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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 254
G:i'm trying 2 push u in horizontal direction with increased force
M:geet but d original plan was tht u should jump.don't u remember?
G:y should i jump?u r d one who was talking abt tht stupid ORAL GAME.so u should jump(pushes him further)
M:(shoughts)geet ruko varna accident ho jayga?
G:haan i know u r well versed in hitting something with ur car.nw don't talk.just jump
M:(tries2take her hands off him&slows down d car)
M:geet tum pagal hogayi kya?ab chodo
G:nai chodungi
M:geeettt!!
(d car is slightly going in a zig zag direction&maan applies d break suddenly&it stops with a jerk)

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#802

Part 255
(scene courtesy:original serial)
buddies i just love d original serial scene in which geet faints in archive room.so d following scene is mostly based on d serial)

G:(looses her balance,falls on d car dashboard&get her head hit slightly)
M:(shocked&screams)geet...geet
maan lifts geet's head¬ices tht her eyes r closed
M:(scared&worried)geet ankein kolo
G:...(still eyes closed)
M:geet ankein kolo geet(shakes her shoulders)geeth
G:...
M:geet don't do this 2 me.open ur eyes.please geet
G:...
M:geet,mujhe dar lag raha hai.ankein kolo geet
M:(takes water &sprinkles it on her face)

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#803

Part 256
G:(still eyes closed)
M:(tears in his eyes&cups her face)geet,u only said na u won't leave me unless i ask u.ab tum yesa kyun kar rahi ho?
G:(opens her eyes slowly)
M:geet(pulls her&hugs her tightly)
G:(confused&hugs him back tightly)
M:(painful voice)geet,ek pal keliye mein such much gabragaya(tightens his hug)
G:...(feels his fast beating heartbeats)
M:(let his feelings loose)geet,i will never ask u 2 leave me.mujhe akele chodakar janekelie soch bi math karna
G:(feels happy bt couldn't react.tightens d hug)
Maneet both close their eyes & find solace in their hug.

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punna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#804

ooooooooo.......looking like they are confessing soon........loved your ff........

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#805

wow nice updates..cant wait for the confession..

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#806

awww...

kia kahoon... kia likhon ... am at loss of words ...

tussi cha gaye ho !!! 🤗

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Sana

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 257
M:(releases geet from his hug&cups her face again)geet tum teek tho hena?
G:(shakes her head)ji
M:(caress her forehead)
G:(feel like crying in joy.as he hates her tears,she controls herself)
M:(kisses her forehead)
G:(closes her eyes 2 freeze d moment in her heart)
Maneet both become silent 4 sometime
G:(doesn't want 2 see him worried&starts teasing him)so finally u have started playing ur ORAL GAME.hena?
M:kya?
G:now u kissed me na
M:(embarassed)geet if u donno how 2 react 2 something thn pl. keep quiet
G:acha,tell me.how should i react 2 ur kiss?
M:geeeett!!
G:ji boliyena
M:chup

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#808

SO FINALLY THEY R ON THEIR WAY TO CONFESS...................... GOOD .........................

Edited by maansee - 14 years ago

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 258
G:(becomes silent)
M:(couldn't bear her silence&so desparate 2 hear her voice)geet kuch bolo geet
G:...
M:geet
G:...
M:tum itni chup kyun rahi ho?
G:...
M:teek hai. i'm sorry.ab apni muv kolo
G:teek hai.bt before telling me 2 keep quiet again,u think twice.varna yesa hi hoga
M:haan. ab kuch aur bolo
G:kya bolun?
M:kuch bi
G:teek hai now start d car n jump outside while it is moving
M:geet?(shoughts)
G:hey babaji(shoughts)
now only both realise tht their car is standing in d road
M:(remembers how geet pushed him 2wards d window&d sudden break he applied. becomes angry)geeeett!!!!