FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

People for the 13 hours that was spent writing and editing, can you please spends few minutes for longer comments. If I may ask? No offense. Just had a yearning to see longer ones. My regulars are still missing. 😭

Tell me what you liked as well ?

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-
What can I say...I'm at loss of words you've rendered me speechless dear....
the whole thing....starting from before the wedding till the wedding completed !

Each and everything chalked out in such a beautiful manner....the emotions and feelings gosh everything was so profound and intense !
Maan and Geet ....love so pure and natural !
I was ecstatic reading the whole update....the rituals and all highlighted so very well !!!

I don't have words dear...wonderful !!!

Do continue soon....lets see what happens now....and this is one FF that is so very close to reality and portrays everything in such a factual manner.....
And to get a life partner like Maan is really too good !! I love him, actually the one in your FF is more good then in the serial I must say....

One question before I end, How do you portray such emotions so very deeply and beautifully ?? Have you taken this from someone's life or is it a part of you ? Everything is explained so artistically feels real !!!

Take Care,
Fatima

Yaya finally....My morning Extra whipped, double shot decaf, extra foam, non fat coffee is here. LOL. I just drink tea by the way.

Thank you for your long comment. I have been reading your comments but have been unable to get back to them, but I hope you understand when I give it back using the long updates.

Actually I don't know whose life these emotions are a part of? I just write In fact I don't know what I written until I go back and read them.

So thanks, as long as it makes sense to others I'm happy. If you ask me the fact that Maan is a little close to perfect here itself is not a realistic story line. Dont you think so?

I have only showed some flaws of Maan and even then you people are too positive to see it any other way. I'm a girl and so its easy to write about women's confusions, but since I dont know Much about men, I try to stick to the classic icons of perfection that is what Maan here is too.

Thank you.I loved you comments and have always.

@ rachana, I have to get back to many of your posts. But there is a special dedication post coming your way. This evening?

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Shalve

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

wow.. it was a perfect wedding... loved it... now just waiting for the next part.... pls update soon...

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

wow... speechless it was soo good

i could picture the whole wedding in my head

really good use of the pics as well

yess they are married! no separation now!! lol

suhaag raat next? lol

con't soon... long wait till wednesday!

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jia147

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

wowwwwwwwwwwww finally the wedding took place........... ab no separation.....Thank GOD............and loved the update......waiting eagerly for the next part.....:);)

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Maria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

awesome part Hansini

loved the proposal part

and the ring rasam the way geet and maan took out the ring together the tird time

loved the pheras

loved the way daadi explained about the red water

loved every bit of it

take good care of ur self

will be waiting 4 wednesday

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Maarrriiiam...Mariam :-)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

the wedding was absolutely amazing 🤗 you depicted all the ceremonies and their feelings at each stage with such detail that im out of words to describe what im feeling....xxxx

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amara7374

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

oh awesome dear
just loved it ❤️
cont soon..............

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: JRia
awesome part Hansini
loved the proposal part

and the ring rasam the way geet and maan took out the ring together the tird time

loved the pheras

loved the way daadi explained about the red water

loved every bit of it

take good care of ur self

will be waiting 4 wednesday

Wonder why you mentioned that they took out the ring for the third time.

She never took off the ring since she put it on her ring at the shop. Part of her didnt want to take it off.

She had in on all the time. He took it off to propose the right away because the last time he just handed it off for her to try and he had not mentioned his intentions clearly at that time.

Hope this clears up

Hasini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#110

Maan got convinced so easily...

Wow

and she actually managed to say what was in heart

Double Wow

I did not expect Maan to get convinced so easily..he really confuses me...everytime i think ok I have him all figured out there you go adding another layer to his personality and I am back to square one!!

Isn't the woman supposed to be all mysterious and difficult to decipher- not the other way round😆

On a serious note- I wish you kept/include a more heartfelt proposal/avowal for when they are finally alone together..I want them to have a heart to heart and Geet has to say much more than she is Maan ki Geet! Munda maan gaya hai..readers itni asaani se nahi manenge 😆

I am a North Indian (even north of Punjab) married to a Tam- I think you got the ceremonies pretty alright..Post wedding games are a part of the wedding all over India...

Overall what I am trying to say is that I loved the wedding...tho I am sure the readers are waiting more eagerly for the next part than Maan 😆

Why do I have a feeling that as usual you would have planned something different for us?

Can't wait...

EDIT: You did bring her family back

EDIT EDIT: The jewellery is wow!

Edited by shradhav - 14 years ago