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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it to bits...

Fantabulous!!!!!!

Ufff... Maaneet so romantic!!!

Precap is sad...... Continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Please please please please please please please update

Btw, I liked the Cat idea better than the servant one ;-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
i simply simply nt liked it
BUH................................................ LUVED IT!!!!!
u seruisyly r wiked!!!!!
they r soooooooooooooooooo intense
wow!!!!!
i wnted it 2 carry on non-stop!!!!!
plz carry on!!!
n hurry!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank god it was just a servant i thought it was dadi
but plzzzzzzz do something tht samera breaks the engagement with maan so tht maan and geet can be with each other forever
plzzzzzzzz hope both wont change after 3 or 4 years and they remember each other plzzzzzzz
update next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Pushpi...lolzzzzzzzzzz that is too funny.
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Posted: 14 years ago

***ESOTERIC LOVE***

PART 20


Maan was pining her to the bed... She was dying to do it to night but maan had his limit.
Geet: just do it... She was berthing hard. Just couldn't hold back. Maan relaxes on his back makes Geet relax between his leg. Geet was biting his chest. Kissing them roughly while her body non stop rubbed against his. Both cloths was on...
Maan holds her V***** and squeezes it tight... To reduce the hormone level that was building up in her. He does it few time... While geet hides his hand between her leg. He had no idea how he was controlling him self... But he couldn't risk of doing it fully.
Geet: can we have dry s**?...... she was loosing her sense... she had to do something.... she had less control then maan....
Maan smiled... Because they have doing that allot.
Maan sits on her... But there cloths were on... Geet just wanted him in her.... She wanted more then this... It wasn't satisfying enough.... Maan bites her lips then her Brest... Geet moans... It started to get wet... Maan stops realizing... Something will happen if he carries on... Maan lands on the floor just to keep him self way from her. Geet bites the pillow. She wanted more.
After while when there body seems to calm down, maan comes back to the bed. Even then Geet put her leg between his and started stroking him gently.
Maan: you make me so week.
Geet: why don't you do it.
Maan: you know the reason. She kisses his lips.

Next morning...

Geets bed was a mess. Maan kissed her lips and disappeared.

He gets ready before mum and dadi comes to wake them up... He walks out... Finds Dadi on the stair case.
Maan: good morning Dadi!
Dadi: early!
Maan: yes! Atul and Armaan coming round. Me and geet going somewhere.
Dadi: Geet needs to stay. Dutta is coming to pick her up.
Maan clenches his fist.
Maan: she can't go with him. Because she is coming with me.
Mum knocks on geets door.
Mum: ish larki ko kab akal aigi?
Maan: she is perfectly fine.
Geet opens the door rubbing her eyes.
Mum pulls her top down.
Mum: I wonder what will happen to her room in Australia.
Maan: mum forgot to tell you... I brought her a house.
Maan sits on the side of the stair case. Geet sits next to him.
Mum: what?
Dadi: what?
Geet: that's so sweet.
Maan: and a car!
Geet: I can't drive.
Maan: let's go I will teach you.
Geet jumps up and walks in to the washroom...
Mum: look at this girls bed! Such a mess. Like she have fight with her self every night!
Geet looks at maan with an disappointed look. Smirking.


Everyone in the living room... Geet made a baby face... Who couldn't be close to maan....
Dadi sat between them like a wall.


