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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#231

lovely update
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#232

omg.....BEAUTIFUL...UPDATE...😍TASFIA....hw beautifully u wrote by god...really feeling bad for mayank he is leaving....😭.....hop ki ALL IZ WELL.....waiting eagerly for ur next update...😊😍

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#233

loved the closeness between them.

soon everyone and specially nupur will realise her love for mayank...........

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

tasfia =(

tum ny sammy ko villan bna diya 🥺

my sammy is a roxstar

he cant do this with mayu

amazinggggggggggggg

tooo gooooooooooood

really beautifully written

just outstandinggg

hats off

loved all the scenes completely

mayu was sweeeeet

sayank scene was cute

loved sammy asking him

but what happened at the end *heart broken*

ok sorry well written

do continue soooooooooooooooooooon

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

omggggggggg sayank bond ka kya hua

sam mayank konahi samjha

mayur ko milvao

w8ing fr next part :)

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459718

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

they were so close yet so far, Okay i LOVED the song sequence...the most beautiful part of this update and the song you chose was just perfectly for them...really passionate!😳

Why did you have to seperate them seriously ?? But i despised Samrat here, he was really rude with mayank...Wish Gunjan would knock some sense into him ...😆 but i don't want samrat to be the villain of their story he was the nice one...please don't make him...the villian of MNs story!😳

But Mayank really loves Nupur, i hope he tells nupur soon enough!😳 And i think Nupur is finally sensing something for mayank within herself also....After all they are meant to be.

Superb Part Fiaaa....

Loved it!

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

Nice part

Mayur jus came close n now they will hav to go far away

Sam was too rude to Mayu

Kash Gun was there to say him the truth

It was senti n upcoming will be more senti😭😭😭

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

i feel like killing samrat now. he's right. he's andha!!!!!! he couldnt see the love! pls dont turn this into a sad f!!!!!!

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#239

oh no😭

nahiiiiii😭 comeon buddy...tum aisa nahi kar sakti

par....picture toh abhi baaki hai naa😉, i know u'll bring dem together ❤️

loved the update, and for once, hated sam😡...but uski bhi galti nahi🤔

thnx for de pm🤗

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#240

Tasfiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Oh GOD how could u do this- u cant separate my mayur
plzzzzzzzzzz mayank k nupur er theke dure jete dio na
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
anyway i loved this update
u described their feelings beautifully
GOSH myank has kissed on her neck- haye mere mayu
and nups she was feeling something special for maynk
awwwwwww mayur passionate dance was superb-------------

but i m angry on Sam
why he didnt believe myank

tasfia - i warn u dont seperate my mayur
tumi erkom korle kintu ami tomar bashai giye tulkalam kando badhiye dibo- bujheso???
fantastic update dear
u have a very good writing skill
keep it up