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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

yay i was right🥳😆. I think now if they get intimate then nupur will realize its him😊
you're writing really really well. Keep up the great work🤗

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Raindrops.

@Raindrops.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

mehak the story is getting more interesting..................maybe now they finally will begin to like eachother or start trusting each other and then they might come to know about reality
well written👏

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

hey

i read all the parts in a go!!!...

wonderful n different concept...!!

wonder how they'll react after knowing bout eachother

continue soon..😊

divya

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

awesome update mehak luv u sooooooooo much for this plz cont soon

thx alot for the pm

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

mehak kahan gayi???kab karegi yar update??jaan nikal rahe hai mere....yar is time give a large update

Edited by chandraarunita - 14 years ago

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Another great part!! I really thought Mayank would figure out who Nupur was from her eyes but I guess the fact that he is not fully sure makes the story more interesting..

U have done a wonderful job portraying Nupur's character and how much the event 8 years ago had affected her...poor girl! Is she going to fall in love with him before she realizes who he is? I feel sorry for her if that is the case. I mean she has already gone thru so much.

Convo between Mayur was nice...very in character.

Looking forward to read the next part!

Thanks for the pm!!

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

mehak beautiful part !!!!

but mayur in so much pain ..............😔

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

amazing update mehak.......cant wait to read the next part........very beautifully written.

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@Jenny..

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

mehakuuuuuuuuu first of all why such a choto motu update😒

i thought that he'll will recognize her ..but they will be doing project together

looking forward to the updates..when both will remember...

anywz i'll also give chotu sa comment😆 for ur chota sa update😉(jk)

thnx alot 4 pm....keep pming 🤗

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#140

i'm really sorry mahek.. 4 readin d updates so late!
just read d part 1

gosh... mahek...
man.. meri bolti bandh kar di..
such an beautiful concept!!!
* bows my head in front of u*
terrific re!

Edited by -SupriyaluvsMN- - 14 years ago

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