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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#421

mehak i loved the ending agar main nupur ki jagh per hoti to main bhi yehi kerti awesome ending

thx alot fot the pm and plz do write more FF plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Ansha

@lovelycactus

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#422

i read your entire piece just today..... Mehak...this time you have left me speechles...

this was best of all you have written so far really....i mean you left me

inters with the last part...

awsum work..keep it up!!👍🏼

you really made me Hate mayank for the first time...

do write more soon...i am waiting....

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#423

You ended it?

NO! I seriously can't believe this! Oh gosh, this was so unexpected and so painful! Never even in my dream I had thought that this would have such an end!

OH MY GOD! That letter was so painful, and everything that happened, since I read it from prt 6, so for me it was like I was watching a beautfiul magical movie and it just ended like a tragedy.

Gosh, Mehak 🤗 Sweety, this is your best story yet, because I can understand how difficult it must be for you to write this! This was such a beautfiully heart wrenching story! And I salute you for writing this one because touching someone's heart enough to make them cry is really tough, and you did it! Hat''s off to you jaani! Love ya loads <333

And I'll always remember this story, forever!

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Sibgha

@mayur5eva

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#424

awww mehak wht u did😲ended man seriously i am in a state of shock yaar😲n mayu atemped suicide man😭seriously i was crying while reading this😭
but really u did an awesome job hatts off to u👏
a perfect ending😳
will be waiting for ur new ff😉

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#425

How cud I miss such an amazing ff??

Read it in one go n I must say tht girl u hv got talent

no wonder y u hv got d best ff writer in mjht forum

do write more n plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#426

You're always welcome Di ... Such brilliant works deserve all the appreciations ... You rock 😃

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#427

Mehak so sorry didn't got time to comment b4 but really i have no words to say to u hun
S-P-E-E-C-H-L-E-S-S Nbeautifuly written

so emotinali'm still in a shock

i wasm't expecting mayu will comit suicide

really i wish they had more sweet time

b4 getting to know their true

but too late to wish

plzzz do write onother ur magical stories

which will always melt our heart

thank u so muchhhhhh for all the pms 🤗

again sorry 4 d late comment