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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#111

short update but still its really nice..

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563295

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

the moment i started readin ur ff, i had this kind of heaviness in my heart thinkin of wat happened to nupur... i got so involved wit the story... its so heart breakin to think wat nupur has gone thru in 8 yrs... she's so cold hearted n even worse, she was never like that, she was made like that, feelings were removed out n only bitterness n hatred was filled in her....

i do hope she gets justice to watevr has been done with her... its a really serious issue potrayed in a beautiful manner... waitin wen both of them wil knw the truth n confront each other... i personally love mayank. but in this ff, i want him to suffer (emotionally ofcourse) badly....

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

WOW....

My curiosity is increasing wit each and every update....

continue soon....

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neetu

@mayurg2010

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

ufff...... yet again you touched my heart
do cont soon mehak.....
love you
bye tc
neetu.

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ishita

@chelsi

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

update was short but nice..........................continue soooooooooooon

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

mehak....👏👏👏👏😳

awesome re just awesome.......

their meetin was so unexpected.....😃

i mean nupurz condition is heart wrenching ..seriously......poor she.......her pain n reserveness.....

tab kya hoga wen she will cum to knw his truth......

n the connection they feel in each others eyes.......hmmmmmmm ....

n d way u write.....👏👏👏😳😃😆

m lovin this ff to d core*(as usual).......waiting for the nxt update😃,,,,..............n me really greedy........want a long one........yeh chhota tha.....😳

tc!😊

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Wow! kinzu u did it yar! :D

u made the meetng into smthng too heart touchng to coment on!
mayank and nupur are so perfect! ufff! i hav no words! ths story is turning out to be ur best! beautifully writn! :-)

AWSOME KINZA!

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

ths is amazing ff......compltely diffrnt frm lost magic.....plz pm me

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-Symphony-

@-Symphony-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#119

i am liking the story....a lot.....😛 waiting for next update

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#120

i have a feeling mayank is going to put it all together when he finds out about their daughter...my prediction is theyll fall in love and after that when mayank finds out it was nupur he will be so guilt-ridden that hell tell her himself what he did......naina

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