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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#771

awsome..love it.
iam dead laughing ..... 🤣🤣
maan cheks doc puls rate hahaha
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon

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roopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#772

i cnt stop laughing
ur just tooooooo gud in writing this ff wch is funny in all ways wch u write
frm doctor losing 2 maans hotness 2 getting injection nmaaneet acting like a honeymoon couple
luved itttttttttt

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Pickachu

@pickachu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#773

Loveeeee ur ff.

Can't stop laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Continue soonnnn.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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sommie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#774

awesome.........🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

this is for u sweety..🤗🤗🤗🤗

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namita25

@namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#775

haiiiiiiii...it was hilarious.......srsly ...you are too good....

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#776

Read all the 244 parts in one go and i must say that this is one of the most fun filled and entertaining Maaneet FF...😉

Extremely well written!👏

I simply m loving ur work!😃

Pls continue soon and make them confess soon!!!!😳

Love

Mina

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#777

it was just awseome

i control my laughter🤣🤣

maan checking doc pulse rate😆😆😆😆

hmmmm truth cannot be denied 😳😳😳😳 and make them realise soon that they meant to be together😳😳😳😳

continue soon

Edited by ambbiha - 14 years ago

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#778

Awe loved it and geet felt jealous, she also mentioned action movies, maan picked her up, held her hand and also geet hugged him so I'm content but we got s little bit more with arm rubbing lol and haha the doctor wanting to know what they're on about and awe atleast she understood their love and you have got a great sense of humour anyway great update and loved all the nok jok and the light 'romance' lol do update soon 😊

Edited by -shamima- - 14 years ago

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tonyahk

@tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#779

Part 245
M:geet, d truth can not be denied forever
G:bt d truth is tht we got married only 4 dadi's sake.hena?
M:haan geet
G:thn y u told d doc tht i'm ur wife?
M:...(selftalk)geet don't u like 2 be identified as my wife.does my words bothers u this much?
G:ji boliyena
M:geet,r u so desparate 2 know d reason y i told d doc like tht?
G:ji
M:(angry)teek hai.ab sunlo.had i told d doctor tht u r my secretary,wht would have she thought abt us?she would have mistaken tht I'm having an affair with my secretary.
to avoid such misunderstandings only, i told her tht u r my wife. now r u satisfied?

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tonyahk

@tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#780

Hi buddies,
though i started this FF as a serious short story,now a days i don't feel like writing serious scenes.when i write serious/sad scenes i myself feel like crying.i don't want all of u go through such a feeling.many of u have mentioned in ur comments tht this FF makes u laugh.such comments gives me a sense of satisfaction&smile.thanks 4 tht.
but guys sometimes sad scenes r required 2 move d story.sorry 4 tht.i'll try my level best 2 avoid such scenes

finally my plan is 2 end d story with maneet confession.i don't feel like dragging it.

so guys pl. give ur suggestions on d above.