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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
Please update soon!

I quite liked this SS..I don't think i've ever read a SS/FF revolving around an arranged marriage between Maan and Geet.

Please add me to your PM list too :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maaneet - SS

Chapter 3

Maan looked at the transparent shirt and pajamas lying on the bed, ready for him to change into. He had an idea. He picked up the shirt and handed it over to Geet.

Geet looked at the shirt confusingly.

Geet: "Kya? Pehenlo na? Why are you giving it to me?" she asked

Maan: "I'm not wearing it. You are" he said and smirked

Geet: "Okay" she said unbuttoning the shirt

Maan: "You need to wear the t-shirt. Without anything else on" he said

Geet stopped midway in unbuttoning the shirt. She looked up wide eyed at Maan, who smirked and turned his face away.

Geet: "WHAT?! Are you mad?" she said and threw the shirt back on the bed

Maan: "What? Wear it. Or... I won't eat my dinner" he said

Geet looked at Maan then looked at the shirt. She looked at the shirt for a few seconds, then picked up the shirt, and went to the washroom to change.

Maan sat down and smirked at himself in victory. He couldn't wait to see her in that shirt.

After 10 minutes, the washroom door unlocked very slowly, and out came Geet, wearing the transparant shirt. She looked down, feeling very embarrassed. She used her wet hair to cover her beetroot red cheeks.

Maan had nothing to do but stare. He just sat there. Staring at his wife. In a transparant shirt.

Maan: "Oh my ..." he mumbled to himself slowly

Maan stood up very slowly from his seat. He looked at Geet for a few minutes, then walked up to her slowly.

Maan stared deeply into the big, brown eyes. Then used his hand to move the strands of hair away from Geet's face. Geet looked up at Maan slowly.

Geet: "Can I go change now? You got your revenge" she said

Maan moved his face near her ear, and whispered...

Maan: "Not yet..." and he gently bit her earlobe

Geet closed her eyes in pleasure, but she remembered something. Something Maan told her before the wedding took place.

Maan: "You are NEVER to come close to me after this wedding. Otherwise, I swear I'll pack up my bags and leave" he said angrily.

Geet remembered those words. The words rang in her ears. She didn't want to, but she had to.

Geet pushed Maan off, leaving Maan tumbling backwards. Maan looked hurt and looked at her confusingly

Geet: "You forgot what you told me before the wedding" she said in a low voice

Maan thought she forgotten that sentence. But cleary, she hadn't. Maan now knows he loves Geet. He just doesn't know how to tell her.

Geet was thirsty. She looked at the glass of water on the table beside the bed, and picked it up. She was about to exit the room when she hit her leg on the coffee table, the glass dropped, and Geet fell.

Maan: "GEET!" he shouted and went over to her immediately

Geet: "I'm okay" she said and moved away from Maan to keep distance. She then started picking up the pieces of glass. She hurt herself yet again.

Geet: "OUCH!!" she screamed as a fresh line of blood started oozing out from the wound.

Maan: "What the hell Geet. Why don't you ever take care of yourself?" he said blowing on the wound

Geet: "Why do you care for me so much? Why is it that everytime I'm in trouble you come and save me? Huh? Why? Answer my questions" she said angrily, desperately wanting Maan to keep away from her

Maan: "I... I don't --"

Geet: "Come on then! Answer my questions? Why are you hesitating? I'm asking you Maan! There aren't 1000 Maan's in this room. Your the only one Maan! COME ON! Answer my que --"

Maan: "BECAUSE I LOVE YOU DAMN IT!!" he shouted and then looked away, realizing what he just said.

The window's magically opened, and a fresh breeze of wind started to travel around the room. The wind played with Geet's hair.

Maan was desperate to touch those strands of hair. And he did it. He tucked the strands of hair behind Geet's ear and cupped her face in his hands, and pressed his lips on Geet's lips passionately.

Geet's eyes widened. Then closed in pleasure. Geet ran her hands through Maan's hair, desperate for more.

Maan took his time exploring Geet's mouth. Every part of Geet's mouth. He was desperate for this. He finally got it.

Maan broke the kiss and both were breathing heavily. Maan felt refreshed. He felt a tingling sensation inside body. He felt relaxed. He felt relieved.

Maan: "I love you Geet" he said, gently this time. Maan looked at her swollen lips longingly. He was desperate for more, but didn't want to rush it.

Geet knew what Maan wanted, and this time, she made her move. This time, she pressed her lips on Maan's lips.

Maan was surprised by this action of Geet, but he didn't care.

