FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2 - Page 109

Originally posted by: sweet coco

Merry Christman everyone...still got another 4 hours to go, but I wanna to wish everyone on this amazing thread very prosperous seasonal greetings and happy holidays guys!!

Thanks Hasini for this beautiful present...this awesome and brilliant FF!!! It's snowing right now and I keep thinking of all the white and snow metaphors and analogies you creativity and brilliantly used!!!

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Merry Christmas to all....🤗

No snow here in the bay area...

But I'm singing right now....

Deck the halls with boughs of holly...tra la la..laaaaa la la la....

Tonight I will wait for Santa as the clock strikes 12.00...

Hope he fills all our stockings with good tidings and Vanilla cheer as the north star shines high in the sky....

Part 59 Event horizon: Oh Man, I don't like where this is going….everyone has a past, but why can't Geet get past Maan's past! Well, at least both are sleeping together and in real close proximity!! Good sgins thus far…YAY!!!

Oh NO! HE's wooing her and she's still thinking about the note…not this again…no 2 steps back Geet…please keep moving forward!! But I must say it was a very sweet and lovely gift!

YIPPPPEEEEEEE!!! Messenging during work hours…I love it when they break the rules! And then laughing together….awww Hasini…can always rely on you to bring a smile on my face…this was so cute!!!

My favorite part is not actually a scene, but the idea that she can't be mad at him for too long and either can he be upset with her!! That's like my most favorite detail, characteristic, theme…whatever you wanna call it, but it's so fun to read about the fight and how they made up! B/c the ade up scenes are so heart melting like warm chocolate chip cookies right out of the oven and super adorable like a little puppy!!!

Date at the window seating….wish I had a window seating…will have to settle for the balcony I have for now, but one day!!! Awwww…how awesome is that!! I foresee major cuddling and kissing in the window seat!

Misunderstandings cleared….NICE!!! OMG!! The name of those girls and his pledge group and the kama sutra book…that was hilarious!! I loved how you described Geet as "mousy"…and OM EFFIN EFFIN GOD…that note and her past was so out of the blue and def did not expect that!!! WHOA!! No wonder why she has a had time moving forward b/c she's scarred in more ways than one and having her family as her family doesn't help the situation!!! I love the "will always be my first breath of air that gives me desire to live and now love"…so beautiful!!! Thank you so much for lines like that!!!! I love d it so much!! Such a romantic line and such beautiful emotions!!!

The ending is so brilliant…he's there for her no matter what…he's understood her and he's her true soul mate…not that Dev! UGH!!! Ok a confession when you wrote the last 2-3 lines…I automatically thought about Inception…inspired from that by any chance?!! Well, moving on…love his anguish to do something for her…to help her, but Maan doesn't know…or maybe he does…is that he can't help her, but only support her!! And his love and support will be enough for her!!! AHHHH!! I'm so excited about the next part!!!

Part 60 New Genesis: Oh man, this title….quite interesting!! Ha ha…morning breath…my pet peeve also!!! That's so strange, but awesome that you included a detail like that…incorporating realism...amazing!!! The comments on the note was so extraordinary…I loved the "totally…for now let's kiss" part…so MSK-like!! And his PS was super adorable and so romantic as well…2 romantics married each other…YAY!!!!

Heart to heart was so precious….that's the perfect word for it, loved her answers to him…the semi-break down and his reassurance! Oh man, she couldn't trust men…she has issues with men…can't blame her…as a young child to see that and then keep it hidden from all your close people all these years…must be super hard!!! Oh man…her truth was so sad…Dev and his idiotic-ness…he just wanted a physical relationship, but he didn't even try to form an emotional bond! No wonder she had such a negative view of men! Damn it Dev!

Maan as consistent and dependable…this is the best way to describe him!!! And then she hugs him…awww!! I loved this heart to heart so much!!! And now hopefully she gets her much needed closure!

AHHHHHHHH!! She forgot her towel….YAY!! Ok that was a very disgusting thing to say, but all the passion in the world would come to live if Maan conveniently enters the room…right Hasini….convenintyl?! LOL!!! SNAP! Not exactly how my adult mind wanted it to end it, but still 'I'm decent"…LOL!!! That was too good!! You built such a nice climax…I was on the edge of my seat!! Oh well, both hugged and kissed…not bad!! I'm content!!

The TITLE!!!!!!!!!!! New beginnings...new genesis…pasts revealed and both are still hugging and holding each other…all the truth is out and it changed them…not much, but a little and for the better!!! Beautiful title and it all makes sense now!!!

This part was so dramatic and yet so good!!! Can't wait for the next part and YAYYYYYY I'm almost all caught up!!!

And your daily dose of praise...you're past the legendary stance...someone should give you an award for this!! It's so damn amazing!! I don't think I've read another FF with such beautiful and meaningful lines and an author who uses literary devices!!! God bless ya...you have an amazing gift and such a creative mind!!! A true literary genius is among us!!!! Amazing amazing amazing....oh lord I need a new word to describe you and your work!!😆

Originally posted by: Water.

In today's episode the apron that Maan is wearing has New York written on it.

Yippieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

Merry Christmas my friends..