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Pyaar Tho Hona Hi Tha...

Story So far

When Geet was in School she was overweight and Maan and She studies in same shool infact in same. class On Geet's birthday Maan insulted her because of his own ego. And this result in Geet leaves Delhi and shifted to Londan and stayed with Maan's Father (Mr. khurana) but nor Geet nither Maan knows about this many times they have telephonic conversation but never recognize each other's voice. But after 4 and half Years, now she is beautiful slim and Mr. Khurana & Geet share a great bonding and now Geet Came back to India and bumps on Maan , Maan saves her from falling but Geet constantly blaming Maan and says him a Looser and leaves Maan dint like this, but they again meat on Geet sister's engagement and again start fighting and now whenever they meat they fight, but with this fighting Maan start falling for her and on her 21st birthday he got to know the truth that Geet is the same Geet whome he insulted in their childhood days and because of him she suffers a lot. As days passed they becomes friends but not yet Geet knows that he is the Maan who insulted her in childhood.. Maan tries but Ramukaka (servent of the house) interrupt and called Maan as Maanav and also told Maan to not told anyting to her as it hurts her. Now Geet is also falling for Maan but dosen't shows him

so did Geet got to Know that Maanav is the same Maan because of whom she had to left her family and setteled in London and will she ever forgive him.


Part-38 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1545607/ff-pyar-tho-hona-hi-tha-maneet-truth-reveled-new





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Posted: 14 years ago
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pleasee pleasee please post next part soon...
and pm me.pleasee...
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Congratz on the new thread!!
Cont soon Xx...
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congo for the new thread deat...
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Part-39

Geet: come there'. She saw both Maan and Yash talking'.

Geet: Yea dono yahan kya kar rahe hain''.

Yash: Par yaar tu isko jitna simple samajh raha hain yea utna simple nahi hain'

Maan: having tears on his eyes'..

Geet: why is this looser crying'..

Geet come towards them as Geet does not like him crying'..

Maan: Pata hain yaar jab usko yea sach pata chalega ki main hii Maan hun tho vo mujhsey nafrat karney lagegi''

Those words striking on Geet's ears'..

Geet was rooted there to hear this'..and tears rolling down her eyes'.

Maan: main usey bhaut pyaar karta hun aur uski aankhon main apney liye nafrat nahi dekh sakta lekin mujhe phir bhi usko yea sach batana padegaa' kyunki agar usko yea baat kisi aur sey pata chalega tho shaayad vo bilkul bardasht nahi kar paayigi''

Yash: par yaar agar tu usko batayega tab bhi tho vo tujhsey nafrat karegi'

Maan: haan pata hain' par yaar tab kam sey kam mere dil pe yea booj (Guilt) tho nahi rahega ki mainey usey yea sach chupaya'.. aur vo mujhsey nafrat karne lag bhi gayi tho kya hua main tho usey hameesha pyaar karta rahunga'.

Yash: Tu Geet sey itna pyaar karta hain'..

Maan: haan bhaut pyaar apni jaan sey bhi jaayda'.

Maan: vasiey bhi jo mainey uske saath bachpan main kiya hain uskey dukh kea age mera dukh kuch bhi nahi hain'.tujhe pata hain vo jitna apney aap ko strong dikhaney kii koshish karti hain naa utni hain nahi'.

Geet is listning all this'.. and crying''

Geet turns and leaves from there'''

While she is going downstairs'..Maan's words are continuously striking on her ears'

Geet: tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho mere saath' tumney mujhsey itna bada sach chupaya vo bhi itney dino tak'.. aur ramukaka ney bhi vo tho jantey they naa sab kuch phir bhi kyun kaka kyun'she is crying and crying'

Heer comes there' as she is calling her name geet wipes her tears and said haan dii (she controlled her emotions in her heart)

Heer: tu yanah hain tho kaisa hain haamara terrace'.

Geet: di bahut accha'..

