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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome awesome awesome superb yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic update
loved it to d core
waiting to see what geet does...
aur kya acche naam rakhe hai geet ne sabhi ke..mazaa aa gaya..
ending was funny..
do continue soon
thank u 4 pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey awesome update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Update
Loved it
Hhaha Kahrgosh and bandar..rofll
Awhh the Bracelet scene was sooo cute
Loved it
Update soon
Cant wait to see wht happens in Sam's BD party
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
AMEZING YAAR GO ON WITH ROCKING !!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
loool maan is so jealous of yash and tells him the wrong advice.
my god it was so funny seeing geet's anger and she got more annoyed that maan told yash that it was him who upset her and not to mention his name.🤣
lool the way hitler went to maan's house and had a go at him was so funny. 🤣🤣lool she called yash a rabbit and maan a monkey.
love the way she falls into maan's arms and why did she have to shout when he was just about to kiss her. 😍😍😍😍 At least she confessed that she thinks about him all the time.
I wish geet would list to maan's point of view.😭
lool i can imagine how confused ramukaka, heer, prem and others are with geet's desciprtion. 🤣🤣🤣
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Hi liked your FF, pls add me in your pm list...and update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey geeta...superb yaar

loved maaneet a lot

maan is such a flirt.....geet se ladte hue bhi flirt karta hai😆😉

wat a reply by geet....n yes yash is a khargosh😡😡 maaneet k beech kabab me haddi
so geet is planning to gatecrash sam's bday party......sounds fun
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
eagerly waiting to watch what's going to happen on sam birthday??????????
Edited by sweginju - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-20

In the Tantra disc

Sameera is looking super sexy everyone wishing her Happy birthday

Yash comes there and looking good

Yash: hey Sam happy birthday

Sam: thanks and thanks for coming yaar

Yash: u are looking sexy.. today Champ is going to dead

Sam: smiles thaks yaar

Yash: so Champ is also coming .

Sam: let see

Yash: why everything is soughted between two of u'

Sam: Hopefully'.

Yash: don't worry he will be here' he loves u lot

Sam: I don't think so'

Yash: I am telling u naa I his childhood friend and I know him very well

Yash: lets forget all that and enjoy lets have a dance'

Now they both start dancing''..

In Malhotra Mession'

Geet is having a kurta with Denim jeans' & looking simple yet beautiful

Heer: where are u going chutki''

Geet: I am not going alone u are also coming with me'

Heer: but where'.

Geet: Tantra the night club'..

Heer: but u don't like all this then all of the sudden how'..

Geet: come-on di.. I thought that to forget that Bandar I have to go there and we are will enjoy'..

Heer: we all what do u mean aur kun aa reha hain'.

Geet: jiju he is anytime here to pick us' so go and be ready fast'.

Heer: but Chutki'..

Geet: di baaki sab baaten baad main'. First u go and change fast'

Heer: but chutki'.

Geet: di go fast'.. and she pushes her towards her room'.

Heer wents from there'''

Geet aaj tho bhaut maza aaney wala hain' in in excitement she rubs her hand'

In the Disc''..

Maan enters'. He is looking hot' as usual''

Sameera notice him every girl overe there looking to Maan'

Sameera wents up to him' Maan notice her coming'

Maan: Happy birthday Sameera'.

Sameera: thanks MK' & thanks for coming'.

Maan: its ur birthday & we are friends so I should be there'

Sameera: they hugs'

Sameera: Mk how I am looking'

Maan: really beautiful'.

Sameera: thanks'

Sameera to himself: earlier when we met he always use to comment me how I am looking'.. but tody he din't comment' and said only I am looking beautiful'. What happened to him'.

Maan: what happened sam what are u thinking of'.

Sameera: Nothing'.

Maan: I know u are thinking of ur gift right'..

Sameera: no no.. nothing like that'.

Maan: don't woory I have bring ur gift he puts his hand in his pocket and take out a box rapping with a gift cover' and handed over it to her and again wishes her happy birthday'..

