Promise and Pyar FF#1 Part 1-310 Page1-145

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roopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#781

ya bt as maaneet confusion gets cleared u cn always add sm confusion regarding office getting 2 knw abt their marriage bt thm trying 2 hide
n ur d BESTTTTTTTT ff writer in all d ff atleast of all tht i hv read
luv ur writing soooooooooooooo mucccccchhhhhhhhh

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#782

part 246
G:(disappointed&hurt by his reply &selftalk)he is telling d truth.bt y this truth hurts me so much?in spite of knowing tht there is no place 4 me in his life,y my heart was expecting a different reply from him?(she controls her tears)
M:(he is so much hurt by her question&he lost what he is saying)aur geet,hereafter i won't introduce u as my wife 2 anyone?don't worry abt tht
G:(couldn't bear d pain caused by his words&she turns her gaze outside&cries)
M:(selftalk)geet,i thought tht u would like me.bt i'm wrong. i can't bear d pain of love 4 second time.so i must stay away from u.

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#783

oh no thy r saddddddd

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#784

Nice updates... But as u mentioned above!

Ur FF makes us laugh and smile.... Pls dont drag the emotional drama...

Continue soon!

Love

Mina

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tonyahk

@tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#785

Part 247
M:(driving)
G:(gazing outside&crying.bt suddenly she remembers maan's words 'geet, i hate ur tears'&she wipes her tears immediately)
M:(notices geet wiping her tears&he is hurt)
G:(thinking abt wht happened from d afternoon.d scenes of maan carrying her,hugging her&rubbing her arm all comes in2 her mind)
M:(selftalk)now only i decided tht i must stay away from her.bt y her tears&silence r killing me?y her pain always hurts me more than tht of my own pain?geet i can't see u in pain.whenever i try 2 stay away from u,i fail in my every attempt.geet y r u doing this 2 me?

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#786

awww meray jaanu bachay .. they're in so much pain 😭

plz keep the updates rolling in. .... u just make my day every day ... thanks alot sweetheart .... 🤗

love

Sana

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#787

Fabulous part!!!

Waiting for more!!!!

Pls write a lil more after confession though i know u wanna stop it!

But still.. for ur readers... write after confession parts as well.. Romantic updates with funny punches....

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#788

Part 248
M:(decides2bring her 2 normalcy)geet
G:...
M:geett(lil bit louder)
G:(comes outta trance)ji sir
M:geet,i'm so tired of being ur driver
G:(confused)driver?
M:haan.u only told me na our shadi was a fake one n i'm nt ur husband?
G:u too agreed it
M:teek hai chodo.now i'm nt ur boss either
G:kyun?
M:now we r nt doing office work
G:so?
M:now i'm neither ur husband nor ur boss.so i'm ur driver
G:(frustated by his meaningless talk)finally wht do u want 2 say?
M:madamji y r u yelling@ur poor driver?
G:r u kidding me?
M:haan
G:kya?
M:geet,i'm so bored.lets do something interesting
G:kya??

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#789

Part 249
M:haan geet. lets play a game
G:game?
M:haan game
G:(selftalk)hey babaji,acanak inko kya hogaya?y is talking irrelevantly?has tht injection damaged his brain?
M:geet,ab tum kya soch rahi ho?
G:kuch nai
M:teek hai.let's start d game
G:(really worried abt him &checks his temperature by touching his forehead)sir,aap teek tho hena?
M:bilkul teek nai hai geet
G:(shocked)kya hua?
M:pata nai,i'm missing tht doctor so much
G:u r missing her?
M:kyun tume koi problem hai kya?
G:y should i have a problem in tht?
M:she is such a nice person
G:haan very nice.tht is y she gave d injection 2 u

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#790

Part 250
M:geet,nw don't divert me.lets start d game
G:u r driving.don't u remember tht?how can we play?
M:geet i'm not talking abt some gymnastics.it just an oral game.we can play it while driving
G:(shocked&selftalk)ORAL GAME?hey babaji is he talking abt 'KISS'?i donno wht is going on in his brain?it's all because of tht stupid injection
M:geet let me start first(turns2her)
G:(looks@him in horror&fumbles)i don't want 2 play with u
M:bt geet this game needs 2 mouths.ab aajao
G:(moves away from him)ye kaisa game hai?mujhe acha nai lagtha hai
M:geet,if we start playing,u would love it.aajao