FF-manet***ESOTERIC LOVE*** Thread 1

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***ESOTERIC LOVE***

Esoteric love: love understood by only few special people

thread 2 part 33

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hay u all' u lot probably thinkng i am going mad' this is my 6th FF' LOL' OK IMPORTANT NOTICE NOW i won't UPDATE **MENT TO BE** and **HEARTBEAT** and more' ***TREAMBLE OF LOVE IS COMING TO AN END***' so i just thought this might build up instead of all those FF'. :D i will update this like Tremble of love :D




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MAAN SING KHURANA


GEET HANDA


Dutta


ridima


armaan


atul


sammera



Nakusha A rich business mans daughter' a Fashion designer and model her self.


SHIV Kapoor' One of the HOTEST business tycoon' bachelor...

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part 1

Two lady next door to one another in labour... In pain... Scramming...

Mr Khurana and mr handa waiting outside... Worried... Worried sick... Mrs Khurana was in deep pain Labour... Her situation was savior... This pregnancy was a risk for her. She was warned. But she refused to abort... She refused...

Suddenly Bothe mr handa and Khurana hard noise... Mr handa had a baby girl and me Khurana had a baby boy... Both ran in...

Mrs Khurana only had few minutes of breath left... Only few minutes...
Mrs khuaran: my child... My Maan...
Mr Khurana was in tears... He was about to loose his wife.... He was about to loose everything...
Mrs k: promise me you will marry again... For are Childs sake. Please... He needs a mother.
Mr k kept quit. No words... She knew well he would never do that. Never. Ever. Mrs k knew well her promise was useless. He would never do that. Never. He loved her too much...
Mrs k took her last few breath... Kissing maans forehead... "you are your fathers future now... You are his Maan...." her heartbeats stopped.
Mr k looked at her... Shocked... His tears have stopped... He was in shock... He stood there frozen. Holding his Maan... Just his... Just his.

Midwife: I am sorry sir...

Maan started to cry for his mother... But there was nun....

2days have passed... Maan is 2days old... Mr and mrs handa walks in there house with there 2 days old geet... Maan was a minute older then geet....

Mr Khurana: I can't! I have tried... I can't!
Mr Khurana broke down... Me handa holds him tight...
Dadi: I don't know what to suggest...
Mrs handa: I will look after Maan as my own son. You don't worry... You go on..
Mr handa: yes... We will look after him as are own son... We will love him more then are daughter...

Mr Khurana left that day... He never came back... Never... Ever....

Both family were very rich... After mr Khurana left everything came under maans name. Handa family was the guardian... So they look after everything for him. There industry became huge just within three years and improved as the time went by....


Maan & geet 7...

Geet: I am older.
Maan: I am older.
Geet: you wasting your time.
Maan: no you are.
Geet: it's final... I am older.
Maan: umm...
Geet: understood.
Maan: do you want me to put you in trouble?
Geet: try... With that geet punched Maan right on his face... Maan started to cry.
Dadi and mum runs out...
Dadi: what happen?
Maan: geet.....
Geet gave him a glare
Maan: nothing... he walks off in frustration...

Maan walked off in strop. Geet flowed.
He bang shut his room door.
Geet peps in... Only her head.
His room was all tidy and neat. Unlike geet.
Maan: don't come in.
Geet: why?
Maan: I am angry with you.
Geet: I know.
Maan: then get lost.
Geet: how can I?
Maan: why?
Geet walks in: I love you.
Maan was sitting on his bed staring at his football. Angry. Geet comes and sits next to him. Giving him a cuddly hug.
Geet: I love you.
He kisses her cheek.
Maan: let's go to the attic! I found a new entrance.
Geet curious...
Geet: are you planning to scare me?
Maan: of course no. I love you. I would never do that.
Geet: good.

Maan and geet runs out holding hand...

Maan: mum... We are going to the attic!
Mum: be carefull
Geet: if I fall it's maans fault.
Mum and dadi laughed...
They knew well it's never maans fault. He was the angel and she was the devil...