Maan thought what's wrong with Dadi....
Maan: Dadi...
Dadi: yes...
Geet pretends to call ridzi....
Geet: Dadi when are you going to your that special conference? I hard that's this week...
Maan: yes... I think you should concentrate... I am sure you need some time to spend on it.
Dadi: yea... I think so...
Dad: leave it mamiji. I will do it for you.... You can just join the conference.
Mum: ha mamiji. I think you should just take rest.
Dadi leave feeling a bit tirade.... Mummy flows.
Dad: maan!
Geet and maan moves close together....
Maan: yes dad....
Dad: is something going on between you and Sammera? Are you happy with her?
Maan: I really don't like her.
Geet looked at him in shock. Atlas he spited out.
Dad: no surprise! Why?
Maan: I am not ready and I like someone els...
Geet was just about to walk way... Maan holds her back.
Dad was looking at some file...
Dad: and who that might be?
Maan: oh... Umm....
Geet gave him a glare.
Dad: who is it maan?
Maan: Geet!
Dad stopped starring at the file straight way... He looked at both of them in a surprise... But not shocked. He was hearing many thing from close friends.
Maan: I want to marry Geet.
Dad: an what about you geet?
Geet: umm! Same dad.
Both sat there really close. Maan who had no fear on his eyes. While Geet shaking.
Maan: even if you disagree I will marry her.
Dad not surprised at all. He knew well maan is fearless with everything and he could never get better son in law then him and anyway if maan does marry Geet he could take over both khurana and hands industry. He is extremely determined.
Dad: soon as you two come back from university we will fix an engagement date. Flowed my marriage.
Geets eyes widens. She and maan will officially be together...
Dad: but for now... I want you two to keep a bit distance. Dadi have seen you 2 already.
Geet went pink in embarrassment.
Dad: and maan stop sneaking in geets room.
Maan looked down. He knew well... Of course he will know. There is security camera everywhere.
Geet gave maan annoying glare. He have told her that all the security camera is under control.
Dad: when you two are back we will officially announce to the media. Hopefully you two will be mature enough then. ... Hopefully.
Dad smiles and walks off....
Both takes a shigh relief. Then Geet punches maan.
Geet: I thought you had all the camera under control.
Maan: I did!
Geet: did my foot. OMG! The kitchen...
Mum walks in....
Mum: "next time don't try to lie about the kitchen. By the way the story about food fight is getting a bit old."
Geet looked at maan in more anger... But embrrasse over all.
Mum: and no sneaking in tonight....

Mum leaves...
Geet gets up maan flows.
Maan: thank you would be nice.

It's 1am... Both couldn't sleep... They were happy.. More then anything els. Just couldn't express... Maan sneaks in her room... He just couldn't control. He won't listen. Of course he won't. He is MSK!

Geet: Ab aye!
Maan: falls on her bed straight way... Hugging her tight.
Both shares a passionate kiss for a moment. I am so happy. More then anything els.
Geet giggles...

Night before they leaves...

Both were packed... Mum dad and dadi gave them a last kiss goodnight...

It's 3am.... Both maan and geet twisted round one another bed... Just couldn't sleep.... Maan gets up and walks in geets room... She could even feel him in the dark... He closes the door. Locked.
Geet sits up putting the side lamp on...
Maan sneaks in under her spread... In between geets leg... Resting his head on her chest.
Geet: what's wrong?
Maan: I couldn't sleep.
Geet: same.
Maan playas with her hand... While geets legs twists round his...
Geet: can we do it tonight.
Maan: no! It's not right.
Geet seduces him...
Geet: "I have everything to make it safe!"
Maan: no! It's not right.
Geet: why?
Maan: I won't be able to stay way a second without you...
Geet: we will met up on holiday! So what's the problem?
Maan cresses her cheek... Not now... Not before the day we separate.
Geet: I want to be your forever. Now. Make me yours now.
Maan pines her to the bed... "you are my. And always be my. Forever... And ever..."
Geet: then why you denying?
Maan: what If you...
Geet: I have told you... I have everything!
Maan kisses her lips... NO! It's too early....
Maan relaxes on his back geet on him... Through out the night... They spoke and shared there last moment together... While there hand wonder round place... Controlling there young desire...
Both falls sleep.

Next morning... Geet wasn't ready to leave maan at all... She was unconditionally madly in love with him. While maan was exited about his new life...



NEXT:.... There New Life….



Hay you all.. :D well… there new uni life will start…. are u exited??? bcs i am… ok in this part… we dont get to see sams and duttas reaction… in next few parts we will get to know more about them…. :D 🤗 BIG HUG TO U… :D LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS,,, AND do press the LIKE BUTTON


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Posted: 14 years ago

Ooooooo

Y o y do u have to leave it there - ur making me go round n round n round n round n round in circles mentally - i wanna knwwwwwwwwwwwww wat happens at uni
y o y do i get a feeling whilst geet is in luv with him - maan may get sidetracked??
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome parts dear🤗, you're making me crazy dear with ur ff's😳, i just loved it😍, am speechless👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome...love it
cant wait for the nxt part.
plz.. no musunderstanding between maaneet..
keep maanneet together..thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic update
not bad finally MSK said in front of his dad hehehe
excellent
do continue soon

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