MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~

Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Wait I think nupur will fall for him without realizing he's the rapist 😲
Lovely update as usual 👏

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ragini sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

i read it first time but i must say you are fantabilous writer .

.feeling extremely bad for nupur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Nice to sese Nupurs mother support her but her father died. Mayank has caused someone this much harm no wonder he is a rock now.Sometimes our life leads us to commit such acts that can never be repented regardless of how much we gravel for forgivenesses.....but then again forgiveness is the key to moving on...

Please don't make Nupur fall in love with him...before knowing he was the one who did the wrong deed. It would be a heart break for her. Poor girl has suffered so much already.

Cinderella your handling such an intense story beautifully.

Do continue soon.

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Mehak..u started a new FF😃..Fabulously written..............👏

i was horrified reading the part 1.............😲.......let it sink in first and i'll read further😆

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

promising update,Mehak. waiting for the next part.

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Wow....

Great writing....

I am gettin very curious 2 noe wats gonna happen now..

pls continue soon.....

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

wowww mehak i just read part 2 and 3 and they both are mind blowing loved them alot plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

thx alot for the pm

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rashmi

@rashmilovesArTi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

wonderful ff mehak👏
i think u r the 1st one to show mayamk in totally a different character😆
it shows how one small mistake can ruin ur entire life...mayank even after having so much of sucess still cant leave a happy life...
i really feel sad for nupur.......how she must have gone through this phase of her life
no girl will forgive such a person....but if he is really guilty then i think she should forgive him
once again superb concept dear😊

Edited by rashmirao1991 - 14 years ago

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mayur_eternal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

wow Mehak..awesome part!!
u were describing Mayur's feelings vividly...
I want Mayank to be tortured ...he shudnt be forgiven so easily by Nupur...
He shud understand the pain she went thrugh ...
pls pm me wen u update the next tym...

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496867

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

brilliant mehak👏👏👏

loved this part

aawww nupur & her parents had it tough
mayank was a jerk to have gone this way to prove himself🤢😆
love the way u are interconnecting their thoughts mehak😃

ps: the spark was very much there in mayur first meeting😛
tu aiwein tensed na ho🤗

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