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manesha76

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Very nice FF , but please write little more , they are tooo short .

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

hahaha great parts lol

Why are they so short though lol
continue soon!

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tonyahk

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Part-17
Geet came 2 her senses.
geet:hai babaji! ye maine kya kiya? itni badi bath boolgayi ki ek dust danav ke sath kal meri shadi hogayi.(she couldn't believe tht she said it loudly)
maan: geeeeeeeeet!
geet:sir,kya aapko 'e' bohat pasand hai?
maan:???
geet:kan kolkar sunlegiye.mera nam geet hai.sirf do 'e' hai.aap kyon infinite 'e' bol rahe hai?
maan:chup bilkul chup.it is already 8.30am.ab tumara bak bak ban karo n thayar ho jao.hum log office jana hai.
geet:kya 8.30am?why didn't u wake me up early.
maan:(went into MSK attitude)i am neither ur servant nor u'r real husband. samji tum?

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part-18
maan cursed himself in his mind for saying 'i am nt ur real husband'.bt geet doesn't seem to care.
geet:hey babaji! ab dadima mere bare me kya sochega?
maan:kya sochega matlab?
geet:kal rat hamara suhag...geet realised wht she was talking n closed her mouth with her hands.she couldn't face him.
both felt embarassed n maan went outside thinking 2 himself 'ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi'.
geet was still in statue mode n scold herself.
geet: geet! tum bina, aajkal bohat bol rahe hain.
she started 2 getting ready for office. wheh she came downstair she saw him reading newspaper....

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Nikky

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey hey add me to ur PM list!!! good going.. keep up the great work

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part-19
geet was so embarassed 2 go before him.she was thinking 2 herself 'geet putar,in khurana mansion(KM) ur 1st day(she was in so much tension tht she forgot tht it is her 2nd day in KM.poor geet) itself started with so much embarassment.pata nahi,mein aur kya kya face karna padega?' dadi's words brought her back 2 her senses.
dadi:(teased geet) beta,y r u starring maan like this?
geet:(geet more embarassed) dadima wo...
dadima:(smiled) ab jayiye n call maan for breakfast.
geet:ji dadima.
geet:babaji! aap mere sath kya kar rahe hain?
she gathered courage n went 2 maan.
geet:suniye sir!

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ramahesh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

it really chooo sweetttttttttttttt

update soon......

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Maan didn't reply.
geet:dadima is calling u for breakfast.
maan:hmmm.(he didn't remove his gaze from newspaper)
geet was still standing there.
maan: y r u still here? do u want me 2 escort u 2 d dining table?(he asked sarcastically)
geet:(embarassed) nahi
maan:nahi na. ab jaao(shoughted)
geet left n he shook his head n followed her.

all r at d breakfast table except meera.
geet:dadima,meera kahan hai?
dadi:she left early morning.
geet:wo bi chali gayi.ab me kya karu?
dadi:aap ko paas to maan hain na?
geet embarassed(poor geet. 2day is definitely not her day)
maan choked food.
geet:babaji

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part-20
he didn't reply
geet:dadima is calling u for breakfast
maan:hmmm.(he didn't remove his gaze from newspaper)
geet was still standing there
maan: y r u still here? do u want me 2 escort u 2 d dining table?(he asked sarcastically)
geet:(embarassed) nahi
maan:nahi na. ab jaao(shoughted)
geet left n he shook his head n followed her

all r at d breakfast table except meera
geet:dadima,meera kahan hai?
dadi:she left early morning.
geet:wo bi chali gayi.ab me kya karu?
dadi:aap ko paas to maan hain na?
geet embarassed(poor geet. 2day is definitely not her day)
maan choked food.
geet:babaji