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Posted: 14 years ago
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i just read ur ff...............its awesome.....
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omg i just love ur ff.................plzzz cont soon n pm me on d next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you guys for commenting.Glad you like it.I had a ques. for u guys.They aired the first Misha-Shaurya interaction today.Personally,i really liked it.I was wondering if I should cont. Misha's track with Raj singh Arora as Sid or Gautam Gulati as Shaurya,Vanshika's bro.Plsss.....Tell me your views.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loved their chemistry in remix............................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmmm i also like shaurya.hey btw i have joined to ur ff fanlist...its so diff frm others can u plz add me in ur ff pm list.......loved it.........seriously entwined livies they r ......:)
Luv,
Sups.!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 10

Angry girls vs angry lions

They turn around to see another guy who was, as Panchi had said...HOT.Even Misha was a bit taken up by him.

Panchi:No wonder thand ke mausam mein sweaters ki zaroorat nahin.Atmosphere ki tab se natural heating jo ho rahi hai.

Pia:You are so right.

Danish:Hey!!!What do you mean by that Panchi?

Panchi:Tum to mujhse bat mat karo.Pehle humari date cancel ki, aur phir new girl ke saath flirt kar rahe ho.Hum girls ne tum sab ko boycott karne ka decision liya hai.Jab tak tumhe meri value nahin ati,tab tak mujhse baat mat karna.(Stomps away)

Danish:But Panchi....(Runs after her)

Shaurya:Hey sis...Miss me.

Vanshika(angrily):Dont you "sis" me.You left me alone on my first day of college to romance some new girlfriend!!!You knew Prithvi was gonna come a little later.

Shaurya(surprised):What...(stammers)I...I...n-never said that.

Prithvi:Yeah,and you think we dont know you.

Jacob(in his mind):So much drama.(out loud):I need some fresh air.(Goes out,transforms into his wolf form and goes back)

Shaurya(tries to change the subject):BTW lil sis(Vanshika glares at him)Who are these beautiful ladies with you?(Saying that he smiles charmingly at Pia and Bella and kisses their hand)I'm Shaurya.

Abhay n Edward are literally burning up.Kabir keeps staring at Vanshika & Prithvi.

Abhay:Well good for you.Did you know that the Princi meets all new students on the first day.If sumone sees you like this (in his mind:Thai is,Flirting with other's girlfriends)this "SOMEONE" might sen you far way(menancingly)Like really far away.

Edward:That's right.Far way.(under his breath)Yup,how about if I send him into his next life if he kisses my Bella's hand again.

Shaurya:Ok guys.See you beautiful ladies later.

He starts to walk away and suddenly notices Misha.He winks at her and giving her another flirty smile walks away.

Misha(shocked out of her wits):Himmat to dekho...Misha Dobriyal ko wink marta hai.Yeh kaun se planet ka prani hai???Hey...main iske bare mein itna kyun soch rahi hun!!!

Vanshika:Thanx for your offer guys,but we should go and see the principal too.See you later.

Pia:Ok...See you later.

Kabir stares at Vanshika and Prithvi walking away and holdind hands.He feels strange.

Kabir:I need some fresh air too.(goes away)

Bella:Weird!!!

Abhay:Kitna loose character hai ye Shaurya.Pehle apni behen ko college chodkar chal gay kisi ladki se milne.Phir yahan bhi aakar flirt karne laga.

Pia:I think he was sweet and a real gentleman,unlike some people(glares at Abhay)whom I know.

They didnt see the Cullens come and look at them amused.

Rosalie:Told you this was gonna be a fun trip.

Alice:Yup!!!

Misha:Mujhe yahan jalne ki bahut zyada badboo aa rahi hai.Isse pehle ki main suffocate ho jaun,mein chalti hun.Bye!!!(Goes away)

Pia and Bella glare at Abhay and Edward and huff and stomp away.

Edward:Awesome!!!I cant even keep a girl.I'm the most useless vampire.

Abhay:You are so right.In ladkiyon ko samhalne se assan tigers and lions ko samhalna hota hai

To be contd.

Precap-Edward:We have to help Abhay.

Bella:But how???

Edward(in a determined voice):First we need to find out who Maithili is and what connection she has with Pia.And for that...we need to break into his room.

Pls comment!!!

Edited by dmg_forever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
wow
nice updt👏👏👏
updt soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
amazing update dear⭐️ pls continue soon!!eager to read wat happens next..precap was interesting 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
WOW....mamazing..........loved it k how u entwnied twilight n PKYEK.........shuarya n misha luv them...ok so edwrd n bella gona abhay n pia.wow really intersting.....plz continue soon..
Luv,
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
just today i started reading ur FF..
its different..
actually i love twilight n the characters..
u hav incorporated both twilight n PKYEK..
tats nice..
pls do pm with ur next update..
eager to read next..

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