Both opens the door... It was pitch black... Geet was scared and holds maan tight...
Maan: you are a scary cat.
Geet: I am not!
Maan: why are you shaking?
Geet: it's just.... Ok I am scared.
Maan switches on the light.... They climbed the stair... Maan helps geet to go up first'


Next: the diary'.

4 more parts coming up'.. pls do leave some comments

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! already loving this storyyyyyyyyyyyy cont soon plzz
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part 2


Geet: what are we looking for?
Maan. Mum said there are some old stuff of my mum is here.
Geet: I miss your mum.
Maan: you never seen my mum.
Geet: yes I have.
Maan: we were born on the same day.
Geet: I seen her picture.
Maan roles his eyes. "geet you are so stupid."
Geet starts to cry..
Maan: ok! Ok! I love you.
Geet smiles...

They wonder round for a minite... Maan finds a massive box... Written... Mr and Mrs Khurana...
Geet: that's your mum and dad...
Maan: one day that's going to be us.
Geet smiles...
Maan opens the box... Old books... Present... Drawing....
Geet took some drawings out... Looks like 6-7 years old peoples drawing... Geet showed it to Maan...
Geet: that's not are drawing!
Maan: no!
Geet twists it round...

Drawn by Abhi & Hena... Maans mother and dad...
Geet: this must be there first drawing...
Maan: owo...
Maan finds a diary... That's the only one that looked interesting to them....

Geet snatched it... Bothe sat down and started to read... They were only 7 so couldn't read all the squiggly writing... Only the index page... Hand writing seems to improve as they gazed down....

Geet read it out...
7th birthday...
Before she could read it further mum and Dadi called them for dinner...

Both ran out taking the diary...

After dinner geet came to maans room. Maan refused to go to her room as it's so messy.
Geet made her self comfortable under maans quilt... While maan on the chair.
Maan: that's gr8! I am so cold and you cosy on my bed!
Geet: stop arguing.
Mum brings milk for both.
Maan: mum can you tell her to clean her room so she stop sleeping on my bed! She does that every night. I end up sleeping on the floor.
Dadi laughs...

Mum and dadi disappears...
Geet starts to read the index... That was the only thing she could read... But Maan more cleaver... He basically had brain of 9-10...

Geet: 7th birthday... First kiss...... What's so new about this? We kiss everyday.
Maan: umm... Give it to me... He sat next to geet...
Maan: 8th birthday.... First gift... "I give you a gift every year... OMG 8 next year! He made a baby face... All my money is gn go.
Geet slapped him: you save those money for me.
Maan: and you never buy me anything.
Geet: you always say I don't need anything. And anyway mum and dad buy you everything.
9th birthday... We separated... "we won't separate. We can ignore this.
10th birthday we missed one another... We always miss one another. Actually sometime I am so glad.
Geet gave him a angry glare.
11th birthday we had an arguments.. "we always have an arguments... Nothing new!"
12th birthday I wanted his gift..... "you always still My gifts."
13th birthday... We sneaked out....
14th birthday.. I haven't seen him...
15th birthday ... He proposed....
16 th birthday ... First kiss..
.

Geet: how many first kiss they had? Neither didn't understand... As they were too young.

Maan ignored her...

17th birthday... D....

Maan: it only says D?
Geet: just read the next one..
Maan: 18th birthday first night...
Geet: hmm...
Maan: we will only read each part on are birthday...
Geet: why?
Maan: more interesting.
Geet: what if we are not together on are birthday... Like your mum and dad.
Maan: I will find you don't worry.

Both fell sleep... Geet again pushed maan on the floor... He couldn't bother to get up. He snatched her pillow and slept on the floor....

Mum and dadi came in the morning...
Dadi: what will I do with this two?

