FF: Pyar Tho Hona Hi Tha(Maneet)Truth reveled (New - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
please please update sooonn.... we are all waiting im patiently for the next part!!!
maan should know that this was geet whom he insulted!!!!
maan making a pass on her!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice Ff. Waiting for next part to Maan reaction.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just came across....... Nd i really liked ur concept infact loved it....... Hope u continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi....
awesome updates...
do cont soon.. cant wait 2 read maneet together...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-10

Maan is on the phone he din't saw her' Geet is also on the phone so she also not notice him so they bumps on each other Geet is going to fall but Maan holds her from her waist but Maan phone fall down & there is an eyelock'. Between them'suddenly her dupta float and cover her face Maan slightly take the duppta from her face' and continuous starring her'

Geet: excuse me '

Maan: dosent listen her'. she shouts excue me ''.please lift me up'

Maan comes to his sense & lifts her up'

She blast on him don't u see ' bhagwaan ne aankhe di hain tho kam se kam unka use tho karo'' par tum kyun karoge'. Hain naa lagta hain kisi nae tumhen bataya nahi kii aankhee dekhne k liye hoti body par show piece kii threre nahi''.

Maan: Excuse me ek tho maine aap ko girne (fall) se bachyaa aur ap ke vajah se meare mobile ki halat dekho aur tum mujhi par chila rahi ho'.

Geet: bacha liya tho kya hua giraya tumne tha tho kya ye bhaishab mujhe bachate (a man is going from there) Kya ye jagaha thumhe hanging garden dikhaii detii hain ki jab man chaha jaise man chaha goom liya''..

Maan: Miss. whatever u r' tumhaare pass bhi tho aankeen hain tho kam se kam tum tho inka use kar sakti thi'.

Geet: in a furious look ek tho choori uper se senajoori'''..

Ramukaka is still on the Phone' Geet looks to her phone'

Vaise main tumhaare saath apna time waste kyun kar rahi hun'. Chalo main tume maff kiya' and she leaves'.

Maan: What'. What did u say tum ne mujhe maaf kiya (she has left but he is still shouting)

Geet turns and said' haaan Maine tumey maaf kiya'. And she leaves'

Maan: Maine isse chodunga nahi' bas agar yea mujhe life main ek baar aur mil gayi naa tho yea tho gayi'

In khurana mansion Mr. Khurana trying Geet's Phone but she is not picking it up'

Mr. Khurana: Yea ladki kahan hain kii mera phone bhi recieve nahi kar rahi'.

Than he call London home ' there Mady picks up the Phone'.

Mady: Hello'

Mr. Khurana: Hello Mady' where is Geet'

Mady: Sir she is in the washroom'.

Mr. Khurana: I'am trying her phone from last 20 minutes '.

Mady: Bady is having food poisning'

Mr.Khurana: What .. did u give her the medicin.

Mady: Yes sir''..

Kr. Khurana: ok I'll call later''' and he cuts the phone''.

Geet reaches home '' Ramukaka is waiting for her''.. Ramukaka din't rcognise her but she recognize him very well she ran up to him and hugs him'..and said Ramukaka''. He also hugs her' and both smiles and has tears in their eyes'

Geet release herself from his embrace and wipes his tears and said kaka today there will be no rona dhona only masti'''

Ramukaka: beta vaise tum karna kya chahati hoo

Geet: Bas aap mujhe Kisi terah se mere room tak pahucha do bas uske baad main smbaal loongi'

Ramukaka: phir tho bas ek hi idea hain'.

Geet: Kya Ramukaka'.

Kaka: tume chdana (climbing) aata hain''.

Geet: yea aap kaise baath kar rahe ho kaka

Kaka: beta bas yahi ek idea hain '.

Geet: ok kaka I'll try'.. aap bataoo kahan sey chdana hain'''

Kaka: mere saath aaoo''.

He saw her a pipe and said beta yahan sey''''

Geet: kya kaka main yahan sey kaise jaa pungi''

Kaka: beta bhut simple hain aur aachi baath yea hain kii yea pipe tumhare kamre sey ho kar jaata hain'..

Geet: Kaka phale main chad tho jaaun pauchnaa tho door ki baath hain'.

Kaka: let me show you'.