Sameera takes the gift and said thanks'.

Sameera: can I open it'.

Maan: yaa sure'.

Sameera opens the box it's a single neckpiece'

Sameera: smiles to saw it and said MK it is too good '.thanks'

Maan: thank god u liked it'.

Geet, Prem & Heer also enters the disc'.

Geet saw the gift that Maan given to Sameera'

Geet to herself: look when I asked for my gift he din't give me but he gived it to Parkati'.. and said we are friends'.

Heer saw Geet mummring'..

Heer: what happnig why are u mummring'.

Geet: nothing dii'.

Heer lets go and dance''.

Heer & Prem dint notice Maan over there'..

Prem: yea sure.

They also told geet to join them but Geet refused'..

Maan went up to Yash and laughs to saw him' as he regains what Geet said to him Khargoosh'

Yash: hey champ is I am looking funny. Today'

Maan: no not that just I remember something'

Maan: forget that tell me about ur meeting with Geet how was that'..

Yash: don't asked about that'.and he narrates all that happened over there' Maan can't stop laughing'

Yash: tu hans reha hain'. Aur tujhe pata hain meri jaan nikal rahi thi' yaar champ tuney theek kaha tha pyaar aur ussey' kabhi nahi'

After listen this Maan is reliefed and happy'

Maan(in a casual tone) : mainey tho phele hii kaha tha' chal vo kahavat suni hoogi tuney jab jaagey thabi saveera'..

Yash: haan yaar tu theek keh reha hain'. Jo ussey pyaar karney kii himmat karega naa sach main Bandar hoga'..

Maan: kya matlab hain tera'..

Yash: main tujhe Bandar thodi naa bol reha hun' tu thodi naa usko pyaar karta hain'

Sameera is alone standing'.

Yea MK ko kya ho gaya hain loog kheten hain ki loog pyaar main badal jaate hain'. Kya MK mujhsey sachii main pyaar karta hain'. Par vo mujhe batata kyun nahi aaj tho kuch bhi hoo jaaye MK tumko aaj confess karna hi paega'

She went to take the drink and she mix all the alcohol in his drink' MK main dekhti hun tum yahan sey kaise jaate hoo aur aaj tumko apney pyaar kaa confess bhi karna padega'..

Geet saw her mixing the drink yea parkati kya karney wali hain'. Chalo aacha hain yea tho mera kaam aur bhi aasan kar rahi hain'..

Sameera wents up to Maan and give the drink to him'.

Maan: thanks Sam'

Both raised the tost and have it'..

Geet is just enjoying this''heers comes from behind and pat on her shoulder

Geet is scared and tuns back'

Geet oh di.. aap'.

Heer: haan main par tu yaahan kya kar rahi hain'.aur kisko dekh kar itna khush hoo rahi hain'

Geet: Kuch nahi' and she change the topic' Di aap dance nahi kar rehe & Jiju kahan hain'.

Heer: haan vo actually tere Jiju tujhko bhaut miss kar rahe hain.. chal dance floor par dance karte hain'..

Geet: haan di chalo'.

They both went to dance floor'and start dancing'..

Now Maan is fully drunk'.

He saw geet dancing on the dance floor and just starring her'and going towards her' but notice this and she hides'

Maan is looking for her'

Then Yash came from behind and asked him what is he looking for'

Maan: I saw Geet over here'

Yash: lokes here and there and not find her'

Yash: Champ lagta hain tuney jyaada pii lii hain

Maan: Par mainey tho sirf soft drink pii hain'.

Yash: tho phir yaar main samajh sakta huun tere andar Geet kaa daar betha hua hain isliye tujhe har jagaha vo hi dikh rahi hain' Yash joins his hands together' thanks God aapney mujhko bach liya nahi tho mere bhi yahi haalat honey wali thi..

Maan (mummers): Daar nahi Pyaar hain'.