After a few minutes of making out, both broke the kiss. Maan still wanted more.

Maan and Geet were about to kiss again, when they heard something. Both heard a faint screaming noise. Geet and Maan immediately knew what this was.

Geet ran up to her wardrobe and put on a pair of jeans, then wrapped a shawl around herself to keep herself warm. Then she ran off, with Maan with fear in her heart.

Maan and Geet entered Daadima's room, and there she was. Her hand was on her left side of chest, and she was panting heavily.

... A the hospital ...


Geet went up to a crying Maan, and sat beside him. She looked at Maan with sad eyes and put her hand on his shoulder.

Maan: "She was the only one I had! I lost her as well!" he said sobbing

Geet: "You've not lost her. She's still in our hearts and besides, I'm with you here right now. Your not alone" she said, a tear escaping her eye

Maan: "I wish... I wish we came to the hospital earlier. At least we could have done a heart transplant. Why does everything bad happen to only me?" he said sobbing harder

Geet: "You've forgotten i've had a past as well. I have suffered just as much as you have. I know how it feels like to not have anyone in your life. Once upon a time, I was at a stage just like you but I had to be strong. I had to look up, not look down" she said running her hand up and down Maan's back to comfort him

Maan hearing this, wiped his tears away with the back of his hand, and looked away, trying to fight the huge lump in his throat.

Geet just realized that Maan did not have anything to eat because of him being stubborn earlier on, and now this. So she decided to take Maan to the hospital canteen.

Geet took Maan by the arm and lead him down to the Canteen Maan just followed Geet, with a blank face.

Once they reached the Canteen, Geet asked Maan what he would like to eat.

Maan: "I'm not hungry" he said and then looked down to his feet

Geet heard Maan's stomach growl.

Geet: "Sure you aren't" she said and giggled. Maan smiled.

Geet ordered black coffee, and vegetable lasagne for Maan, and ordered hot chocolate, naan and dhaal for herself.

Maan and Geet sat down.

Geet started eating, but Maan just played about with his lasagne with his fork. Geet then stopped eating.

Geet: "Listen, if your not going to eat then I'm not going to eat either"

Maan: "Geet, stop being childish. Please eat something" he said

Geet: "No"

Maan: "Geet" he hissed angrily

Geet: "See, you always want your way. I'm your wife, let me have my way with you as well"

Maan: "But Geet --"

Geet: "Your going to have to move on, Maan" she said looking at Maan

Maan: "Your right. Lets have something to eat then" he said and finally took a bite of his food.

... Back in the Khurana Mansion ...

Geet and Maan had their food and arrived at the Khurana Mansion. The Mansion was empty now. There was an eery silence.

Maan and Geet stood in the hallway. Maan looked around him sadly.

Geet: "Let's go to sleep now Maan" she said breaking the silence. Her voice echoed in the room.

Maan: "It's never been like this. So quiet. You know" he said trying to fight with the lump in his throat again.

Geet: "Maan, tumhe meri kasam. You will NOT be sad anymore. You will try and be happy and just forget about all that happend just now" she said holding out her hand for Maan to make his promise

Maan: "Fine... Wait no. I can't" he said

Geet: "Maan Singh Khurana jaab faisla leta hai, tab peeche morkay nahi dehkta. Hai na?" she said

Maan: "Your right" he said and held Geets hand to secure the promise, and both headed upstairs to their bedrooms.

Precap: Sameera arrives and disaster strikes!

Sorry I haven't updated in a while. Too much homework 🤢
I know I've made the update so depressing and I know the next one will probably be depressing too, but in the end, all is well 😉
I don't have time to PM you just now because I need to go to bed. I've been so busy lately. So please don't get angry if I didn't PM you because I haven't PMed anyone yet. I will tomorrow, and also try to post a new update. Please forgive me for now.

Sameeha x

Edited by Sameeha786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Ah the precap looks interesting!
I have a feeling it's time for Geet to get a bit jealous? :P

Nice update! Can't wait for your next one. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Toh dadi is dead ryt....sorry i m bit confused.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
im so sad 😭😭😭dadi is no more wanted her to live and she and geet to pull maan's legs and live happily with them
the precap is just scary is sameera maan's ex or something else
plzzzzzzz update next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
superb one.....really loved it to core
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
great update
uhh sameera.. problem already! lol
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Brilliant Update ... Can't wait to read what is going to happen next ... Please update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
dadi died and maaneet moment interrupted
wht's with sameera now
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Poor maan lost his dadi! Nice update, plz cont soon.
Edited by chubzy - 14 years ago

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