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Posted: 14 years ago
love this ff and amazing update as usual 👏👏👏👏👏
thanks 4 pm xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!
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Awesome Update
Loved it
Maan flirting!!😳
Hayee...Amazing
Continue soon
Thank u!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
really loved the way maan kept on annoying geet and the last part was just awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...
loved d way maan is irritating geet....
n yaar plz ye sameera wala confusion dur kardo....
thnx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Goood part yaar
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i love geetmaan

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Posted: 14 years ago
nahhi geet, please don't avoid. Bechara devdas ho gaya😭.
Geet no matter how hard you try to avoid him, you are going to fall in love with him so just accept it.😆😆😆😆 Kitna taang kar rehi hoo usko.😭
lool maan thinks he is seeing geet shopping and geet trying to hide from. 😆😆😆
love the way he is advising on what jewellery and dresses to get and geet does the opposite of what he says. 😆😆😆
loved this dialogure "Maan comes more closer and said apna muuh tho bandh karloo nahi tho Maakhi chali jaayigi he chuckle…. and he leaves from there ". 😆😆😆😆
lool geet is scared of the attraction she feels for maan but does not understand it yet. 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Geeta....
This is Tressa here... I just happened to read ur ff by chance... found the title interesting... & believe me I loved the story... The ff is equally interesting... Maaneet fights are too good ya... Their arguements are really funny...
Please add me to ur pm list... & ya please do update the next part soon...
I hell lot worried ya... What if Geet falls in love wid champ??? kkk... I know she is gonna fall in love wid him... But wats gonna happen wen she gets to know that her champ is none other than Maan????
Please update soon... & dont let the suspense stay for too long... or should I say Dont reveal the suspense...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ff plzz cont soon n pm me on d next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. waiting for geet to fall in luv with him.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-25

Next Day''

Geet is geeting ready for office Heer is trying to stop her as she don't want her to go office'.

Geet: Di please I have to go..

Heer: Chutki I am going after 6 days and don't even listning me'..

Geet: Di please don't say that'. I love to spend time with u but I have an important work I'll finish it and come home as soon as I can'.. and she hugs her & leaves for the office

so as she coming downstairs and she sliped and shout Maaa''.and started crying like a baby'.. everybody comes there and saw Geet was slipped and crying'' everyone is very tensed except Heer''. She is laughing thoroughly'..

Geet: Dii main roo rahi hun I got a Sprain on my ankle aur aap hans rahe hoo'

Heer: actually main there sprain par nahi tujhpar hans rahi huun'

Geet: is still cring and said mujpar kyun''

Heer: vo isliye kyunki tuney office janey key liye mere sey kitna lad rahi thi par ab deekh even God don't want u to go office'..

Mr. Khurana: Heer no' don't laugh on her'.

Mrs. Khurana: haan & take her to the room

Heer: chalo is Sprain key vajaha sey kam sey kam tu office thoo nahi jaayigi'.

Heer: Meri Baath maan leti naa tho yea sprain bhi nahi aata'..

Geet: ok di .. mujko derd ho reha hain aur aap mujhe bhaasahan deay rahi ho..

Heer: ok wait '.. she apply ornament on her ankle and give her a pain killer'.

Heer: chal tu rest kar main aati hun'..

Geet: di'. Now I am here were are u going'..

Heer: arey kahi nahi tere chakar main subah sey mainey kuch bhi nahi khaaya. Kuch kaaney key le lekar aati hun'.

Geet: ok Diii''.

As she went her phone rings.,'

Geet picked it up '..

Geet: heloo'..

Prem: hey saali jii kaisei hain aap'''

Geet: pata hain jiju I got a sprain on my ankle'..

Prem: how '.

Geet: vo I slipped from the stairs'.

Prem: geet tub hi naa kuch naa kuch karti hii rehti hain' chal I am coming there'..

Geet: ok'

Heer: comes there with tosts and butter'with 2 cups of Hot chocolate'..

Heer: hey chutki kiska phone tha'..

Geet: dii jiju kaa' he is coming'.

Heer: ok and gives 1 cup to Geet

Geet: thanks di'.

In malhotra menssion'..

