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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

awwww mehak ye to inni jaldi khatam hogaya gosh nupur didnt recognize him😲

well as usual awesum part luking forward when dey both realize......

love it n luv u😊

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Radha

@rads14

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#122

nice update..
loved it..
cont soon😊

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Mehakkk...why such a short update?????

OMG Mayank was about to figure out her eyes....but he did not....and she also did not recognise him or anything....

Now they will be working together..and i wonder how they will realise that they were the ones 8 years ago....who will realise first....though i feel it will be Mayank who will realise first...considering her eyes have haunted him for the past 8 years and all...and without recognising her, he realises she wont forgive anyone...and he realises that she wasnt like this before but something caused her to be like this....im just soooo curious to know how he will gain her forgiveness...Gosh Mehak...update soon...make it 2 updates a day, if you can😆😆😆

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Rabiah Samiullah

@Rabiah

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Wow.. This FF is sure the show stealer for suspense..

Part 3...
i LOVED IT.. 😛
Poor Nups.. she's been throught a lot..
I liked the way you showed their 8years and esp Nups. Suffering
Making me want Mayank to suffer more even though its clear he has felt guilt over the years..

Part 4...
SO short...
I feel so sad.. for Nups.. She is in so much pain..😭😭
I would too hate the word SORRY..😕
GOSH.. ITS STARTING TO ANNOY ME WHEN Mayank says SORRY..😡
Thats becoz i know what he did...
Overall very nice part..😃
I can't wait to read more...😍

THANKS FOR PM!!!🤗

❤️-Rabiah

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

mehak update to bohot short tha but it contained many unsaid feelings.
none of them recognized till now 😲
loving ur twist 😃
they r going to work 2gether thats gr8.eagerly waiting to know who recognize 1st.
Update soon.as u know tumhara ff ka trp bohot high 😆 😉

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459718

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Both are in so much pain, but for some reason my mind just overlooks mayanks pain?. So they will be doing a project together, which means alot of interaction...and loads of togerthness with each other. I can't wait to see whats instore for us next. And Mayank is right the girl cannot forgive anyone...and i hope she doesn't forgive easily either.

Beautiful Update Cinderella.

Sajjal

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Short one but still the Great one

Feeling so sorry for nups

hope soon they will recognize each other

Thanks for pm dear

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

KInza.. tht was such a heart wrenching update... their hearts must be aching so much.. and specially Nupur.. being a girl, I cannot imagine, what pain she must have undergone..

and for the Mayank, the pang of guilt is more than enuf to kill him....

Update fast.. I want to see what punishment Mayank gets for this.. and promise me that.. after this FF.. you will write something light, something similar to Mayank and Nupur.. Its just that I cant imagine Mayank as a rapist.. beyond my imagination..