Heer noticed Geet'

Heer: Geet tu ro rahi hain' kya hua Geet

Geet: kuch nahi di'

Heer: Kuch tho baat hain tujhe kisi ney kuch kaha kya

Geet: Nhai di kuch nahi hua' not facing her

Heer: dekh chutki meri taraf dekh ' she turned her '

Heer: tu roo kyun rahi hain

Geet: actually di vo mainey apki aur apni bachapn ki photo dekhi tho rona aagaya '

Ab aap humsey door ho gaye hoo naa''

Heer: tu sach main pagal hain'. Heer kabhi bhi apni chutki sey door ho sakti hain'.

Biddai ke time mujhe chup Kara rahi thi aura b kud hi ro rahi hai

Geet: hugs her tightly'.. Geet di aap mujhsey khabhi door tho nhai jaaooge naa'..

Heer: tu phele chup kar ' nahi pagli main apni chutki sey kahbhi door jaaa sakti hun kya'

Cha lab roona band kar aur ek pyaari sii smile de''

Geet: gives a fake smile'.

Heer: chii aisi smile sey tho aacha hain tu rote hii reh'..

Geet: di'' both smiles'..

Heer: haan ab mili naa mujhe teri pyaari wali smile cha lab chal''

Geet Di main wash room hoke aati hun Maa Paa mujhe aise dekhenge tho pareshaan ho jaayenge

Heer: ok Par jaldi aana''

Geet: Haan di'..

Geet: went to the washroom' and againg start crying all the flashes of her childhood memory are in front of her eyes

Geet to himself: nahi Geet now u will not cry'.. She wipes her tears and washes her face'..

In the Hall Maan & Yash also comes there'..

Yash: ek baar phir sooch le Maan'.

Maan: haan main sooch liya hain''

Prem comes to them: hey guys where were u '

Yash: Bhaiya VO hum terrace pey Gaye they''

Perm: chalo a baa gaye ho tho kuch masti ho jaye'.

Maan: nahi bhai aaj nahi'..

Prem: mere liye please''.. Chal ek Gana hi hojaye''

Maan: ok '..

Prem everybody now maan will sing a song foe all of us'.

Everybody claps''

Geet also comes there''.

Maan Noticed her' Geet also noticed him but ignore him'

Maan start singing''..

Dekhte hi dekhte dil kho gaya
Dekhte hi dekhte dil kho gaya
Dil kho gaya to pyaar tum se ho gaya
Is pyaar ko kab tak magar chupayenge hum
Dekhte hi dekhte dil kho gaya
Dekhte hi dekhte dil kho gaya
Dil kho gaya to pyaar tum se ho gaya
Is pyaar ko kab tak magar chupayenge hum

Jaane gi tu jis din mujhe
Mujhse root jaayegi tu
Todegi is dil ko mere
Khud bhi toot jaayegi tu

Mere dil pe na kaaboo chala
Teri baato ka jaadu chala
Yeh dil apna to gaya

While singing Maan is just looking at Geet but Geet is not looking to him''

Dekhte hi dekhte dil kho gaya
Dekhte hi dekhte dil kho gaya
Dil kho gaya to pyaar tum se ho gaya
Is pyaar ko kab tak magar chupayenge hum

Dekhte hi dekhte dil kho gaya
Dekhte hi dekhte dil kho gaya
Dil kho gaya to pyaar tum se ho gaya
Is pyaar ko kab tak magar chupayenge hum

Everybody claps''..

Heer: hey Geet now cheerup plese smile yaar''

Geet: yaa di I am fine '

Heer: so now its you turn''

Geet: no di'

Heer: apni di key liye please agar tu mujhsey pyaar karti hain tho please'..

Geet: ok''

Geet start singing

Aankh hai bhari bhari aur tum
Muskuraane ki baat karte ho
Zindagi khafa khafa aur tum
Dil lagaane ki baat karte ho
Aankh hai bhari bhari aur tum
Muskuraane ki baat karte ho

Mere haalaat aise hai
Ke main kuch kar nahin sakti
Tadapta hai yeh dil lekin
Main aahein bhar nahin sakti
Zakhm hai hara hara aur tum
Chot khaane ki baat karte ho
Zindagi khafa khafa aur tum
Dil lagaane ki baat karte ho
Aankh hai bhari bhari aur tum
Muskuraane ki baat karte ho

Kabhi jo khwaab dekha to
Mili parchhaaiyaan mujhko
Mujhe mehfil ki khwaahish thi
Mili tanhaaiyaan mujhko
Har taraf dhuaan dhuaan aur tum
Aashiyaane ki baat karte ho
Zindagi khafa khafa aur tum
Dil lagaane ki baat karte ho
Aankh hai bhari bhari aur tum
Muskuraane ki baat karte ho

She runs toward heer and againg hugs her'.