Kaka climb to a small distance' and said this is that easy'she said haan haan vo tho mujhe dhik he raha hain' Geet tries but she fall ' she tries again ' again' again' again'. She tries almost 10 times but she can't so after exhausted & losing she sits on the Ground '''

Inside the mansion function is started' all were there including Khurana family and Juneja family''.. Heer also came downstairs she is wearing Lehanga of Red & green colour.. she is really looking as a bride'. And looking fabulous' Prem cant take his eyes from her'

Prem is wearing a sherewani of Maroon & Black colour'and he is also looking aswsome as always'.

Maan is wearing a Black sherewani and looking Handsome, dashing as always'

Outside the Mansion' Geet is still trying' but its not works'

Now ther is only one option ''

Kaka: what

Geet: now only Papa can help me''.. pata nahi aaj kisa chehra dekh liya tha ''.

She calls Mr. Khurana' he see the no. Its Hitler'.

Mr. Khurana: heloo beta'. How r u know '

Geet: Not good papa' please help me' r u in my home right now'

Mr. Khurana: Yes but what happen is all ok

Geet: Papa will u please go up to my room

Khurana: why'

Geet: Please Papa just do as I'am saying'.

He goes up to her room.

Mr. Khurana: yea I'am in ur room. Now tell me' what u want'

Geet: Please come to the back side window of my room'

Mr. Kurana goes there also'.. now what''..

Geet: Now see downward'

Mr.Khurana: see Geet and shocked what are u doing here and when did u reached India

Geet: I'll explain all this later first u help me to lift me up''

Mr. Khurana: But how'' and y are u not coming by door and Ramukaka is also there with u'.. beta I' can't understand anything'' whats all this is going on''.

Geet: Papa for that I have to come up to u so now please first lift me up

Mr. Khurana: Yes tell me what I have to do' terei nautanki kabhi bhi khatam nahi hoti'.

Geet: smiles.. Ok Papa fist u take around five to six bedsheets and knot them together'

Mr. Khurana: now where are the bed sheets'..

Geet: One minute '.i have to ask Kaka'.

Geet: kaka bedsheets kahan hain'..

Ramukak: right hand side wale wardrobe main'

She told same to Mr. Khurana'. Mr. Khurana takes out all the bed sheets and knotting them together''..

Geet: Come-on papa make it fast'..

Mr. Khurana: will u please shut up'' let me do this'..

Geet said by seeing Kaka lagta hain Papa gusse main hain''

He had knoted all bedsheets together and drop it down'''

He also knotted it with bed legs as she can climb ' easily'

Mr. Kurana: Oye nautanki' come-on lets come up'

Geet: hold the bedsheets and starts climbing and she went up and Hugs him thank You Papa'.. I miss u a lot'.. he also hugs him and kiss her forehead

Now she also pulls her luggage up'.

Ramukaka come to the mansion''

Mrs. Malhotra: Aap khan Gaye the main aap KO kab se doond rahi hun'

Ramukaka: vo main'

Mr. Malhotra: chalo app mere saath kitchen main chalo' and they both go to the kitchen

In the room Geet is explaning Mr. Khurana and both is laughing'

Mr. Kurana: Shhh' quite else everybody knows you were here'. Ok

Hitler I'm going downstairs everybody is looking for me'

Geet: ok Papa'.

Downstairs all are having fun Mr. Khurana comes done and goes to Mr. juneja & Mr. Malhotra'

Mr. Malhotra: where were you '' we were looking for you'

Mr. Khurana: Why what happened '''

Mr. malhota: Actually I'am trying Geet's phone but she is not picking it up' did u talk to her''.

Mr. Khurana: Actually I went to talk to her only' She is fine' Just having little Stomach pain ' so I told mady to give her the madicen'

Mr. Malhotra: She is ok.. naa'.

Mr.Khurana: Yea she is perfectly ok'. And mummer's' iss ladki ke vajah sey mujhe bhi joot bolna pad raha hain'

Mr. Malhotra: Did u said anything'

Mr. Khurana: No.. No'

Maan is waiting for Sameera'. And sameera enters'Sameera iswearing a white saaree'. & looking sexy'

Prem & Maan are standing together'

Prem: Hey Maan Yea party kitni Booring hain naa'

Maan haan hain tho he saw sameera meri party tho hogai '' and he goes to Sameera

Maan: Thanks for coming'..

