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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update! Can't wait for the next one:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 58: OMG!!! I just had to read this so badly!! Dieing to find out what will happen next!!OMG! What a way to start it "Get out Geet"…boy oh boy and then Maan's reaction that's he's gonna get it at home…ha ha…this was so funny!!

Sasha is putting 2 and 2 together…Me liking it a lot!!! OMG! Geet in all attitude mde just said: "Did she just give me an opinion about my husband?"!!! Awesome!!!!

And the games never end…she's not too happy with his chest being on display for all the other women and gay men…and he's not falling for her attempt to show cleavage…!! OMG!! You were right, I def am loving this so much!!


SideNote: The way you wrote, it kind of reminds me of the games played between Chuck and Blair on GG…so much chemistry and passion between the mind and s*x games!!! (the last word hidden just for any readers under 13 ;)!!!) OMG!! He called her nautanki again!! Love it!

HA!!!!!!!! He doesn't care about her wifey duties…he wants his work done…he's def gonna be sleeping on the couch!!! LOL!!!! This part was so cute and hilarious…it made me giggle!!!


Button scene……….AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I'm still screaming…in my head…I would scream out loud but my parents are sleeping…and can't scare them like or I'll be dead fore sure!!

She sits on his desk and then his legs! And the jealousy seeped in…yeaaah baby!!!


WHOA!!!! Her RAUNCHY hold, full frontal snogging (hasini…did you blush while writing this), savor her physically, …these lines are so sexy beyond believe…steamy office scenes….Me likey like A LOT!!!!

Damn professionalism lasts like 2 seconds…ok maybe a lot more than that, but damn…kissing, unbuttoning shirts, feeling skin…maybe a little groping next time!!! This was so sensual and romantic!! I re-read the make out session over and over and over again!!

Damn phone call, but it had to stop…she finished sowing his button, but she forget to tuck in her shirt…the mystery is building up now that Sasha is right in front of her!!! YAY!! Sasha almost fainted…exactly what I wanna read!! She's changing back to a sari…it's getting too good!!

Comedy of errors line was too good!! And Maan toying with her now…too good!! Oh Sasha…dig a grave and sleep in it…what a jerk!!!

I love what happens next…she drinks from his cup…btw: the mishti line was so sweet(pun intended!)…and then gives Sasha her answer…you go girl!!! Maan proclaims Geet as his wife…and Geet's excitement and happiness!!!

OH NO!!! "Copulate with another girl"…this is def not going where I want it to go, but it's not over yet!! Oh Geet why lock yourself in the study!! But he does come to her eventually! BTW: Saint Nick joke…hilarious…1st time I've read/heard it in like 6 years!!! And way to end the chapter…Mr Perfect may not be Mr Perfect…damn the many different girls…Maan's got a past…a very colorful past…hopefully both can move forward with this and not linger too long in the past!!!

This part was too good….so glad I read it!! Loved it to death!!! You keep out-doing yourself in the chweet scenes, the steamy/hot scenes, and the emotional ones too!! Take a bow…you ROCK!!! Ok…now I def have to go to bed, but excited about the next part!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
In today's episode the apron that Maan is wearing has New York written on it.
Yippieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
He looked really cute in the apron...
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Posted: 14 years ago

long update for a long waiting

wonderful one........

dialogues part were wonderful

cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
omg awesome update geet is slowlly sharing her feeling with maan and the last day in office was ver nice.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Today I'm not gonna write an essay like comment coz certain things do not need long description some times short n crisp does the work !

Just one thing,

Thanks for this FF
Hasini...I very well know fiction n reality is different life is not a mere fairy tale and today that update did it all....beautiful update is what I can say it is....hope you know I'm trying to voice out and I don't have to tell you each n everything :)

I thank you from the bottom of my heart.... :)

Take care,
Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago

hii hasini..

its a such a fabulous update..................

siply superbbbbbbbbbb

each and every update has a magnetic charm that just keeps us hooked to ur FF and makes us wonder.....what next

thanx for this long and wonderful update

keep writing

melody

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ofcourse I liked it you portray each and every emotion beautifully and we can sense their feelings too ok in this chapter it was more of geet and how she feels guitly that she's not ready to take the relationship further and then meera sense that geet still hasn't come over the HP incident (meera and yash always being a symbolic piece with their experiences) as she was speaking to het about yash wantin to be intimate with her I lov meera as she helps or more prods geet to think about things like that and also it as about geets attachment to the office and NY as it contains all the memories that geet cherishes because geet developed in this place and more over where she met maan. I do get th feeling that she regrets taking this step as she is bound to maan and she knows she can't live without him, also the waist chain did play a part in this chapter as it was again related to geets fears of tempting maan when she ain't ready for taking their relationship to that step but maan assured her that he would never do that without her also agreeing to it anyways another great chapter and each one has a different subject hu they all link which you do brilliantly and continue soon 😊

Ps sorry for late comment I was waiting for a quiet moment so I can read this chapter without any disturbance
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Posted: 14 years ago
Merry Christman everyone...still got another 4 hours to go, but I wanna to wish everyone on this amazing thread very prosperous seasonal greetings and happy holidays guys!!

Thanks Hasini for this beautiful present...this awesome and brilliant FF!!! It's snowing right now and I keep thinking of all the white and snow metaphors and analogies you creativity and brilliantly used!!!

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