Now everybody is worried that why Geet is crying'

What happened to her'

Mr. Khurana: isko kya hua hain

Heer: kuch nai bas main main yahan aagayi hun naa isliye'.

Mr. Malhotra: arey beta tho kya hua' tumhaara jab bhi man chahee tum apni di sey mil sakti hoo'..

Maan: in his own thought geet kyun ro rahi hain' Yea isse ahank kya ho gaya hain' jaroor kuch hua hain''

Mr. Khurana: Meri Hitler aise ro rahi hain'. Yea tho dosron ko roolati hain'..

Heer: haan voo hi tho main bhi soch rahi hun jo dosron ko roolati hain vo khuud kasie rorahii hain'

Mr. khurana: I think iski tabiyat kharab hain' yae nahi ho sakta'..

Geet is still crying'

Geet: Paa mujhe ghar jana hain''

Mr. Malhotra: Par chutki'.

Mr. Juneja: yaa take her home I think she is not well'..

Heer: Yaa Paa u take her to the home'..

Mr.Malhotra: ok '

Mrs. Malhotra: Geet lets go'.

Maan's words are still striking on her ears

As they about leaving Geet feel dizzy

Maan notice her' and shouts Geet..he went to her and geet fainted on her arms'..

Everybody now get very tensed''.

Everybody comes to her'
Mrs. Malhotra: Chutki kya hua'

Mr.Malhotra: I think we have to take her to home'

Mr. Khurana: Yes u are right'

Mr. khurana: maan take her to the car'..

Maan: yes dad' he take her to the car'the tension is very clear on her face'

Yash: Champ don't worry she'll be fine'

Maan: Geet get up.. please get up what happened to u'

Mr.Malhotra, Mrs. Malhotra, Heer & Mr. Khurana also comes outside

Mr.malhotra went inside the car

Heer: I am also coming with u..

Mrs.Malhotra.. no beta you stay here pooja is just finished and u have to be here' we inform u about her and tomaro u are coming for peg pheras'

So u stay here'.

Mr. Malhotra: comeon fast'

They all went into the car'

Maan puts her into the car '

Maan: Dad I am also coming' u people leave I'll come..

Mr. Khurana: ok''.

And they all leaves'.

Maan Starts his car and leaves while driving he calls Doctor' & infom him about Geet's condition'..

Maan in his own thoughts: what happened to her'

All reached home with Geet'.

Mr. Malhotra lifts Geet and take her to her room'

Mr.Khurana we should call the doctor' as he about to call Doctor reached there''

Doctor: how is Geet'

Mr. Khurana: you who informed u'

Doctor: Maan'

Mrs. Malhotra: thank god doctor u are here please check what has happened to her''.

Doctor: you don't panic Mrs. Malhotra I'll just check' everything will be alright'

Maan also comes there'.

Doctor Examin her'.

Doctor not need to worry I think due to exhaustion she faits'

You just take care of her and just take care she din't take any tension and give her a glass Juice as she awake'..

I giving u some medicen give them to her and she'll be fine'.

Maan: Uncle I'll bring the medicens

Maan take the prescription and leaves'.

Mr. Khurana: (murmur).. Such main bhaut pyaar karta hain'..

Bagwan kare inke pyaar ko kisi ki nazar na lage'..

Precap: Geet get conscious

What u guys think what will she do now...

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Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago
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hope she does not hate maan. congrts for the new thread
Edited by ammu5 - 14 years ago
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wow awsome yaaar !!!!
loved it ~~~~~~~
hope geet accepts his feelings..
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congrats !!!!!!!! 4 d new thread ...
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Congrats on new thread
awesome update

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just worried and wondering what is the actual reason of those 4 years??? its something more than what meets the eye...

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