Maan is in his room and thinking kya mainey joo kal Geet key saath kiya vo theek tha'

Vo dusrii ladkiyon kii there nahi hain' sayad usko achha naa laga ho'

Par main bhi kya karun main jab bhi uskey paas hota hun I can't controle my self'.

Yaar kitna time hoo gaya par main usko abhi tak kuch bhi nahi batha paya'. Par kya us hitler ko mere behavior sey bhi nahi lagata kii main usey kitna pyaar karta hunn'

Suddenly his phone rings'.. He picked it up'. Hey bro whats up''

Prem: kuch nahi yaar actually mainey yea kehnay key liye phone kiya tha kii main aaj tere saath nahi aa sakta tu khud hii chale jaa'.

Maan: bhi aisa mat bolo yaar apko pata hain mainey kitni muskil sey yea appointment lii hain '. Vo Delhi key best designer hain'..

Prem: haan yaar champ mujhko pata hain' par yaar main nahi aa sakta'

Maan: isssey jayada important kaam aur kya hain'..

Prem: vo actually kya hain naa geet key paaire main Sprain aa gaya hain' tho main vahi jaa reha hun'..

Maan: what'. In shock..

Prem: haan'..

Maan Par kaisey'.

Prem: vo catually vo stairs sey gir gayi thi''. Ok call u later'.and he cuts the phone

Maan: is now very much tensed.. yea ladki bhi naa'. Hamesha kuch naa kuch karti rehti hain' he went outside and gets into his car and drive it to Malhotra Menssion'.


Maan: rushed to Geet's Room'.

Geet is alone in the room'

Maan: comes to Geet and said in a worried tone tum theek tho hoo'

Geet: is ssurprised to saw Maan there barmy

Geet: in a surprised yes'..

Maan: take a breath of relief. .. thank God'. Tumko pata hain main kitna dar gaya tha''

Heer: comes there: and said what tum dar gaye they Geet key liye' par kyun'..

Maan: relised what he said' and said is hitler key liye nahi actually main tho stairs key liye dar gaya tha mainey sooch kahi iskey chaaker main yea stairs tho nahi toot gaye'..

Heer: what'.. are u nuts'.. tum itni doore sey stairs dekhney aaye hoo''

Maan: haan'.

Geet: is still surprised and thought a little bit before he is so concerned about me but he changed his words which he said earlier is right or what he said rightnow is true'. the concern for me I can see in his eyes is true or I am just misuderstading him'..

Heer: par tumko kaise pata chala kii chuki key ankle main Sprain aaya hain'.

Prem comes there and said mainey bataya tha isko' he is surprised to saw Maan before him''

Prem: Par champ tu yahan kya kar reha hain'..

Maan: Bhai aapko tho pata hain naa Dad iskii kitni chinta kartey hain'. Unhooney hii mujhkoo bejaa hain'.
Geet is still starring Maan and just thinking about him''

Heer: tho tumko uncle ney bejaa hain'

Maan: haan nahi tho mujhe koi shook nahi hain yahan aaney kaa'vo bhi jab yea hitler Ghar main hoo..

Geet: is he lying or I am misunderstanding him ' but the concern in his eyes for me'..

Kya yea sacchi main yahan Papa key kehney par aaya hain'..

Heer: hey come-on champ tujhe pata hain uskey paair main kitna dard hain'. Aur tu abhi bhi laadayi karney key mood main hain''

Maan: ok bhabi aaj main isko chood deta hun'.

Mr. khurana also comes there as he also got the news from Mr. malhotra and comes to see Geet and said beta tu theek tho hain naa.

Geet: Papa main theek hun'.

Mr. khurana Mujhe kisi ney bathaya kyun nahi'

Heer, Prem & Geet is shoked:

Maan: main tho gaya Dad ko bhi abhi aana tha'

Heer: par champ tho keh reha tha kii usko aap ney bejaa hain'..

Mr. khurana: looks at Maan'

Maan: aaj tho main gaya'.

Mr. khurana: oh yes mainey hii tho isko beja tha I am so silly'. Main tho bool hii gaya'.

Maan: thank God '.. No'' thank Dad' aapney bach liya'..

Now everybody in Geets room and having chit chaat but Geet is still lost in the emotions that she saw in Maan's eye for herself'

Heer: hey chutki why are u so quite'.

