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Posted: 14 years ago
please dont make geet marry shiv.... i wont a little jealously act but i cant imagine geet with anyone else then Maan.....
cant wait for the next part....
and when is he's dad going to come into the story??
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Posted: 14 years ago
no wonder keyama....

it is u on no 1 for FF.....

it is only week u started this FF & u have already reached 131 pages......

not to mention this FF is so touch to heart I am also one of the Fan who couldnt sleep last night....almost was up many time to see if u have updated any more part..


love muskaan
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 31


Geet takes her high heels off.
She have ditched security guards in the disco. Who was waiting for her outside of the mansion.
Geet: thanks.
Guards: no problem mam.

Geet walks in. Lucky the hall was empty. If mum dad or Dadi sees her... She will be dead gone. She tiptoes in her room.... Closing the door ever so carefully... Then suddenly she sees Maans body stood there like a statue.
Maan: what are you doing?
Geet: umm! Oh! Me!
Maan walks off... He only could see her head. Not her cloths. So didn't realize she just came home...

Geet takes a deep breath taxing Ridzy and Armaan she is fine...

Next morning... Dad screamed... Maan sat there looking at the news....

Geet on the phone with shiv...
Shiv: did you know anything about this?
Geet: no! I am scared I can here my dad screaming.
Shiv: just tell them you had a party round my. So I was late to drop you home. Just for your safety.
Geet: ok!

Geet runs down... Only 7am... She only got 4 hours sleep!
Geet: yes dad?
Dad: what is this?
Geet looks t the paper... They are in a car together... And top of it Geet kissing his cheek.
Dad: where were the security guards?
Geet: he is just a good friends!
Dad: shiv kapoor? Dad was confused.... He was one of the most Famous business tycoons son. Kapoor family!!
Geet: I met him in Australia. He was in same university as me.
Dad: is there anything going on between you two?
Geet: no! No no dad.
Dad: I hope so.
Geet: he is a nice guy.
Dad smiles: he is starting a project with us. Would you like to join and help me out.
Geet hesitated for a minute...
Geet: he asked me out for dinner this Friday.
Dad: would you like to join me?
Geet: shall I say yes?
Dad: I see no reason to say no!
Geet: but I always have fight with him... Is just last night I wasn't in mood!
Dadi and mum hugs her tight... Geet walks off to the washroom...

Maan sat there watching the telly... Geet giggling... Dancing with him... Some odd reason he didn't like that. He didn't like someone els was touching geet...

It's Thursday...
Geet walks in the Hunda industry...
Shiv walks in...
Geet: you are early!
Shiv: thanks for reminding!
Geet: of course. You do annoys me allot.
Shiv smiles: I love talent. And you are the charm. I have spoken to your dad. He is very cool person a good friend of my dad.
Geet: It's my first project! And You have always worked with your dad. And you basically... I mean all of your project was susseccseful. Technically you are the best. I will annoy you allot. And you never know i might get better then you....
Shiv: don't try to out smart me Geet. You know I will win. He smirks.
Geet hits his hand tight.
Shiv: ouch!
Shiv: ok now back to the business...
Geet: yes!
Shiv: we have to go to the KUrana office.
Geet stopped there...
Geet: why?
Shiv: everything is there for this project. You should know by now that khurana and Handa company is joined!
Geet: umm!
Shiv: I have to teach you so much.
Geet: I Hate that.

Both makes there way to the khurana company...
Maan had an appointment with both of them... He was uncomfortable after what he seen in the news other day.

Geet and shiv walks in...

Maan and shiv was in the same level... Kapoor runs verity of different project... While khurana in architects along with other project. Both are good business partner. Infact... Both are the hottest bachelor of deli... But not a good friend... Shiv have many more modeling agency then maan. He is very reserved... But very open with friends... Geet being one of the lucky one.

Shiv is down to earth... He will do anything for his loved one. He only have mum and dad along with two sister. His family is ever so lovely...

Geet: hay... She says with a big smile. Shiv was training geet... Well Geet was unaware of that. Geets dad was about to do that with maan... But then he thought it's best not to.
Shiv: try to be professional!
Maan looks at her in surprise. of course it is a office. This is the first time she ever walked in... And she just looked amazing in her professional cloths.
Maan smiles at both.
Shive gives maan a quick warm handshake.
Shiv: how are you Mr Khurana?
Geet looked at him... Completely different person in his business profession...
Shiv: Miss Handa please do introduce your self...
Geet looks at him in anger.
Shiv: well mr knlhurana you must know miss Geet hands.
Maan smiles... He was glad she didn't feel uncomfortable in front of him.
Maan: yes of course I do know her.


Next: maan worried...

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Posted: 14 years ago
its great..to see story moving further...

but well no matter what....cant see maan & or Geet with somebody else...

I know what Maan has done is wrong ... & geet can not forgiv it or forget it very easily ...but i guess as per this FF her life was revolving around Maan only..

so hope they can be together again.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!

Loved it Keyama......

Ufff....

I wanna see Maan totally JEALOUS!!!!!

Shiv is so nice!😳

My HERO!😉

Continue soon!!!

Love ya loads...

Mrina
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahahaha........i am enjoying😉........shiv and geet should teach maan a lesson for what he did to geet.......anyways poor maan he would die seeing his geet in someone else arms....anyways want geet to be more comfortable with shiv than maan......plzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yea.. i am enjoying the track..
Heheh loved the update
Continue soon..pls
Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
why is he worried.. how the hell is is he worried... why should he get worried...

i hate this maan!!! i love this geet... my poor baby geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow love shiv and geet...really super cool......hope dis maan feels hurt...i want him to be hurt and nakusha to cheat on him.....he certainly deseves it.....wow lukin fwd to geet and SHIV....................................................................
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
plzzz continue
it was amazing
loved geet nd shiv

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