FF: Pyar Tho Hona Hi Tha(Maneet)Truth reveled (New - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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NICE UPDATE YAAR PLZZZZZZ ADD ME PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi... nice ff...
loved it.. do cont soon...
plz add me in ur pm list...
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ps-about sending pm, y dont u ask in helpdesk... wud luv 2 help u bt evn i dnt knw hw 2 do dat... hope u dnt mind...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part-4

Geet: Maan

Maan: Hmm'.

Geet: I have to go now di is waiting for me ''.

Maan: Ok ''. Aaj sham ko milen''.

Geet: Smiles no'. kal school main milte hain and leaves

Maan: Thank god maine soocha ki aaj ki shaam is Moti k saath guzaarni padegi'.

As he is leaving ''. Pari comes to him ''..

Pari: how can u do this Maan '.how can u ditch me''

Maan: but when did I diched u'' u rembered that day it is u wo din't accept me '''

Pari: Yaaa but.. I said no it means not that I love u ' I thought u will impress me or u will owe me but no u not even tried to talk to me '.. I hate u Maan I hate u

Maan: but I love u pari'.. I love u'..

Pari: what and what was that u said to Geet''

Maan: That was my plan to make u feel jealous and to accept ur love for me'' and that what happen''

Pari: hugged him ''.. and said do not do this again or I'll kill u'..

Geet listen all this and hurt she is crying crying and crying''

She is comes there to said him that they can meet in evening''' but she got a shocked'..

Maan again proposed her and she accept, Geet stands on the corner and witnessed of their moment and having tears in her eyes'''

In the night Geet cried her heart out'. But din't show her pain to anyone in the family' she is very much hurt''

Next day in the School Pari and Maan tells everybody about their relation'.. that day Geet din' come as she is suffering from high fever''

After two day Geet comes to school but din't react to see Maan and Pari together'.

Pari thought that Geet is also know about Maan's plan and she just helped him'.

Maan thought that Pari had told her everything and she understands'

Geet now being more reserved she not even talk to Pari very much''

Now Pari spend most of her time with Maan. And only said hi and hello to Geet''.

Day passed months passed''''

Day of board exam'''..

(as I already said Geet and Maan are the best students of class) and Maan always becomes first in his class, but Geet never mind

Geet is fully prepared, but this time Maan is not fully prepared as he is now more concentrated on Pari as on books

Result announced''''..

Geet got the first position

Maan Got second'''

This can't bear by Maan'''.

Maan how can be that Moti be first'.. this can not be possible''

I'll teach that Moti a lesson''..

Next day is the Geet's Birthday''''..

In the morning'''Geet is on her bed every body wishes her happy birthday

Pari. also calls geet and congratulate and whishes her happy birthday''

There is a surprise party organized by geets's Dad''

He invited all her teachers her classmates.

Maan Prem and their family is also invited'

8'O clock'' Now Geet & Heer are in the Heer's room''

Heer: Chutki lets be ready tujhe pata hain naa dad ne kaha tha kii 8 baje tak ready hone k liye''..

Geet: Di par kyun hum kahi jaa rahre hain ''.

Heer: Paa ne tere Birthday clebrate karne k liye pizaa hut chlane ko kaha hain ''

Geet: whoow di Pizza Hut ''. I love him'.. he is world's best Paa'.. ok o'll be redy in 10 minutes''.. As she opening the door heer stops her and said'.. you need not to go anywhere your dress is here only''.

Geet: ok di''.

After 10 minutes Geet is ready''''.

Geet: Di' I'm ready lets go'''.

Heer: Tu bhi yaar aaj k din tho thoda makeup karle aur tune apne hair tie kyun kiye hain kya behenjee ki there lag rahi hain''..

Geet: kya di''. Aap ko pata hain mujhko yea makeup shekeup bilkul pasand nahi hain'. Aur rahi baat mere hairs kii mujhe kule Hairs main irritation hotii hain'' so please chale ab''..

Heer: Kya karun tera main'''' tu jhalli ki jhalli rahegi''. Chal

Geet & Heer are near the hall and there is dark and dark everywere'..

Geet: Di' Yahan itna andhera kyun hain''..

Heer: I think light nahi hain''.

Geet: What di'. Room main tho thi ''

Heer: kya yaar tu chal naa'' tu dar mat main hun naa tere saath huunn'..

Geet: Daar'' Aur main'.. main tho nahi daar rahi'..

Heer: Haan haan mujhe pata hain''.. tu andhre seay kitna darthi hain'. Chal ab''.

Heer Drags her and says chal naa '''

As they reached near the chandelier lights are on and noise around Happy Birthday to u Geet is Surprised and Shocked''.