Yash: kya bola tuney'

Maan: kuch nahi chal ghar chalte hain'

On the other hand Prem's phone rings and he have to go were very urgently'.

Prem: hey baby we have to leave now actually I have some important work to do'

Heer: ok lets go'..

Heer comes to Geet and asked her to leave as Prem have some important work to do..

Geet: what but I can't go'.

Heer: why why u cant go '

Geet fumbles: what di I don't want to go I have to stay here' u go with Jiju I will come later..

Heer: but how will u come'

Geet: don't worry di. I call at home and ask Maa to send and Car for me'

Heer: ok as u wish' but come home fast'

Geet: ok di '. Bye'

And Heer & Prem leaves from there'.

Back to Maan & Yash'. Both are also leaving'

Sameera notice them and saw both of them going from there'

Sameera to herself: Babes kuch tho karna padega '. And she rans toward DJ and said something in his ears'

Then songs starts

Sameera is dancing To seduced Maan Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Maan and Yash Turns back and notice her dancing
Yash Waaooo
Ah Zara Zara .. Ooo Ooo Ooo
Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara

In the mean time Geet get towads the buffe area and bring chilly powder and blows it towards the Sams friend overethere. And smiles Yash eyes also caught chilly powder

Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara ZaraHold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara ZaraOoo Ooo Ooo

Then Geet went to the Bar area and also blows chilly powder on his eyes he also shouting due to the chilly..By the time Geet Poures all the drinks on the bar table and lighted it with fire people are shouting as all are scared..
Sam is still dancing
.Sam Comes to Maan and Dancing very seductine and sensuous

Tere Hi Tera Hi Intezaar Hai
Mujhe To Bas Tujhse Pyaar Hai
Tera Hi Tera Abb Khumaar Hai
Khud Pe Na Mere Ikhtiyaar Hai ) 2
(Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan MeinBeqkaar HumDum Da Dum Da Dum
Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan MeinBeqkaar Hum ) . 2

Geet saw and said to himself Chi chi and she put her hands on her eyes

Geet again to herself: Pagal agar apney aakhn par aisey hi haath rakhegi tho indono ko sabak kaisey sikhayegi and she takes her hands down from her eyes

She goes to them and slightly pat on sameeras butts and hides
.Sam is still dancing and loking all around as who did it
Geet is hiding and dancing & sings
Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara ZaraTouch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara ZaraHold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara ZaraOoo Ooo Ooo
Now Maan is imagining Geet is dancing with him.. and he also excited and start dancing with Sam Geet saw this and said .Bhaut haans reha hain yea Bandar isko bhi sabak sikhana padega

(Yeh Dard-E-Dil To Ho Na Agar
Sataye Abb Dooriyon Ka Gum
Behek Jaye Na Yeh Kadam
Hai Tujhe Meri Jaan Ki Kasam ) .. 2
Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan Mein
Beqkaar HumDum Da Dum Da Dum
Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan MeinBeqkaar Hum

Geet went towards him as she is walking on her knees and come up to Maan and she pulls his legs and he fall down on the floor.. and she ran from there as he fall down a cut has been on his forehead
Sameera is still dancing.. she tuns back and saw Maan on the floor She helped him to get up and take Maan outside
Now Both are alone outside
Sam: come-on Mk say u love me I know u love please said it she din't care about the cuts on the Maan's forehead
Maan is still drunked.. Maan again imagin that she is Geet and Hugs her Sameera got very happy
Maan: I know u love me and he smiles.
Sameera: Yea MK I love u
Maan: I also love . I love u a lot i love u Geeet
Now Sameera is shocked after listend Geet name from Maan
Sameera Breaks there hug and said... said it once again
As he is going to say he falls down and said I LOVE U GEET I REALLY DO
Sameera is very much shocked and leaves from there
Maan is still on the floor in unconscious state
Inside Geet is Dancing on the song as she is very happy
Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara ZaraKiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara ZaraHold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara ZaraOoo Ooo Ooo) .. 2
(Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan Mein
Beqkaar HumDum Da Dum Da Dum
Bin Tere Sanam Is Jahan MeinBeqkaar Hum) 3