Geet: nothing just feeling drowsy

Mr. Khurana: ok beta you take a nap we all go outside yous just take full rest' and Mr. Khurana said all of them to leave her room''

All as leaves Geet is still lost she is thinking about Maan from the day she notice that change'..

Geet why I am thinking about him is he really means any thing to me''

Maan comes to her as he forget his mobile over there'.

Geet has just closed her eyes and remembering all Maneet moments and having a smile on her face while thinking all that'

Maan silently comes there as he don't want to disturb her. he notice that smile on her face and chuckle to saw that'.. Geet opens her eyes as she heard his chuckling'.

Geet: tum '

Maan: soory Geet I forget my mobile u just take rest I am going'.

Geet: hey wait'..

Maan: what happen Geet do u have to say something''.

Geet: Yes'

Maan: Comes near and sat beside her'..

Maan: Yes ask what u want to'.

Geet: actually' but she don't know how to ask'.. due to nervousness she is sweeting very badly'.

Maan: are u ok Geet u are sweeting'.. Maan forward his hand to her forehead to wipe her sweat'..

As he touched her 100 watts current blow over her whole body' and she shivered with his touch'.. and they have an eyelock Geet is just lost in the love that was in the Maan's eye for her'.. his heart skipped couple of beats by watching those dazzling eyes''.. he moves even more closer geet can feel his breath touching her lips'..she slowly closed her eyes as she also let him to lock that distance between them' as they

about to kiss Heer call Maan and they snaps back they realsie what they are up to Geet pushes him back and her eyes are filled with tears''Maan forward his hand to wipes them off but Geet stops him and ask him to leave''

Maan leaves from there feeling guilty'..

While in the room she is crying and thinking what he will be think of me that always I stops him doing all this but today I am doing all the same'.. she is feeling guilty as how could she be carried away by her feeling''

Next Day In Malhotra Menssion the prepration and decoration are in great swing'.


Geet is not talking to anyone and just crying ' Heer also tried to talk to her but she avoided .. she thought that the mood swings are because of the pain '. So she ignored..

In the Khurana Menssion Maan'.. what is she thinking of me that I want xxx from him and nothing now how can I face her''. her eyes filled with tears is flashes in front of him'.

Next day is the Sangeet and now Geet is also recoverd from the Sprain'..

Heer: comes to geet and said '.. hey chutki today is my sangeet and I am very happy u know from my childhood I dream of my weeding ''. I know u are also happay so I want u to do dance & sing as I want my weeding to be best'..Geet smiled and said yes Dii all will happen as u want'.. and we both will dance 'they huged' Geet to himself Di main apkey liye kuch bhi kar sakti hun aur main apko vo saari khusiyaan doongi which u dream about'

In Juneja house the prepration are going in a great swing and all were happy'

Maan is little tensed but to see Prem he wipes it off from his face' and wear a big smile on his face' he decide that he will now not think about all that happened'. And try to be like as he was '

In Malhotra Menssion all guests are reached they welcome them Geet and Heer take blessing from them'

Geet is now totally forgetten all that happened in that happiness'. She is dancing singing with all the guests , heer, his parents and enjoying each and every moment'

In the evening the Juneja family is also reaching for the Sangeet ceremony''

All reached there Include Maan & Yash'.

Maan is in a black shervani and Yash in offwhite '.

Prem is in royal blue shervani'.

Geet is still in the Heer's room and helping her to getting ready'

Maan is feeling nervous as how will he face Geet '

Yash notice that uneasiness on his face and asked him' but he ignored it and said due to the work he had done full day'..

Sameera also comes there as Prem invites her'

All meat Prem take blessing from his in-laws all elders shown their gratitude by hugging each other'.

Prem is looking for Heer'.

Mr. Khurana: beta tum jisko dund rehe hoo naa vo abhi nahi aaney waali '..

Prem: par chahu why''

Mr.Malhotra: arey beta vo dulhan hain time tho legi naa' all laughs Prem just chuckle'

Mrs. Khurana: heer kaa tho samjh main aatha hain par chutki kahan hain''..

As maan heard Geet name his mind divert to them'..

Mrs. Malhotra: Vo heer key saath hii hain aati hoogi'.

Maan to himself: kya vo mere vajah sey nahi aa rahi..


Part-26

Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago

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