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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

great read all the parts in one short. loved it ...very sweet and simple. pm me too in future thanks

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Sorry i coudn't update d index in the 1st page. so here it is

INDEX
pt1-pg1, pt2-10 - pg3&4, pt11&12-pg6, Pt13-16-pg8, Pt17-20-pg9, pt21&22-pg10, Pt23&24-pg11, pt25-pg12, pt26-pg12, pt27-29-pg13, pt30-32-pg14, Pt33-40-pg-16&17, Pt41-45-pg18&19, pt-46-54-pg-21-23, Pt55-66-pg24-27,Pt67-76-pg29-31,Pt77-81-Pg34&35,Pt82-95-pg36-39,Pt96-99-pg40&41,Pt100-108-pg42&43,pt109-22-pg-45-48,Pt123-127-pg50-51,Pt128-140-pg-51-6,pt141-7-pg58-9,Pt148-55-pg-61-3,pt156-167-pg65-70,Pt168-75-pg72-74,Pt176-81-pg76-7,pt181-204-pg79-87,Pt205-11-pg91-3,pt212-20-pg95-7,Pt221-33-pg100-7,pt234-44-pg109-11

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ambbiha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

loved it

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update soon

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tonyahk

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Part-13
maan tried 2 divert his mind from geet's thoughts.he left for office.dadi tried 2 stop him bt she was too late.maan was sitting in his office.he was thinking why geet cried so much.is it just her parting with her family or something else bothers her?.he could't concentrate in office work either.he was so restless.after sometime he returned home n saw tht geet was chatting with dadi&meera.geet looked little bit relaxed n maan felt some calmness was spreading through him.
maan,geet,dadi&meera were having dinner.dadi&meera were teasing maan&geet n they both felt uncomfortable.

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Part-14

Maan's phone rang.he excused himself from dinner table.it was dev on d line.he wished maan a happy married life.maan was silent.NT&anni wanted 2 wish geet.he thought geet would feel awkward so he told them 2 talk 2 her some other day.maan was talking with dev for some more time about dev's bussiness n anni's studies.after d call when he entered his room he saw geet sleeping on d couch.

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maan who was still sitting in d balcony came out of his thoughts when rain drops fell on him.he came inside n saw geet was in sound sleep.he switched off d lights n slept on d bed.

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vrsharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Nice parts. plz update more parts

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Part-15
maan woke up early in d morning n went for workout.when he came back geet was still sleeping.he thought 2 himself,how much she sleeps n ajay's words popped into his mind "geet won't sacrifice food n sleep for anything".he smiled 2 himself n went for shower.when he came out of washroom,geet was still sleeping.it was already 8am.he decided 2 woke her up.
maan: geet.
no response from her. n he again called her lil bit loudly. geet replied "sone de, bhaiya". he couldn't believe his ears tht she just called him 'bhaiya'.he shoughted 'geeeet'.she still didn't open her eyes n replied.....

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part-16
geet replied,"bhaiya, aap kyon meri dust danav boss ki tara shought kar rahi hai?.ab chup chap jakar bhabi se boliye ki mujhe coffee chahiye"
maan was super annoyed.he patted geet's shoulder shoughting her name'geeeeeeett'
Geet jumped on d ground shockingly.
geet : sir, aap.
maan: haan mein.
she was still drowsy n asked him 'aap meri kamare mein kya kar rahe hain?'
maan:(surprised n asked her)'tumahri kamare?
geet:haan.
maan:achha.now pl. don't tell me u have amnesia.
geet:??
maan: mein maan hun, tum geet hun n unfortunately y'day we got married tht is why u r sleeping in my room.