Geet dad came up to her and said Happy Birthday once again beta'..

Mr. Malhotra: So beta how did u like my surprise'..

Geet: Dad its good ''.. but Paa u Know na I don't like celebrate in this grand manner'' its enough for me if we clebrate it together'''''

Mr. Malhotra: comeon beta u know naa I love to do all these things for u '..comeon now lets enjoy the party'''

Geet: Ok' Paa'

Pari comes to Geet Happy Birthday & Congratulation Geet Tune tho isbaar Maan Ko bhi Hara diya'. Geet with a smile Thanks Yaar'..

Geet: thanks yaar tu aagayi maine soocha tu nahi aayegii..

Pari: Kaise nahi aati tera Birthday Hain'' (Geet having a lovely smile but vanished when Pari said) aur Maan bhi tho aa raha hain tho mujhe tho aana hii hain'

Pari: Geet chal main aati hun'.

Geet: To herself'.. Yaar you are here because of Maan but not for me'.She had tears in her eyes'.

Mr. Malhotra: Hay baby lets go and cut the cake''

Geet: Din't show her tears to her Paa'. She wiped her tears.. and smile yea Paa lets go.

As she cutting the cake Maan enters and Pari Goes to him and hugged him'..Geet saw that and hurt'. Not for Maan and Pari growing relation because she is losing her friend'.

She cuts the cake and all enjoys the cake'..

After the cake cutting ceremony'. She went up to her room''

She is alone in her room recalling her good time with Pari and Maan'' She is holding Maan's photo in hand and saying'..


Geet: why Maan why did u do this to me tumne mere saath aisa kuyn kiya''.

Maan is searching Geet and went up to her room' and listen what geet is saying'..

Do u know how much I like u'. but u din't understand my feeling even u played with my feelings''.

Maan enters the room and said ''' Geet'.. Geet gets up and said Maan tum yaahaan '..

Maan: Kya bola tumne tum mujhse pyar karti ho'' khabi tumne apne app ko dekha hain hathi '. Lagti hoo aur mujhse pyar karne k sapne dekthi hoo''.. tabhi main soochun kii tum is baar first akise aagayi main jaanta hun yea sab tumne kara hain apne dad se bolkar examiner ko bribe kiya aur Mujhe beat karne k liye tum first aagayi hooo'.

Bhaahar saey tum jitni bhooli dhektii hoo naa utni hoo nahi''. Tum sey do chaar baar dhank seay baathin kya kar lii tho mujse payar karne k sapne dekhne lagi'' Tum agar duniya ki aakri ladki bhi hoogi na tho bhi main tho kya koi bhi tum jiase moti seay pyaar nahi karega''.. he snatches his photo from her hand and leaves'''

After he leaves Geet cries her heart out''.. Ramu kaka servent of that house (he loved Geet like his own daughter) saw all that and understand everything he came up to her and wiped her tears she hugged him tight and cried

Ramukaka: Chutki don't cry I'll go downstairs & tell malik every thing but geet stops him and said that he will not tell anybody about that'' and give him kasam and told him that every body are looking for u .

Geet: Kaka aap jaao main theek hunn'. After he left Geet locked herself in the room after half an hour heer knocks the door but she din't open so she thinks that she went slept so she dint disturb her''.. she went down to her parents Maa Paa I think Chutki is sleeping so I dint disturb her'.

Mrs. Malhotra: its Ok lets have dinner' let her sleep

All the guest and the family have their dinner and than everybody leaves

Raukaka tries to tell Mr. Malhotra about Geet but that he remember the Kasam that given by Geet and he stops.

All family members went to sleep'''

Precap: Geet left for London

Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update yaar..loved it ....maan is so much of attitude na.... teach him a nice lesson...pls do add me to ur pm list ....post the next update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yaaar i really don't kow how to add some one to pm list... i u can so help me..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzz do add me to the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: geeta.muskan

yaaar i really don't kow how to add some one to pm list... i u can so help me..............

dont add everybody to the pm list just ask everybody to add u as buddy nd then send everyone a message together abt the update wd the link its much easier
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank maansi.......... so u also do the same ........... 😊
Edited by geeta.muskan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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why 2 make geet moti in ur ff
why cant maan be ugly for once in
one of the ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
in my next ff i'll try to make maan ugly............. but for the time being just enjoy this FF........

kisi mahapurush ne kaha hain jo hain jiasa hain usi main santoost hoo.... agar jo aap chate hain ki vo hain .........agar hoona hoga tho jaaroor hoga.........ha ha ha..........😉 😆

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