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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 3

And they meet...

Bella was asleep with her head on Edward's shoulder.He strokes her hair,jerks his shoulder a little.

Edward:We are here love.Time to end your nap.

Bella:Hmm...Cant.Maybe I need some help to wake up properly.

Edward smirks and kisses her,not noticing that Abhay,Chand and Haseena were standing on the doorstep, waiting for them.

Abhay:Isnt she a human?And aap mujhe keh rahe the ki unhe yeh acha nahin lagega ki main ek human ki taraf attract ho rahan hun...(says to himself):Wait a sec.,"Attract ho rahan hun?????"

Chand(smirking):Kya hua...Slip of tongue.

Abhay(stubbornly):Yes it was...Dont u think we should ask them to stop, I am getting traumatised here.

He goes up to them and taps Edward on the shoulder.

Abhay:Ahem!Ahem!If u dont mind...

By that time the rest of the Cullens had come there.

Emmett:Pls dont mind them.They were just acting out Romeo and Juliet right...(winks at a blushing Bella and Edward)

Abhay(thinks):Romeo n Juliet...Oh great,Pia and I are romeo n juliet too,how is it that I never get to kiss her.

Edward(raising his eyebrows on hearing that thought):Hmm,interesting.I wonder who dis Pia is..

Haseena:Welcome to the Raichand Haveli.If u need anything,pls dont hesitate.Right Abhay.(glares at him)

Abhay(frustrated):Fine.The human???

Edward:Dont worry,she'll be with me.

Emmett:Yah,dont u know...They just love to study at night,TOGETHER...They are sooo dedicated u know.(winks)

Abhay(smirks):I could see that.

Edward:Do u know that I am a mind reader.I can hear everything going on in your head.(smirks when Abhay stops smiling)

Abhay:Whatever.We'll go to Mt. College tommorow.Till then...GOOD NIGHT.(stomps away angrily)

Edward:Hey Alice,u love matchmaking dont u.I have a feeling we will have to do some here.Turning towards Chand and Haseena:BTW whose Pia???

Chand(under his breath sarcastically):Of course,Abhay's not affected.(Increases his volume):Right Abhay!!!

Abhay growls from inside.

Rosalie:Wowa,I think we'll have a fun trip.

Jasper:You think!!!

***********

To be contd.Guess this chapter is a bit small.Next chap-Cullens in Mt, College and someone burns with jealousy...Any guesses who??

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 4

First day

Next day - Preparations for annual day.

Kabir:Hey Pia!!!You look as beautiful as ever.

Pia:Thanx Kabir.BTW did u see any new kids.The Principal asked me to welcome them...

Kabir:Nope babes.

Pia:Oh well...

Suddenly they see everyone running outside.They see Abhay's car and a silver Volvo pulling up.From the Volvo stepped out few of the most beautiful and dazzling people in the world ,and Bella who even though different from the rest,was beautiful in her own way.

Pia:They must be the new kids.Cousins of...(checks a file)ABHAY RAICHAND!!!Oh great.

A girl comes running to Pia.

Girl:Pia,bahut bari problem ho gayi hai.Panchi isnt coming today,and she wants you and Kabir to handle eveything.

Pia:What!But...Oh no,there's so much work.Kabir!Kabir!

Kabir:Yes darling...

Pia:Concentrate Kabir!!!Panchi and Danish are'nt coming.We have to do loads of work.

Kabir:Oh God,aaj hi ka din mila tha un dono ko romance karne ke liye!!!Tell Misha to get to work.I'll handle the props.And u and ...(grimaces)Abhay,can go practice the suicide scene.

Pia:Ok Kabir.I'll go welcome the new students first.

Kabir:Ya...Abhay's cousins.

Pia goes up to the Cullens and Abhay.

Pia:Umm...Edward Cullen,Isabella Swan,Alice Cullen,Jasper Hale,Rosalie Hale,Emmett Cullen fro Forks...First Year,History honours.

Rosalie:Yup,that's us.

Pia:Welcome to Mt.College.I'm Pia Jaiswal.If u need any help,pls come to me.

Edward:Ohh,Pia(looks at Abhay)

Abhay:That wont be necessary.They are my cousins,I'll show them around

Pia(angrily):For your information,Principal asked ME to help them.I'm doing my job.I am not going to listen to YOUR orders.

Abhay:You...

Misha:Wow,hold it guys.Kabir is going berserk.

Abhay:Why.Miss Jaiswal's darling boyfriend missing his sweety pie.

Alice:Is something burning?I smell smoke.

Abhay glares at her.

Pia:God I dont have time for this.Misha,get to work.Guys,you can help if you want to.Abahy,Kabir tumhe suicide ke liye bula raha hai.

Abhay:Kiske liye?

Pia(flustered):I mean suicide scene ke liye bula raha hain.

Edward(smirking):You guys doing Romeo-Juliet rite.

Pia(surprised):How did u know that.

Edward:Actually...

Abhay:Arent we getting late now.hat if your darling boyfriend gets angry.

Pia:Oh god,do what u want.I give up.

She goes away from there.

Emmett:I love this place.Loads of new people to crack my sex jokes on.

