FanFic:Entwined lives Note Pg 20 - Page 6

lovely parts dear

wow!😲you'll update regularly seems like your exams have ended and holidays are on!

Awsm updt yar.
i jus read d all nd all wre mindblwing.
luv d it yar.
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luv u
vritika

wow..u'll update regularly..thanks for that...eagerly waiting for the update..poor abhay..make less complications for him..he is suffering na?
luv,
ramani

Awesome Part.. Abhay-Piya-Shaurya part was Gr8 n Misha-Shaurya part was rocking.. Especially Mish saying dat she's inhalf 2 break Shaurya's teeth.. So Abhay has feelings for Piya but leaving her d whole College knows.. U updated after very long time not fair.. Yo...!! Ur gonna update regularly now-onwards.. Dat's Gr8.. Waiting for d next part.. Thanx for d pm.. lolz..

wow your ff is really very cool👏

Chapter 14

Step 1:Complete

Kabir enters the canteen.

Kabir:Hey Pia, can I talk to you for a second.

Pia:Sure Kabir.Even I wanna talk to you about something.

They go outside.

Abhay(thinks):Hey where are they going?Lagta hai Kabir ka bhi gala dabana padega.But vo bahar kya karne ja rahe hai.I want to know.

He started getting up.

Alice:Edward!Kabir and Pia are gonna break up.If Abhay hears them then our Step 1 will fail.

Edward nodded and went to Abhay.

Edward:Hey bro, where to?

Abhay:Umm....Bathroom.

Edward:I thought you are a vampire.

Abhay:I mean...I wanna appreciate my face in the mirror.

Edward:Yeah sure!!!

Outside....

Kabir:Hey Pia...I wanted to tell you ---

Pia:---That our relationship is not working out.I know!

Kabir:You do???

Pia:Yeah I understand.I think we should break up.I know you like Vanshika.

Kabir:You do?I guess I was pretty obvious.Its better this way.I like Vanshika and you like Abhay.

Pia:Yeah....Wait,WHAT!!!I dont like Abhay.

Kabir:What...You love him???

Pia:Gosh Kabir...I hate him.

Kabir:No you dont.

Pia:Fine I wont break up with you.

Kabir:Fine.But one day you will realise that I was right.Hey, but this wont have any effect on our friendship.We will always be best friends.

Pia:Friends-Fine.Best frends-I'll have to ask Misha or she'll kill me.

Kabir grinned.At that moment everyone else came outside.

Kabir kissed Pia on her cheek.

Kabir:You will always be my best girlfriend.

A cracking sound reached the Cullens ears.It was to faint for the rest, but the Cullens heard Abhay break a bit of the canteen door.They smirked.

Alice:Step 1...Completed!!!

To be contd.

Precap-Kabir:I was just trying to help.

Vanshika(teasing):You sure that was the only reason.

Kabir:Of course!!!

Vanshika:But you know what...I dont care anymore.Cos I have a new boyfriend.

omg!!!!!!!
i ws jus w8ing for ur updt.
nd u finally updt,m so so glad dear.
thnx for d pm.
updt ws superb,amazing.
mindblwing.
totaly outstanding.
luv d way u write .
u r an awsm writer.
plz plz cnt wid nxt part soon nd do pm me dear,i dun want to miss even a single part of d ff so plz do pm me.
cnt soon.
luv u
vritika

hei,
update was wonderful..so cullens along with bella r on the mission unite abhay-pia..love it..but got confused with the precap..so waiting for ur next update..continue soon..