ko bachana hay.

Tu uske tension mat lena

Kaise na leloo.maa bauji ke baad rajji mera sab kuch hay.

Agar use kuch hogayaa toh mein kabhi kudh ko maaf kiya.

Usdin mein akele jaakar…galti kee hay…………….muje use……………….bhi apne saath…………………

Nahii geet.tension mat lena mein ne ek admi ko handa haveli mein rakha hay

Lekin geet yeh kaun hay

Guruvindar yeh mere boss maan sir hay

Aur maan sir yeh guruvindar hay………mere dost………………..

Maan didn't like geet with someother person…………………

He felt jealous

And they enter into a house

When a lady around 19 yrs……………………came there

And geet hug her……….calling channi…………………..

And maan felt relif as guruvindar…introduced his wife………………….

And they chatted.

And maan is stucked .

Next day morning.

He woke up from a bed………………..

And saw geet is sleeping in the other small bed.

Her dupatta is flowing.

A smile crossed his lips…………………

He felt what is there in this girl.

At first she behaves like a small kid playing in rain.and playing with kids………sand another time she will be extra careful with dadimaa health and do lot of mischief things with………………..vicky and anee……………………….and he remembering crying little baby for her sister……………….

He smiled…………………………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update...
hope soon they escape with raji...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... loved last 2 updates ...

continue soon ...
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Geet is tensed as she is moving to the haveli….

A tear escaped her eyes

When she saw the store room……………………………………

Suddenly she hugged maan.

Maan felt bad for that girl………………………………………

Then he looked at a older person with a stickin hand………………………

He is saying something to other person.

At that time a weird person came followed by group of people.

Kya who ladkiyeha kya karne aye hay

Pehle ghar se bhak kar usne hamara izzaat ke saath…………khele thil

Us din tume us ladki ko marne thi

Maan remembered the person he is the same after geet.

He did lot to hide geet….

They are after geet to kill.

Are they really humans.

He turned to the side to find geet is missing………………….

And a weird lady

She is manali wife of brij…………………

He is roaming around. Insearch of geet.

Suddenly he saw geet hugging someone…………..

A girl around 16 yr old……………………….

She is pretty enough

Maan feel she is geet sister.

He made a sound.

Geet turned .

Sir aap yeha.

Mein ne apse kaha tha ke mere peech mat karne ka…..

U didn't left me other option………………………

As she contd to speak.

He came closer and close her mouth with one ha nd and dragged her to the corner which is dark……………………………'geet lost I n his eyes..

Where a srajji stood there knowin g what is happening.around there…………………………………………..

Geet di with this person.

And with in a second .maan dragged geet along with rajji to the next room.

He quickly glanced and he found a window……………….

Sir what are doing……………………………..

Geet asked in wishpers,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Geet if one word u spoke…I will tie ur mouth with ur own duppatta…………………………….

Geet looked at him ins hock know his capabilities of doing so.where rajji look a thim in horror.

And he throw some things down……..

Geet and rajji………………..looked at him not knowing………wha t he is doing.

Rajji…didi who is he.is he helping us or creating trouble…what happpedns…………….if everyone……………………..knows.and all ar e after us………

What we should supposed to do know

Geet not knowing to be happened……

She also looked at rajji in shock…………………

As the sounds in creased all start running to the direction…………………..

Mean time maan dragged geet and rajji out of theroom to the hall…………………………

As the malini trying to stop he pushed her rougly and left the haveli holding geet where geet holding rajji.

And he quickly made them to sit in the car.

And crossed the haveli with out glancing backwards……………………………..

Geet looked at him.

He is not paying any attention.

He need to go to back route there the security will be no where seen..

While dialing.

He quickly dialed adi's number

By that time adi was busy in his fantasy dreamy world with pinky with him………………..

Broke out and seeing the number ……………..he feared.and quickly answered.the phone…………………

Sir………..

Adi mera baat dyan se suno…mein iswaqt hp mein huu.aur ha.

Yeha pe security ka probl hay.tum yeha ke chief se baat karo aur clearly instruct to leave my way if it is required talk to………………..commissioner immediately.

Sir and one m orething.

Inform them that im alone…………………………..

Tha tis particular……………………

Any m istake make them clear that I will drag them to the hell………………………………………..

Hope it is clear.

Now any prob call me……….ok.

Ok sir………………..

Si rar e u alone.

Shut up adi dare to aske me any questions.

He barked on.

Rajji horrified……………….

Geet looked at him…..she is well aware of his tem per.

After sometime.

As per maan singh khurana's instructions.everything is clear.and they are their way to delhi.

He turned to lookback the girls.which ar ecompetely engrossed in sleep.

Both are cute………….

Rajji didn't have same eyes…………but resembles geet……………………………………

He smiled.