Sameera: Its my Pleasure''

Maan: you are looking sexy ''..

Sameera: Thanks & Smiles''.

Juneja Malhotra sahab party main kuch roonak nahi hain'

Mr. Khurana recives a call and said ok''.

Mr. Khurana: Aap loog chinta mat karo ab is party main kuch aisa hone waala hian kii iss party main Jaan aa jayegi'.

Mr. Khurana insists all the ladies over there to play dholak and sing songs'

Now ladies starts playing Dholak' all starts enjoying this' Heer & Prem are siting there seats and enjoying''..

Tik Tik tik Tik tik tik tik tik karda kanda dolkita gitta'.

Mrs. Juneja to the lady paying oye ki kanda dolkida gitta ''

Then enters our Geet having a long veil on her face

And starts singing & dancing''.

Ruth sagna di aayii

All ladies are singing'ooo''

Mundey Kudi di sagayiii (by raising his hand toward Prem & Heer)

All ladies are singing'ooo''

Ruth sagna di aayii

Mundey Kudi di sagayiii

Mr. Malhotra'. To Mr. Juneja' Yea ladki kaun hain humne tho kisi dance wali ladki ko nahi bulaya '..

Back to dance floor'''

Geet is singing'

Ruth sagna di aayii

Mundey kudi di sagayii

OH Ruth sagna di aayii

Mundey Kudi di sagaayi'..

Kuch mundey ne akhiyan mariyan'.

Theay kuch kudi nay kita'

By moving up her Veil''

Kandha dolki daa gitta dolki da gitta'.

dolki da gitta, dolki da gitta

(All are happy to see Geet there'. )

She is wearing the same lahenga that she bought'. Her hairs are untie'.She is wearing'.long Silver earings and mangtikka'she is looking beautiful all are amazed to see her beauty''.

Maan is also surprise to see her' she is look so magnificent that he can't take his eyes from her' he is starring her continuslly, as she is looking fabulous

Sameera is standing with him but he forgets her'and just starring her.

Tik Tik tik tik tik tik kanda dolki da gitta'. Music is still going behind'

Geet Come to his dad' and both hugs each other'

Then to his mother'and also hugs her'

Then she went up to Heer and Prem'and hugs them

Then she again starts singing & dancing'

Chakaar aisa mundey chalaye (come to Prem and singing'..)

Kudi da baapu nas Na aaya'''

All ladies are singing'. Wha wha wha wha wha wha wha'

[Then she comes to Mr. Malhotra']

Chakaar aisa mundey chalaye

Kudi da baapu nas Na aaya..

Ladiyes are singing' Kudi da baapu nas Na aaya..

Jhagda Sagaii de naal le aaya'

Phir hogayina Tayariyan oye sunle mere meeta kandha [dholki da Gitta Dholki da gitta'] 2

She comes to Mr. Khurana and hugs her and then both dance. 'Together'

Maan Surprise to see his dad is dancing with her

Maan yea tho dad ko bhi janti hain' aur Dad k saath dance tho aise kar rahi hain jaise pata nahi kitne saalon se janti hooo'

Then she saw Ramukaka who serving drinks to guests.

She takes tray from his hand and handed over to other waiter'

She also insist him to dance with him' but he shies' then he make one or two moves and leaves from there in shyness'

Now she comes to Heer and starts singing'

Kudi di cham cham kardi bindi

Laali hoonthan di kuch kandi'.

All ladies are singing'. Wha wha wha wha wha wha wha'

Sona Roop saaha naa jaye '

Munda ciitii diya bajee

Do dil deewane mil gaye

Yea Pyar hi aankhir Jeeta'..

Kandha dholki da gitta'.

Dholki da gitta''.3

Now she goes to everyone one by one and dance with everybody

First she goes to Heer & Prem

Ruth sagnadi aayeiii'..

Mundey Kudidi sagaayi'

Ruth sagna dii aayii

Mundaey kudii di sagaaiii'..

Now she goes to Mr. Malhotra & Juneja'' and dance with them

Kuch mundey ne ankhiyaan Maariyaan

Theay kuch Kudi ne kita'.