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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OMG...Keyama tu sach mein pagal hi ho gayi hai...
You should be bestowed with the official title of FF QUEEN!!!
Love this one too!!!
Waiting for more!
Love you soooooooooo much
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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so nice yaar... congrats for the new ff ..... do continue soon....love the story line ..😊
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wow that was superb plz cont soon dear and plz pm me
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Hey will u update Animosity??
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loved it😊
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part 3


Geet had no pillow and maan had no quilt.
Mum: I tidy her bedroom every morning by the time it's night... It's messed up again...
Mum picks maan up in his arm.. Still sleepy and dadi geet....
Bothe brushing there teeth....

They quickly eats there breakfast and makes there way to the school holding hand....

Geet went with her friends and maan went with his friend... Both were in same class. Teacher have tried to move maan in upper class purely because he is so cleaver for his year... But he refused. Geet wouldn't stop crying when she hard he was leaving.. So he decided to stay to make her happy...

Maan was playing football with his friend while geet hide and seek with her friends...

Maan was best in everything... He was the coolest boy in the school. His first priority was geet... He look after geet in every way... Accepting anything she wanted... His job was making her wish come true...

They were only 7...

As the time went by... They tried to read maans mum and dads diary but failed... Purely because of high level of words that have been used... They couldn't understand...

Both are 13 now... Geet had a fight with some of maans friend... They were teasing maan why he spends half of his days with geet... He need to get out more and spend time with there friends...
Geet smacked armaan... Maans best friend. He ran out of maans room with a bleeding nose...

Maan: what was that for?
Geet: he deserves that!
Atul: I haven't said anything... Please don't hit me.
Geet: good. You better not.
Maan: because of you nun of my friend come round my house.
Geet: well get some decent friends!
Maan: I have... And they still managed to go out of are house with some broken parts.
Geet: I don't want to see armaan anymore.
Mum walks in with armaan.
Mum: geet sorry bolo.
Geet: nahi.
Mum: geet!
Maan: please sorry Bol do na... Becara....
Geet: sorry.

Geet and maan got ready for there karate club...

Dadi: we have to stop geets karate class.
Mum: why?
Dadi: she is a girl... What will her future husband think? She already beating up armaan!
Mum: that's because he manipulating maan to spend less time with geet. You know how they are. They are best friend.
Dadi gives both geet and maan a disappointing look...

Geet: I swear there is always something wrong with dadi!
Maan: geet!
Geet: what?
Maan: anyway... Have you done all of your HW?
Geet: ha... I need you to do my history!
Maan roles his eyes: this is the last time.
Sammera joins: that's what you tell her every time.
Maan: shut up!
Sammera: that's not a nice way to treat your GF!
Geet giggles...
Maan gives geet a glare..
Sammera: comen maan! You have to be with me today.
Geet giggles again: jao maan jao....
Maan gave geet another glare and walks off with sammera...
Sammera: thank you hunny bunny...
Geet: no problem.... with an high 5.

Dutta joins geet...
Geet: how is your brother nose?
Dutta: good. You punched her too hard.
Geet: he deserves it. Telling maan to stay way from me. How dare he?
Dutta holds geet by hand and starts there karate lesson...

Dutta: it's weird that you always with him.

Dutta was 2 years older... So bit mature then everyone. He dated geet since she was 12... Then maan started to date sammera... Who always drooled over maan.

Geet: yes... We are best friend. Like Ridzy.
Dutta: but still.
Geet: I spend my quality time with you na... So what's your problem?
Dutta: I haven't complained... It's just weird.
Geet gave him an angry look and kicked him on stomach.
Dutta: ouch....
Geet: that's what you get when you listen to your stupid brother.
Geet walks off in strop... Dutta runs behind her...
Maan: what happen?
Dutta: I made her upset.
Maan: Dutta! Seriously!
Dutta: what?
Maan: stop listening to armaan.
Dutta makes a baby face...
Maan runs after her...

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OMG its soooooooooo sweet &cute &whn thy say i love u it sounds sooooooooooooo sweettttttttt &pleasent 2 eyes by reading it😊

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