No one can be duplicate to geet ha nda.

One geet handa is enough for him……………………………

He smirked forhis thought………………………………

Just gave a look.

He saw geet face it is like tension is relived.

She hugged rajji as if she leaves she may run…………..he smiled for his thought.

Why this pagal ladki make things difficult for him always………………………

He never dare to enter any house without permission.

He even snapped into her haveli.and made a escape plan for them………….

Oh this girl.is definetly something.

But doing something for her make s feel so relaxed

He just cannot stand tears on the hazzle brown eye.s…..he loves them to smile………………………

Shy………………………….fear…………………………helpless…………………..cherriness…………………………blim in happiness…………….but not…………….with tears………………………………………

It cause s him pain.

Because she is the girl m ake his morning beautiful………..her smile.her mistakes…..her presence always feel different…………

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maan took away geet n rajji with him
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Posted: 14 years ago
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They reached haveli

And he bend to…………………………geet.to wake

Geet woke up in a jerk.

He bend his head .and told……………got into outhouse before everyone wakes up and ask lot of questions……………………………………….

She looked at him.

And took rajji to the outhouse

As she muttered thanks………………………to turn find him walking into the mansion……………………………..

Next day morning

Vicky woke up.

He stretched his hands and came out of balcony.to find her……………

Is she is really there…………….yaar im dreaming………………………….

But what is a beautiful dream.

She is so cute.

Just then geet called rajji……………………..

She turned back…………..

Is she real………………………

She ran back to out house…………………

It is geet 's voice………………I can dream geetinto it;that means she is real…………………..

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They reached haveli

And he bend to…………………………geet.to wake

Geet woke up in a jerk.

He bend his head .and told……………got into outhouse before everyone wakes up and ask lot of questions……………………………………….

She looked at him.

And took rajji to the outhouse

As she muttered thanks………………………to turn find him walking into the mansion……………………………..

Next day morning

Vicky woke up.

He stretched his hands and came out of balcony.to find her……………

Is she is really there…………….yaar im dreaming………………………….

But what is a beautiful dream.

She is so cute.

Just then geet called rajji……………………..

She turned back…………..

Is she real………………………

She ran back to out house…………………

It is geet 's voice………………I can dream geetinto it;that means she is real…………………..

He ran and bumped with maan,

Vicky are u alright

Yes bro…imean…………………no………….

Vicky ur health is ok.

But he is still looking at outhouse.

Next day morning……………….

Geet ente r into mansion greeted by .dadimaa………………..

Soon after……………………..rajji also enter

Dadimaa:looked at rajji.

Geet:dadi……………….yeh rajji hay mere choti behen……...HP mein aye hay………..aur who kya use yeha rak sakthi hoo……..

Dadi:are beta…………..ismein pooche nae wali nbaat hay…………………………..

Rajji greeted dadi…………………..

Dadi liked rajji………………………….

And anee came and talk to rajji……………….

The both sisters are like majic.

Where dadi found Vicky staring at rajjio.rajji instantly looked at him

Are didi……………….

She whispered.

Haa arajji.

Yeh to wahi hay na…………………………..

Haa rajji……………….

Lekin didi.

Yeh maan sir ke chote bhai hay…………………………………………….

Acchaa……………………………………

Haa.she nodded her head.

Rajji tere admission.aur tere certificates sab kuch…………

Uske tension mat lena didi.mein pehle se hi namrata ke pass bej diya tha……………………

Who rajji achaa kaam kiya hay……………

Didi………………………………….

I missed u……….

I missed u too.pagli.mein toh yehi hoo…….lekin mere jaan tere pass hay ab to darr mat yeha hum suraskhit hay.aur maan sir dadimaa anee Vicky sabbahut acchee hay……….too tension mat lena………………………….

Aur yeh ankhoon mein bade bade.aasoon………………nahii.teek hay…….ha

Aur apke ankhoon ka boondein who ansoon nahii hay………..

Rajii.tu aaj kal bahut baate kar rahi hay.too rukh.

And they both start running……………………………

Waise mere pass iska illaz hay…

Geet:achha kya hay…………………………………

Rajji:smiled jadoo ke jappi………………….

Geet achhaa.and they hugged with each othere…………………………………

Two people watching them in awe………………………………with two windows……………

Maan is looking at geet………………….

Where as Vicky is staring at rajji………………….

Beautiful na.anee looked at Vicky

Without looking at her.and said yes…………………

Anee turned to Vicky looking at rajji……………

Oye kaha ko gayee haool

Pata nahii kya hogaya hay mere bhai ko……………………………..

She smiled………………..

Next day morning……………………………………………

Hello everyone………………………………

Maan looked at him,

On occasion of new project success………………………………………..there is party at XXX hotel……so get ready for all…………………………………..