Now she goes to Mrs. Malhotra, Mrs. Khurana & Mrs. Juneja'. and dance with them

Kandha Dholki daa gitta dolki da giitta

Now she drags everyone to the dance floor'

She went up to Maan also and checking him out from top to toe'. and make furious face' and ignores him and drags' Sameera to the dance floor'''.

Now song is finished all claps Geet hugs her Mom & Dad'they also hugs her'. Heer also come up to them and hugs all of them.

Mr. Malhotra: today I'am very happy''' my family is complete today'

Heer: to Geet: Thanks chutki for coming and what a great surprise this my best gift of engagement' And both hug each other'''..

Maan talking to Prem : Tho yea hain tum looghon ki chutki' Par Dad ney iska bilkul sahi naam rakha hain' Hitler

Mr. Juneja: can we start with the engagement ceremony'

Mr. Malhotra: yae sure Mr. Juneja'

Now Prem & Heer goes up to the satge

Geet: also go with them Mrs. Malhotra brings the Rings'

Now ring ceremony starts '''

Phale heer ne Prem KO Ring phenaayi' and all claps

Then Prem ne Heer KO Ring phenaayi' and all claps

Now Geet hugs them ''.. and congrachulate them''.

Geet: So Jijaaji''.. aaj se dii officially apki half wife' ho gayi hain''.

Prem: Half wife''.. with a question look

Geet: Haan Half wife'''. Kyunki Puuri Wife banney ke liye tho aap dono kii shaadi hooni jaaroori hain naa'''

And laughs'.

Geet: and one more thing'' agar aap ne meri dii ko roolaya na tho phir main apka kya haal karti hun ''.. aap dekhnaa'..

Mr. Khurana: Oye Hitler ''' tere dada giri phir shuru hoo gayi''' all laugs geet saw all laughing'

Geet: kya Papa kam sey kam abi tho nahi''.. vo bhi sab ke saamney''.

Mr. Khurana: Tere jo nautankii hain naa vo kisi Hitler se kam nahi hain'''

Mr. Khurana: told everybody how she does all this'

After listening this all are shocked'

Mr. Malhotra: kya beta tum Khidkii sey andar aayi' Tume khai lagi tho nahi'

Geet: kya Paa' agar mujhe lagi hooti tho kya main aise dance kar paati Paa main ek dum zhaakas hun' she strech his cheeks and I know Paa u love a lot''. But I'am absoutelly fine so don't worry'''.

Geet: Kya Papa apne dara diya naa Paa ko'. Maine thabi apko mana kiya tha''

Mr. Khurana: Beta I'm soory' all laughs that inested of Geet saying soory Mr. Khurana is Saying soory to her''

Geet: I'ts ok Papa'. She also laughs and hugs him.. All are amazed to saw ther bonding'

Geet: Ok Papa aap mujhe aunty aur champ sey nahi milaayen gey'

Mr. mallotra: calls both of them'. Maan is standing behind Geet with Prem'. As Mr. Khurana call them Maa turns his back towards him'

Mr. Khurana: Come here' Champ'.

Maan: turns to him and nodes his head in Yes'.

Mrs. Khurana come there '.. Mr. Khurana meet my biwiji'.. Geet smiles and touches her feet'..

Mrs. Khurana: she blessed her'. and said'.. Beta tum tho sachhi main bhout pyaari hoo'

Geet: Kyun aunty kya phele aap Koo shak tha kya' Papa ney mere bare main aap ko kya boola tha''

Mrs. Khurana: Kuch nahi bas yahi kaha tha kii tum bhut pyaari hoo'

Geet: Haan aunty actually vo tho main bachpan sey huun'kuyn Paa huun naa (by raising her eyebrows )

Mr. Malhotra: haan ho baba ho'.. and all laughs'.

Now Maan comes behind her'''

Mr. Khurana: Meet champ'

Geet: Turns her face towards him: and saw him and shocked 'Yea hain aap kaa champ' Papa u are joking naa''

Mr. Khurana and all other people are puzzaled by listing this'.