Abhay growls.

*********
To be contd.

Pls comment and tell me how it is.PLSSSSSSSSSS.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Some thing different from other FF. I loved it 😊. Very interesting. So please continue soon dear......................🤗
Edited by Gaya3Devi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi it was great . pls uptd next part .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

hi it was great . pls uptd next part .

Thank you will do so
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaya3Devi

Some thing different from other FF. I loved it 😊. Very interesting. So please continue soon dear......................🤗

My friend and I were sitting in the classroom n getting hopelessly bored so we thought of this idea of writing crossovers part by part.Thankx 4r commenting,will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 5

Visions and Love Triangles

Edward:You know,you really shouldnt treat her like that if you want your...ahem...far fetched imaginations to come true.

Bella:Really.Like,how far?

Alice(has a vision):Oooh.Seriously Edward.Kuch zyada hi age ki soch raha hai.

Abhay:What's with her?

Edward:Alice has visions of the future...

Alice:And I see very interesting things.

Abhay:Ughh...Thats disgusting.I am out of here.(goes away)

Rosalie:Guilty conscious!!!

Emmett:Hey can I crack some sex jokes on him that I have saved for Edward & Bella???

Bella:What?

Edward:Never mind...You know,the girl is attracted to.

Alice:Yeah of course.Otherwise she wouldnt be part of his future...far fetched imaginations.

Bella:Will someone pls tell me what is going on in his far fetched imaginations???

Edward:Umm...I'll tell u later.

Emmett:Or u could just give her a demo!!!

Enter T with her bimbo chamchis.

T:Wow,new guys in town.Sooo hot

She guys to Edward.

T:I havent seen anyone like you in my entire life.You are the hottest guy on this planet...(flungs herself on him)

Bella fumes.

Bella:How about if I send her off this planet.(To Edward):So...new place,new girlfriend huh...Fine,enjoy yourself?(stomps away)

Edward:Hey Bella wait.(ToT):Lay yourself off me.

T:Tumne T ko reject kia.Fine do what you want.(goes away)

Jasper:Seriously Edward..."Lay yourself off me"!!!That was the best you colud come up with???

Edward:We are supposed to blend in.

Alice:Fine do that.But forget Bella then.She'll get married to a tall,dark,handsome,smelly man(Jacob) and breed little puppies.Hume kya karma hai,we rae supposed to blend in right...

Edward growls.

**********

In auditorium...

Pia:Oh great!Ye sadoo ek din nahin aega to kya ho jaega...

Abhay:I heard that.

Bella enters fuming.

Bella:Boys!All are dogs.Well some are vampires and they are even worse.

Jacob enters

(Btw, I dont know from where.He just happened to be there...)

Jacob:You think dogs are better than vampires.

Alice enters.

Alice:Then you admit you are a dog?

Jacob:Shorty is here too???

Abhay:Who the hell is he now.

Misha:Wow,aaj kal kitne luv triangles ban rahe hai...Triangle E-B-J and Triangle A-P-K.

Abhay:Hey there's no love triangle here.

Misha:Ya sure!If thats the case,Kabir and PIa can rehearse the kiss scene in Romeo-Juiet and you can practise seriously.Howzzat???

Abhay:I can also rip your and Kbir's head apart.Howzzat???

Jacob:Hey wait a sec...Your the same as good old lover boy.Awesome!!!(sarcastically)

Bella(smacking him on his head):His name is Edward.

Jacob:Whatever...BTW,what's that cute chick's name(points to Pia)

Abhay:Dont U "chick" her,you...(sniffs)you dog.You wouldnt look at all scary with all your front teeth broken.

Jake:Ooooh,possessive.Why is it always that the cute,pretty,beautiful,innocent girls who fall for your species.(notices Bella glaring at him murderously and Pia shouting her head off at someone)Ok maybe you can cut out the "innocent" part.

Misha:What did I tell you.Triangle A-P-K.I m always right.

Kabir enters.

Kabir:Hey Pia,ready for ur scene.

Pia:Yes Kabir.

Kabir(without looking about):I guess that Abhay isnt her.No probs,Ill practise your scene with you(happily)

Abhay:How about you do that and I do a murder scene.

Bella(whispers to Misha):You are right.Major love triangle..

**********

To be contd...

Pls guys do comment and tell me how it is...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤗Really loved it. Love triangle super.❤️

kabir(without looking about):I guess that Abhay isnt her.NO probs,Ill practise your scene with you(happily)
Abhay:How about you do that and I do a murder scene.

loved this dialog so much. Abhay is so jealous. He can't see any one with Piya. You guys rock.................. 👍🏼

UPDATE SOON ..................... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaya3Devi

🤗Really loved it. Love triangle super.❤️


kabir(without looking about):I guess that Abhay isnt her.NO probs,Ill practise your scene with you(happily)
Abhay:How about you do that and I do a murder scene.

loved this dialog so much. Abhay is so jealous. He can't see any one with Piya. You guys rock.................. 👍🏼

UPDATE SOON ..................... 🤗

There's a lot of jealusy to come...and thank u 4r commenting...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome... plz add me to ur pm list

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