With that he leave for office…………………..

Rajji .didi college………………

Don't worry I will drop u…………………

Geet are u going any where beta….

Haa dadi who rajji ke admission ke liye……….

Admission …………………

Ha dadi……………………………………..

Who mere tarah distance pe nahii balki regular karna chahteee hay……………

Iska formalities poori karnee hah

Beta agar fee kuch chayee rahega toh……………………..

Nahii didi.uske zarorat shayad nahii padega….dadi

Kyonki daadi………………………..mere tarah………………………..rajji ko full scholar ship mila hay ………………………………………………

Yeh to kushi ke baad hay beta……………………………..

And she hugged rajji.

Rajji tu chale………………deer horahe hay…..

Are tum log 2 minute ruk sakthe hay.

They turn back to find anee and Vicky…………………….standing……….

We are also going to the college……can we go together…………..

They all agreed………..

At the evening.

Maan went to meetin g,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

As he is coming from the coffee shop…………..suddenly a thing stucked…………..

He just stared and he went into…………….the shop.

With a smile he enter into the mansion……..to find her……………………..flowering plants.

He just……………………staring at her………………..

Suddenly his phone rings.

He barked on adi.

Sir all guests came sir…everyone…is waiting for u………………….

He just looked a t her………..

He just shooked the head……………………………….

And called someone……..

Geet enter into the out house to find…………….a packet on the bed.

She open to find a beautiful saree………….

She just wondered…………………………

At that time rajji enter into the house

Anee came and took rajji with here………….

Are mein party mein nahii aasakti.

At that time daadi enter into the party.

Finally ……geet enter into the party

Every one just staring at her.

And maan eyes are fix on her

She is looking wonderful.takinghis breath away…………..

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All eyes stared at her

As she is breath taking beautiful.

He looked at all others…

He burned with jelousy

Where Vicky eyes are only at rajji…………she is looking really cutein her green and red dress which is given by anee……………….

Where anees eyes glued at the door

Where she finds arjun entering into the mansion,

He gave a smile to anee………..which is completely lost in her.

At that time………………….

Suddenly music started ……………………….

All are lead to dance floor

Vicky looking at rajji………………………….

And he smiled………..

Flash back:at the college

Rajji is finding difficulty in the line as it is last day and most of the students rushing.

Just the n she found a hand on a application form………….

And she turned round to find Vicky ……reached the gate and took the form and gave it to her

She said thanks

Look .either we bumped with each other or.just a smile

Why not we talk like normal human beings which meet in normal circumstances………………..

She looked at him little bit shocked………..

He smiled.

Sorry I mean normal introduction

Hai…………..

Im vikrant singh khurana.the last sibling and twin of anwesha singh khurana……………

Im doing my grad in the same college…………..

And my hobbies are trucking and sports

And I love cricket……………

And my favourite is my girl friend that means my dadimaa………………………….

She smiled

Hai

Mein hoo……….rajwindar handa

Younger daughter of late mr mohindar handa…………………and rano handa……………………

And youngest sister of……………..Geet handa…………………………

And my hobbies are reading books………………….

And I love my sister a lot…………she is everything to me…………………………..

He smiled

And said friends………………….

She shook the hands.

Flash back ends………….

Ok as we are friends can I dance with my friend

She smiled and they danced…………

Maan is looking at geet…………….which is feeling uncomfortable with a random guy

Where as arjun and anee are completely lost in their dance

As the switch

Before anyone reach geet………………….

He caught her ha nd and she bumped in his chest

She just looked into his eyes…………………….

The song started………….

Aa ke bharloo bazuon mein

tumko hai kasam

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

Aa ki bharloo bazuon mein

tumko hai kasam

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

hoo jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

Aa ki bharloo bazuon mein

tumko hai kasam

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

kya mohabbat hai

kya nazaara hai

kal talak ye dil tha mera

ab tumhara hai

kya tamanna hai

kya ishara hai

hamne to pal pal tadap ke

pal guzaara hai

ho hamne to pal pal tadap ke

pal guzaara hai

dekho dekho na

ab karo na mujhpe yu sitam

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

hoo jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

Aa ki bharloo bazuon mein

tumko hai kasam

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

kya ladakpan hai

kya jawaani hai

ab tumhare naam saari zindagani hai

kya haqeeqat hai

kya kahaani hai

saamne mere, mere sapno ki rani hai

hoo saamne mere, mere sapno ki rani hai

ab saha na

ab saha na jaaye mujhse

doori ka ye gham

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

hoo jaan meri jaa rahi sanam

Aa ki bharloo bazuon mein

tumko hai kasam

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam[female]

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam[male]

jaan meri jaa rahi sanam[male female together]

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