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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasini67

Wonder why you mentioned that they took out the ring for the third time.
She never took off the ring since she put it on her ring at the shop. Part of her didnt want to take it off.
She had in on all the time. He took it off to propose the right away because the last time he just handed it off for her to try and he had not mentioned his intentions clearly at that time.

Hope this clears up
Hasini


i think she meant the ring from the water...that first game they played :)
btw...seriously once again want to compliment the details u have put and explained....
its a pleasure to read everything u write :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
just mind blowing

at last maan ki geet n happy marriage

loved this a lot


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shradhav

Maan got convinced so easily...


On a serious note- I wish you kept/include a more heartfelt proposal/avowal for when they are finally alone together..I want them to have a heart to heart and Geet has to say much more than she is Maan ki Geet! Munda maan gaya hai..readers itni asaani se nahi manenge 😆
.tho I am sure the readers are waiting more eagerly for the next part than Maan 😆

Why do I have a feeling that as usual you would have planned something different for us?


Oh! thanks for confirming that the cutsoms were alright. You are the first. Tamil theriyuma? LOL
I'm not a tamilian but I can speak , read and write.

I dont know if I posted this info but I had edited out 3 pages from this update. One page was the heart to heart that you talked about during the proposal.
The other were of course the suhaag raat part, which I have pushed it to 51 to make it a lengthier post.
I had read your previous post on Maan. You have nailed it but let me add something that you are missing. He is unlike the other guys for sure, which you already know and if you noticed, he never went behind Geet asking her to tell him "Woh teen labsz" (like our Geet soap Maan)or asking her to kiss him back. But that doesn't mean he only gives and doesnt expect anything back. Just wait for Part 51 for I have a dropped a clue about how he wants Geet to approach him in general.
Maan loves geet but at times MSK seeps in and the combination becomes subtle stubborness. (Aila I should have retained that for Geet's mono... 😉)
Don't you think we all have some nth degree of complexity in all of us. I think our stimulus differs based on the environment. All this while he was chasing her, and now he has her, The variables are the same, but the environments have changed. There is a good chance the stimulus has changed now and we dont know how his personality layers will tumble and change or may be not. Sorry geeky...

Thanks for the long comments. I have been noticing, you are tumbling and shifting to give me longer ones. 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

i think she meant the ring from the water...that first game they played :)
btw...seriously once again want to compliment the details u have put and explained....
its a pleasure to read everything u write :)


Aight girl, I guess i'm dazed...I was writing a scene in Part 51 and I'm cross eyed now. Didnt get it right. Sorry.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I loooooved it! Superb! It was really good....nice research about the rituals and all.....I myself did not know half of them.....lolz. That proposal part and all was beautiful! The games were great! Loved Meera and Yash.....and Dadi as well! All in all it was a brilliant update! Do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Here I am with comments for Part 49.
I know I am late, sorry😒 😭 Was a little busy with prior committments.

I loved Geet's monologue here a lot!!!
This part did clear Geet's perspective.
Her point of view is not clear from the moment she met Maan for the first time to his proposal. She still searching for answers about herself. She isn't sure of herself, she's not sure if she's capable enough of carrying relationships given to her past experiences with family and Dev. Her apprehensions of not responding to his proposal, of not committing seem well justified. But I have a question here, in her monologue she was talking about the fear of her being compared to Sameera and him to Dev. Isn't she been comparing Maan to Dev from a long time?

Liked that part where both Maan and geet are restless are dying to hear from each other. The drafted mail part was good.
I love Daadi. She's now teamed up with Meera😉
She has a good understanding of human nature, how easily she planned everything with Meera.

I liked the way Daadi explained things to Geet, making her realize that one failed relationship doesn't mean that one should enclose oneself in a shell. I liked the water analogy she used for Maan's life.
And that was such a good part where while talking to Daadi Geet remembered Maan's words, ''Just try, I will walk with you''.

Geet was really low on confidence on relationship handling. She needed to be guided, coaxed and thats what Daadi's words did to her. It did instill some confidence into her that she can do it with Maan and Daadi being on her side. You know its sometimes said its essential to have elder's hand on our heads, this stands perfectly true in Geet's case. She's been fighting with herself since so long but a heart-to-heart conversation with Daadi helped her to make a decision!

Maan and Geet monologues, later in the update, were too good. Maan is a bit perplexed over this sudden development while Geet is now pretty confident of the new turn her life is taking.
I loved these lines-deep, thought-provoking lines!!!
''I couldn't hold on to a blank canvas and call myself a painter. I needed to paint first to see what I was capable of. I had to make my own mistakes to learn. Come out of my cocoon to see if I was a butterfly already.''

This part was really good. Enjoyed reading it to the core! Finally my heart is at peace and I am super-excited to read the next part😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the long update
and am in love with ur FF
please add me to ur pm list
and it doesnt matter
they dont know everythign about each other
and that's okay they have the rest of thier lives to figure it out
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok...I just wrote something and I'm freaking scared to publish it.
I think I will first send PM's to a few of my confidantes and then decide on how to rewrite Part 51.
Or should I only post Part 51 to the PM list?

Please this is important get back to me at the earliest.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasini67

Ok...I just wrote something and I'm freaking scared to publish it.

I think I will first send PM's to a few of my confidantes and then decide on how to rewrite Part 51.
Or should I only post Part 51 to the PM list?

Please this is important get back to me at the earliest.


Ok I take it back. I scoured through some other FF's and there are much more passionate ones than mine. Guess I was just plain scared and thought i will push it to a different level as you guys keep telling me that my writing is pretty graphic.

I will post it for everyone...No sneak peeks this time.

Hasini
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Posted: 14 years ago
Umm.....don't be scared.....coz whenever you write you are scared and all....the part turns out to be damn good....so I suggest you directly post the part itself......baaki it's your choice.....

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