After finishing the song geet raised her collar and said. Sabbaash geet tuney kar dikaaya and she leaves from there
And sameera enters the disc and saw the mess over there. And shocked to saw that. And shouts who the hell did this I will not leave him who did this my birthday party is fully spoiled as she going from there her foot slips due to the chilly powder that was all over the floor and she falls down and she rolled into chilly powder and shouts in pain help please somebody helps me

Outside the pub Geet is very much happy and start walking towards the parking lot and she notice Maan
.Geet: yea Bandar yahan kya ker reha hain
.Geet wents up to him and realize that he is unconscious
Geet to himself: iski tho help karni padegi she tries make him awake.. but he dint. And then she suddenly smiles she pics out her phone from her pocket and take his pictures in different different poses and smiles
Then she calls the driver and asked him to come there and help her to take him to the home Driver comes there and help her they take him to the car and drops him to his home.

Geet reaches Khurana Menssion
.Mrs. Khurana opens the door and saw Maan on that condition
. Mrs. Khurana asked Geet about Maan's condition.
Geet: aunty main pheley andar aajaaun yea bhaut bhaari hain.
Mrs. Khurana: I am soory beta and helps her to take Maan to his room and they lay him down on his bed..Mrs. Khurana: beta ab baathaaoo yea sab kaisey hua..

Geet: kuch nahi aunty yea naa Parkati key birthday main gaya tha aur isney Jaayaada pii lee

Mrs. Khurana: Parkati kaun parkati

.Geet: oh I mean Sameera key birthday main

Mrs. Kurana: par beta iskey saar pey yea choot kaisey aayi
Geet: then realize that this cut is because of her
Geet: vo aunty yea gir gaya tha

Geet: you don't worry aunty
And she asked for the first aid box .

Mrs. Kurana: brings the first aid box.

Geet: Aunty main karti hun..
Mrs. Khurana gives the box to the Geet..ok beta main tab tak iskey liye nimbu pani laati hun saayad thoda theek ho Jaayee.
Geet: ok aunty
Geet is doing his bandage and realize her mistake
.Geet to herself: mazaak mazzak main kahi zyaada tho nahi hoo gaya
Maan open his eyes as he is still druk and smiles to saw Geet in front of him..And said Geet tum
Geet: haan main tho kya tumney samjha ki vo tumhaari parkati hain..
Maan: is just smilling and starring her as she is doing his bandage.
Maan holds Geet's hand both have an eyelock and lost in each other eyes .

Mrs. Khurana enters the room and said geet main ley aay
And Geet snaps back. But Maan is still starring Geet
Aunty is looser ko hosh aa gaya hain aap chahey tho isko nimbu pani pila saktii hain
and she gets up from there
Mrs. Khurana comes to him ..
suddenly Geet's phone rings she picks it up its Heer
Geet: Hello di
Heer: tu kahan par hain
Geet: Di main papa key ghar hun.
Heer: tu vahan kya kar rahi hain.
Geet: Di main aakar baathi hun And she cuts the phone
Geet: aunty main chalti hunn ghar par sab wait kar rehe hain
.Mrs. Khurana: ok beta & thaks beta isko ghar thak chodney key liye
.Geet: its ok.. aunty
And she leaves from there
After some time Mrs. Khurana coming out of the Maan's room Mr. Khurana noticed
and asked her what happed she told him everything..
Mr. khurana wents up to maan's Room to check him
Mr. khuran sits beside him and said bilkul theek kheti hain Hitler isko looser.
Isko yea bhi nahi pata kii kini pini chaiiye aur nahi.. and smiles to see him.
As he leaving from Maan holds his hands. And said I love u Geeet.
Mr. khurana turns back and smiles.. Jisey bolna chaahiye usssey tho hamesha ladtha rehta hain aur mere samney bol reha hain. Sachii main looser hain...
Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago

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