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Posted: 14 years ago
Well i wanna chop Maan into pieces n make Geet's body guard dogs eat him No offence to anyone my view
ErrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrIm jus so hating him
Aft all this he wants Geet to be his good fnd agn
Errrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Liked Shiv
But hop he dosent create sum probs aage
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Posted: 14 years ago
I wuld love to c Maan getting jealous😆😆😆
Liked the way Geet n Shiv's bond was increasing
Lets c how Geet works wit 2 Bachelors of Delhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited my comment!


And sorry for spamming so much but i was desperate to read the update!

I'm so impatient when it comes to this FF!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome.....
ab maja ayega........😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey enjoying the story line...pls pls pls pls update......pls make maan more jealouse 😉

Hey can't wait pls pls do tell us wen updating next part and how many parts in total u going to update....It seem that we puuting lots of pressure but u see can't help as u only made us crazy that we can not think anything else..........so pls pls pls update yaar....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Prettierpreeti

awesome.....

ab maja ayega........😆




Sach me ..."AB MAZA AYEGA 😆"
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kem the game has started ... im already loving it... And geet with handa's industry working with Maan and Shiv...tats cool...so business nite,party and soo on is on the way i think...AWESOME YAAR
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 32


All three had a meeting for 1 hour... Geet couldn't stop laughing at shiv... He was just too smart... Just like maan...
Shive was just trying to control his amusement. Geet never have seen his professional side before.
Shive: are you alright?
Maan just couldn't add up... In disco other day they were very free going...
Maan: Geet! Are you alright?
Geet: yea I am fine.
Geet is not used to professional life... She just couldn't imagine them in this type of behavior... Maan and shiv actually being so formal.

Maan sat there... Geet have looked at him without complain.... He liked that. Glad she was alright. Shive was a nice person and will keep her happy.

Geet was trying to walk way... Shive holds her by hand and pulls her in his embrace... Maan just walked out of the office and nakusha enters...
Geet was lost in his eyes... Something different she seen on that day... Something odd...

Maan looked at them then looked way... Something was eating him inside. He was happy... But not satisfied. He was glad she is moving on. But it felt like he didn't want her to move on. He wanted ... He snapped out of his though...
Shiv and geet leaves and nakusha gives him a hug...
Naku: Geet looking happy.
Maan: yea... Umm shiv...
Nakusha: lucky her... She have amazing test... All the hottest business tycoon always after her. Must say you and then him. Lucky girl.
Maan didn't like that. Geet is naive and innocent... And anyone can take advantage of her... Long as shiv doesn't do anything stupid with her he is happy. But still he didn't like there closeness... Knowing Geet... She is week in that way... He always had to do something to control her desire.... And that's when it hit him.... He didn't like the idea at all that any man would touch her like the way he did. He refused to fight with this... They have done so much that it started to come visible in his eyes... He just couldn't imagine shiv in his position...
Nakusha: what happen?
Maan: nothing!
Naku: I have spoken to dad about are marriage...
Maan: ok!
Naku: dad will be round your house soon.
Maan smiles and they both walks off...

It's evening... Geet looked at her self in the mirror... It's dinner date with shiv...
Geet felt a bit happy... But still Maans love was running through her vain... She could feel his every touch... She closed her eyes... She hated looking at her self. Every part of her body just reminded of him. She hated her self. Felt disgust. Then she thought about... He probably is this close to Nakusha as well. She holds her self tight... Remembering there every night... She wanted to scream out loud... She suppressed it. I hate him... I hate him....
Then suddenly there was a knock on her door....
Geet quickly dries her eyes... Putting some Makeup on... Not showing anything...
Geet: come in....
Maan walks in....
His eyes widens... She looked more beautiful then ever.... A red dress... Along with black jewelry... She just looked stunning...
Maan kept mum....
Geet: what is it?
Maan: oh... Actually.... Y....
Shiv enters....
Shiv: can I come in...
Geet: yea... Sure.
Maan looks at her in shock... "she never let anyone enter her room! Only her oldest best mates..."
Shiv: nice room.
Geet: thanks.... Dadi redecorated.
Shiv: you looking stunning.
Geet blushes: thanks...
Maan remembers how she used to blush when he used to talk like this...
Shiv: I have brought you something....
Geet: for me?
Shiv: you can't say no!
Geet: I won't! She smiles....
Maan leaves... He didn't want to disturb...

Maan sat in his room... Clenching his fist... He wasn't sure why he was doing that...
Nakusha walks in... Maan pulls her to the lap.... He was angry... Not sure why...
Naku: let's go out tonight!
Maan: I am not in a mood.
Naku: I have realized since Geet came... You kept your self a distance from me.
Maan: nothing like that. You know how busy I am.
Naku: ha... Sab janti hu... Anyway... My modeling competition is up soon.
Maan: aca!
Naku: you have to be there...
Maan kisses her lips... Sure.

The dinner...

Shiv: you have been crying?
Geet: no!
Shiv: are you telling me the truth?
Geet: of course.
Shiv. You know you can't out smart me!
Geet: yes I know! No one can!
Shiv: shall we have a dance?
Geet: sure....

Shiv drops Geet home... Trying his level best to persuade her to do one of his modeling show... He wants her to be the main face..
Geet: no! I can't do those type of stuff.
Dadi: no! I don't want her to do this at all.
Mum: big no.
Dad: no!
Maan happy... He defiantly didn't want her to do this type of stuff....
Geet: thank you... See ... I am not interested!


Next: maan against geets modeling….


ok i know some of u wanted a part where geet is doing modeling… so here… i squized some part in in my main story line :D

xxx


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kyphfanz


Mrinalini- looks like we are the only Iqbal and Maan fan- who will choose iqbal ova Maan 😛


Oh ya gal....... I LOVE Iqbal..... I COMPLETELY LOVE HIM!😳

Its not that i don't love MSK or GC!

I LOVE MSK & GC! But for me Iqbal is always priority!😃😳

If ever i write any FF..... I always bring Iqbal for guest appearance!😉

I just can't help it!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice parts!!!!
I want maan to jealous!!!
Continue soonnn.
thanxx for the pm.



Fatima

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