FF: Pyar Tho Hona Hi Tha(Maneet)Truth reveled (New

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Hi... I am Geeta & trying to write a FF... don't mind if you find any Grammatic mistake or spelling mistake... Pls give your views and comment as if u like it i'll continue...

PYAR THO HONA HI THA

INTRODUCTION

Mr. Malhotra: Geet's father a rich business tycoon of Delhi. He have the biggest Add agency and part of board members of Juneja's Hotel and Khuraana's Construction. He never have that attitude. He has a great personality but he always cares about their employees. He always treated his office employees as his family members. And always celebrate each festival with them and his employees are also very loyal to them. He is a perfect businessman, perfect husband, perfect dad and a perfect son. He loves her family but he loves Geet more than anyone else. He never see drop of tear in her eyes. He always stands by Geet in her decisions.

Mrs. Malhotra: Geet's mother very religious women and loved her family very much she is the biggest pillar of the Malhotra family. She always wants her family to be happy & for that she can do anything. She loves her both daughters very much but she loves her elder daughter Heer more than Geet's, as she is the first child of the family. But this means not that did not loves Geet, of course she loves her a lot but their fights she always be with Heer. So there is always cute family fight where one side Geet & Mr. Malhotra and another side Heer and Mrs. Malhotra.

Heer: Geet's Elder sister and only best friend she always share her feelings her secretes with her. She also loves Geet very much and very possessive about her. She can't tolerate if anybody say anything to her. She is trendy very sexy and very beautiful. Guys are always following her but she did not like guys who are flirtatious

Geet: A simple cute religious girl. She is the youngest child of her family. And loved by each member of the family. As her family over pampers her so she is over weight but yet cute and very down to earth. She hates people who see the outer beauty of the people but not the inner beauty. She never use to love parties even on her own birthday she din't like if her parents make it Grand.

In school (St. Joseph) reputed school of Delhi Geet is in class 10th and Heer in 12th

Geet: Hey pari Tu rooz school late kyun hoti hain ' Tujhe teachers seay dar nahi lagta

Pari: come-on Geet dar aur Pari kaa door thak koi rishta nahi hain'.. aur vaise bhi agar school main masti nahi karenge tho kya bhudaape main masti karenge'. Tujhe pata bhi hain teacher sey daanth kaane main kitna maza aata hain.. vaise bhi tujhe kahan pata hoga tu tho sabhi teachers kii best student hain'.tere life main tho kuch fun bhi nahi hain'.

Geet: theek hain meri maa samaj gayi ''. Ab apne parvachan band kar and go and put your bag in class else you'll be late for assembly.

Pari: ok wait' I'm coming'..

In the assembly Principle this annual function will be celebrate it with double mazaa'.. Every body having a question look '.

Principle: because this year we'll celebrate our schools 50th anniversary so there will no loops we'll also organize fate in this annul function and the amount would collect will be donated to ruler child education' there is sound of applause' in the assembly hall all teachers and students are impressed by this'.

After the assembly in the 10th class teacher announce that if anybody have some ideas for this annul function can share with everybody'..

Geet is a very reserved but yet very talented she had a plan but she can't say it so she share this idea with Pari as she is her bench mate and a good friend and only friend in the class. Pari raise her hand and teacher asked ' Yes Pari you have something to share with us ''

Pari: Yes ma'am'.. actually I'am thinking that if we were celebrating our school's 50th anniversary'. Than we have do some thing traditional and epic like we have to organize some dance sequence from the each state of India as that we can symbolize our school as a proper Indian cultural theme ''..

Teacher: It's a great idea Pari'..

As Pari trying to say that this plan is not of her but of Geet but Geet stops her'

Pari: Thanks ma'am''

Pari: Tune mujhe tera naam kyun nahi lene diya '..

Geet: Kya farak padta hain'

After the class everybody appreciate Pari about her plan'

Then enters our Maan The Maan Singh khurana'.. He also appriciate pari's paln and Geet is very happy that Maan also likes the plan '.Maan is the hottest hunk of the school but he never used to speek more but he is very talented, intelligent and very Proudy & rude also. Girls of the school used to like him but he never like these girls. Geet also likes Maan very much. Whenever Maan appreciate her plans is in on the 9th cloud'.

But Maan dosen't even notice her'

In class 12th they are doing drama of Heer & Ranjha'

Heer is playing Heer and ranjha is playing by Prem '..

Prem ''. Prem is the also very hot but very down to earth. He is Maan's Cousin Brother and son of Juneja's they have the cities biggest Hotel cain ''

Maan is son of Kuraana's and they have the biggest construction company.

Prem likes Heer very much' Heer also likes him but never shows'.

Soo both are happy that they are playing Heer & Ranjha'.


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Part-2

After the school on the way to home Heer and Geet are in the car '

Heer: Chutki (heer call geet as chutki) tujhe pata hain main Heer bani hunn''

Geet: Di what do u mean aap tho already Heer hain..