Mr. Khurana: Haan beta yahe hain mera beta'

Geet: Impossible' Yea champ nahi hoo sakta'. Yea tho looser hain'

All laughs' Now Maan is furious after here this'

How could u say me a looser

Geet: That's what u are a looser'

Maan: Dad you had named her right Hitler, She is really a Hitler''

Geet: How dare u call me Hitler only Papa calls me Hitler'.. this copyright is only with Papa'..

All comes near to them they don't know why they are fighting''

Mr. Khurana: shouts. ''Stooop'

Geet and Maan now are quite'

Mr. Khurana to Maan: u tell me why you both are fighting'

Maan is about to speek'

Geet: Papa why he'll will tell you' I' ll tell u eles he will make story by himself'

Mr. Khurana: ok.. u shoot''.

Geet starts' I went to to mall to buy dress for me to wear in my di's engagement' then she forgets' and ask Paa do u like my lehenga.. Then she turns around How I'am looking'

Maan: Theek lag rahi hoo' aage bataoo'

Geet: Tumse pucha maine''. Maine mere Paa sey pucha hain' tumhare views kii mujhe koi jarurat nahi hain'

Mr. Malhotra: Haan beta bhut achhi lag rahi hoo'. Ab aage bataaooo'

Geet: when I'm coming out from the shop I'am talking on the phone with Ramukaka''and..

Mrs. Malhotra: Kya Ramukaka pata tha ki tum aa rahi thi''

Geet: Maa VO baat chodo naa phir aage tho suno kya hua' phir yea looser samney sey aaya isney mujhe Dhaka maara' vo tha acha tha kiii mai bach gayi' aur jab

Maan interfer in between and said aur yea tho baatho tum girney sey bachi kaise'

Geet: haan haan bata rahi hunn '. Paa vo tho accha tha kii vaha sey guzar rahe ek bhale aadmi ney bacha liya nahi tho'.. yea looser

Maan: Excuse me tume kisi bhale aadmi ne bachaya maine nahi'''

Geet: Tum kisi bhi angle sey bhale aadmi dikhthe hoo kya tum tho bas looser dikhte hoo''

Mr. Khurana: Maan don't interfer ' Let her speak first'.

Geet: see what Papa is saying let me speak first' Then you give your excuse'.

Mr. Khurana : ab meri maa tum aage baathoogi kya hua''

Geet: haan Papa phir jab maine ise soory bolne ko kaha tho yea looser mujhe hii blame kaney laga'''

Maan: Joothi'''

Geet: Main kabhi jhoot nahi bolti'.. puch loo kisi sey bhi''..

Mr. Malhotra: Now Beta u tell us what actually happened''.

Maan: yes uncle''. Maan tell all what actually Happened''

Mr. Malhotra: Now how can we decide who is saying true'''

Geet: Paa main sach bool rahi hun

Maan: Uncle she is lying'i'am said all the truth'

Mr. Malhotra: Now there is only one option u both say soory to each other and be friends'..

Geet: No' Paa main soory nahi bolungii''.. aur frendship tho door kii baat hain'.

Maan: main bhi tumse friendship karne key liye mara nahi jaa raha'''. Aur main bhi soory nahi boolunga''..maine tho issey bachaaya soory or thanks tho isse khena chahiiye''

Heer: Shut up u both of u ''' Engagement meri ahain aur saari kii saari footage tum doono lerahe hoo''..mujhpe aur Prem key bare main koi sooch bhi nahi raha hain''.

Mr.Khurana: Leaves both of them with their fight '''lets go from there and lets enjoy the party'

Now Maan & Geet are only there'

Geet: Tumhaare wajha sey mare dii ki engagement ki band baj gayi hain' aur mari di mujhse naazaj hoo gaiye hain' Tume tho main dhekhloogi' par baaad main' and she leaves'

Maan: shouts chodunga tho main bhi nahi tumey'.

And he also leaves from there'


Precap: Maaneet fight again...


PART-11

Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow loved the update
Awww...such a cute family reunion..
LOL loved the fight haha
Lol geet climbing from window hehe
LOved it..
Cant wait for the next update
Continue soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it😊
The song was nice.
Family reunion was fab.
Maaneet fight was cute.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that was super bumper update.... as requested.... please update everyday ... i would love maan to know that this is geet before geet knows who champ is!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm interesting start...lets see wen they will recognize each other
loved it a lot
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee

very hileriousssssssssssss

i really like this FF.

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