MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 9

OMG Mehak...they have come face to face now....im eager to see whether they recognise each other....they are connected to the extent that the day he was arriving, she felt her hatred for him more than ever......i loved the way you inter-connect their parts......it shows the connection between them very clearly......

But i wonder how Nupur will ever forgive Mayank for what he did...because of him she has faced so many troubles....no fault of hers yet she went through so much,,and Mayank is also indirectly the cause of Nupur's father's death.....

Now im soooo eager to see what happens next...yaar why did you leave it at a cliffhanger......il keep wondering how the story will shape up now...

And yeah dear....One more thing...you are getting better and better as the stories and days go by😃 I am eager to see how you handle this story since it is a very sensitive issue....i am sure though that you will exceed expectations of your readers😃😃

Mehak,

the story is very painful..but loved it........

Awww Mehak! That was amazing...Poor Nupur lost everything..her dad also..and Mayank was benefitted of so many things..and now he realizes his mistakes :(

kinza!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
too good for words yar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! too good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
each and every scene... situation!!!!!! speechless!!!!!
beautifully writen yar! so much pain and guilt!!!!
*claps*

very well writen.........

but truly speking dis is d first time i don't nupur to forgive mayank........

Brilliant update Mehak but you stopped at such a crucial point. Mayank and Nupur have come face to face. Eagerly waiting for the next part. Thanks for the pm.

amazing part.
it was sad knowing the pain nupur went through..
waiting to read wht happens next
cont soon :)

amazingly written...................it must have been the toughest one to write...........i could actually feel nupur's pain..............i dont want her to forgive mayank😡🤢
continue soon.....................i want to read the next update now😆

Superb dear