Heer: Haan vo tho main hun by raising her coller'

But our class is playing the drama of Heer and Ranjha & in which I'am playing role of Heer '..

Geet: Whow'. Di'

Heer: aur tujhe pata hain ranjha kun bana hain'

Geet: Haan haan pata hain'.. Prem na''.

Heer: how do u know?

Geet: Di.. the smile that u have ''.

Heer: This smile is not for that it. Is because '''..

Geet: Di please aap kisi sea bhi chupa sakte hain '' par Geet sea never''

They reached home''..

Heer: ok ok '. By having a angry look lets go we have reached home''..

After Geet goes. Heer smiles and shied'

Geet: Maa'. Maa..

Mrs. Malhotra: Aa gaya mera cutu Pie '

Geet: Haan maa '.

Mrs. Malhotra: where is Heer'

Geet: A rahi hain apki ladli'' mujhse seay tho maa aap pyar bhi nahi karhte ''.

Mr. Malhotra: Tho kya hua jab Chutki ke Paa uske pass hain tho kya Chutki ko Kisi aur kii zaroorat hain'..

Geet: Paa '.. She hugs him and says u are right Paa '

Mrs. Malhotra: Aap dono ki natunki phir shuru ho gayi'

Heer: Maa. Come near and winks and says maa lets have lunch leaves both of them with there nautanki'

Mrs. Malhotra: Ya heer u r right and today I had made gagar ka halwa, palak paneer Aur. Aur (Geet & Mr. Malhotra) as these are favorites of both

Mrs. Malhotra: aap dono k liye nahi hain'.

Geet: Paa kya aap bhi naa maa KO naraz kar dete hoo' chalo soory bolo maa Koo and wrinks

Mr. Malhotra: Soory Biwi ji'

Mrs. Malhotra: hold Geet's ear and said tuhaara soory

Geet: oouch maa chodo naa Dard hota hain'Phale khana kha le phi bol dun'.

Mrs Malhotra: no still holding her ear

Geet: Maa please chodoo naa Dard hoo raha hain'. Oouch' ok sorry'''

Mrs. Malhotra: Now go change by the time I'll serve food for u'

Geet: as she is going upstairs Maa vaise apne bataya nahi apne aur kya banaya hain'.

Mrs. Malhotra: Go change and see by yourself ok' and come fast'

Heer'. Chutki tu sachi main natunki hain '' aur school main aise rahti hain jaise bahut sharif hogi'

Geet: Di' pls. Apko pata hain main jitni open gar main hotii hun utni school main nahi hoo pati'

Heer: Vohi tho why u are so dumb in school'

Geet: goes to her room''' leave this topic di'

In the night Geet is studying in her room as this year is her 10th Board so this Year she is more serious out her studies'

Heer: kya Chutki tu kitna padti hain' chal na Maa aur Paa party main jaa rahe hain

Geet: Di apko pata hain naa mujhe Party sharty pasand nahi'''

Heer: Chal naa Chutki Tujhe pata hain party kahn hain'..

Geet: kahan

Heer: Juneja House'..

Geet: ok thabi aap itni excited ho rahi hain aur thbi aap makeup kii dukaan lag rahi hain'.

Heer: tujhe chal na hain tho chal mere makeup k bare main kuch mat bol' aur vaise bhi tu kya jaane makeup kya hota hain ''.. isye stye & trend khaete hain'. Main Jaa rahi hun' aur last time puch rahi hun ki tu aa rahi hain yaa nahi'.

Geet: Di.. aap loge jaaooo naa mujhe nahi aana''

Heer: Mujhe pata hota hain kii tu nahi aayegi phir bhi main hamesha patanahi tujhse puchne kyun aajati hun'. And leaves

Geet: shouts because u loves me Di''.

Heer: Mummers'' love my foot and smiles''

In the party Maan is looking stunning in blue Denim Jeans and Red T-shirt with Brown leather Jaket''.

Prem is wearing Black Jeans White T-shirt with Black Jacket''

Both are looking stunning''.

Heer is wearing a red color gown

Pari is also there''.

She wears a short Knee gown of black colour with simple makeup she is looking awesome

As she enters the party Maan is just staring at her'..

Prem notice this'.. oye'. Maan tu usey khea kyun nahi deta if u likes her '..

Maan: yaar but if she din't like that then''

Prem: yaar tu bhi aajeeb hain 2 saal hogaye tujhe par tune abhi tak use kuch nahi kaha'..

Heer comes behind and said hi to both of them''

Hi'. Heer both says

Prem: Heer u are looking great''

Heer: Tum bhi kuch bhi kuch bure nahi lagrahe'.. and smiles

Heer: lets go and Dance Prem'.

Prem: Sure''

Prem and heer both excused Maan'.

Maan goes to Pari and said hi'..

Maan: hi' Pari'

Pari: hi.. Maan

Maan: u are looking sexy'..

Pari: thanks Maan

Maan will u join me on the dance floor

Pari: ok lets go'..

Next day in the school ''..

Pari: Geet tu kal party main kyun nahi aayi'

Tuhje pata hain Maan kitna hot lag raha tha ''

Aur usne mere saat dance bhi kiya tha''.

Geet: in a low tone ok'.

Percap: Maan propose Geet


After reading do comment yaar like or not like whatever...Please

PART-3

Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago
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Part-3

Maan with his friends yaar yea Pari kitni Hot hain na '

Yash: Yaar vo tho hain ek dum rapchik hain'.. par yea hamesha us kaante k saath kyun rheti hain.. (Yash refers Geet as Kaanta)

Maan: Vo kaanta nahi Hathi hain '.. and laugh Vaise bhi Hume tho Phool se matlab hain naa tho kaante sey kya lena dena'.

Yash: yaar par jab pool todthe hain tho kaanta tho haath pe lagta hii hain'.

Maan: Yaa''

On the same night Geet in her room ''''

Maan ko main kabhi bhi pasand nahi aa sakti kyunki naa hi mujhe aacha lagna aata hain aur naa hi main Di aur Par ki thera thin hun'''

Par mine kya karon Main chahe ke bhi Maan k bare main soochna nahi bolthi''..

In Kuraana's Home'''

Mr. Kuraana gets a call that there London office is going through a very bad condition so board decide that Mr. Kuraana have to leave for the London as he is the only person who can take out the company of this drastic situation and he agrees and leaves for the London''''

In the school the rehearsals are going on in full fledge & all were excited'''''..

Now the Annul Day comes'.

And the Annual Day is a Great success' After the end of the function Maan propose Pari but she din't accept she also likes him but she is just giving him attitude'and leaves from there' Maan how can she do this to me ''. You have to accept my love' this is a promise'..

Next day in the school''. Maan enters the class and saw Pari but shows her that he had not seen her'

He goes up to his bench and take his seat'..

Yash: yaar mujhe pata chala hain kii pari ne tera proposal accept nahi kara'.

Maan: Leave that topic'. & concentrate in the class''.

In the recess Geet & Pari are having there lunch''.. Geet finished first so she goes to water tank as she is going she bumps on Maan and is going to fall but Maan holds her' They have a short eye lock geet thanked Maan and leave from there Pari notice this she din't like the way Maan hold Geet and staring at her'' Pari'(Phale mujhe propose karta hain aur jub maine accept nahi kiya tho ab Geet ko pakad liya) gave angry look to him and leaves from there'.

Geet is very happy that he holds her'. The way he stare her'

Pari: Geet tu is Maan sey dur rehe '. Yea bhaut hi'. Bell rings'.

Geet: Chal yaar bell baj gaye hain'..

Lets go to class''

They both proceeds towards class''

In the class Maan is having fun with his friends'..

Pari & Geet Saw him Maan also saw them'. Maan gives a smile to Geet and ignores Pari'.

Both sits on there seat'. And teacher enters''..

On the other hand In class 12th they were having there free period '. Prem is just solving some accounts questions''. Heer came up to him'

Hey prem Kya kar rahe ho'.

Prem: Just solving some accounting problems''

Heer: Kya Prem tum aur Chutki kitna padte hoo'. Tum itna pad pad ke thakte nahi ho kya'..

Prem: Nahi mujhe tho bada maza aata hain''

Heer: Maza vo bhi padne main'' chalo chodo ise free period hain sab basket ball khel rahin hain lets go hum bhi chalte hian'..

Prem: Bas yea question solve kar luun uske baad chalte hain'

Heer: Nahi abhi chalo'.

Prem: Ples iske baad chale'.

Heer: make a sad face and leaving from there'..

Prem tum bhi naa theek hain chalo'..

Heer hugs him and thanks him''

Prem also hugs her ''..both are lost in each other''

In the night''. Geet is in her room recalling that happens in school and shied'..

In heer's room Heer is also thinking about there hugs and smiles'..

In Juneja house.. Prem is thinking about heer.. and her childness'.

In Kuraana house Maan to himself Pari yea tho bas suruaat hain' ab tum kud mujhe Propose karoge''that Moti is a way to realize u what u have done 'and smiles'.

Now day passes Geet and Maan becomes friends but Pari din't react but she is jealous very much''.Maan knows that but he did not like this as he just cant bear Geet anymore so he thinks now I have to propose Geet that's the only way Pari will accept her love for him so one day after the school Maan goes to Geet and asked her to come with her but she ignores and said Maan Di is waiting for me and I have to go but Maan pressurize her as she din't say no to him'. Pari is watching all this so she also follow them Maan takes her to backyard of of there school and knee down and proposed her and said Geet I don't know from when but I like u very much will u be my Girlfriend''Geet has tears in her eyes and she accept and both hugs ' Pari is watching this and having tears in her eyes'.Maan also notice her'..

Precap: Maan insulted Geet



PART-4

Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago
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great part.
cant wait for the nxt part.
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