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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Hey Keyama......You are superb........waise how do you manage write so much.....yaar ye secret mujhe bhi bata na.......
I am loving this new story.......
nice concept.......
hey I am wondering what's gonna happen next.....so update fast

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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Kem... hats off to you...
*bow down*
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
so nice yaar... by the way who is that dutta ???
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

i will put some pic up for all the characters..



part 4


Geet: don't!
Geet sat in the car.
Maan brings her in his embrace.
Geet: Dutta is such an idiot.
Maan: yes! Why don't you break up with him?
Geet: he will cry. Like he did 3 years back.
Maan: but I punched him that time.
Geet: but he cried na... And I thought it was because of me. And my brains felt guilty.
Driver drives them home... Sammera stops and jumps in... Geet between them.
Sammera: how come you never hug me like this?
Maan: umm!
Geet: ehh...
Maan: I haven't!
Geet: I only gave you permission to date. Not hug and kiss...
Sammera: that's unfair.
Geet: I let you date him!
Sammera: what's the point of dating then?
Geet and Maan looked confused... "do you just date to hug and kiss?"

Both were really innocent... Have no clue about the life. Since maan and geet were born... They have been always together... There hug and kiss was normal except when they did to others nun liked it.

Maan: why would you date to do that?
Geet: yes!
Sammera: you know... It's special!
Geet: am I special to you maan?
Maan: yes very...
Geet: more then sammera?
Maan: yes... way more...
Geet: sorry sammera.
Sammera: but we are dating. I have more right on him then you. He is my boyfriend.
Geet: then who denied. He is your BF.
Sammera: then...

Maan looked at both girl confused...

Driver dropped sammera home...

Geet: why people are so confusing.
Maan: I don't know.
Geet: do you have that diary.
Maan: yes. There sneaking out was pretty impressive.
Geet: how fat have you read?
Maan: umm...
Geet: you read the whole 13th birthday.
Maan: umm...
Geet gets irritated and angry...
Maan: I love you...
Geet: don't!
Maan: I love you.
Geet smiles and kisses his cheek like she always does.

Geet was extremely slow reader... So maan had to read it.

Geet: can we sneak out.
Maan: where we will sneak out to?
Geet: I don't know. Anywhere.
Maan: ok!

Mum: beta...
Maan: where is dad?
Mum: in study... Why?
Maan: I need some book from him.
Mum smiles.

Geet walked off...
Mum: what happen to you?
Geet: that sammera and Dutta... Driving me and maan insane.
Dadi: why?
Geet: Dutta wants me to stay way from maan. And sammera wants to hug maan.
Mum and Dadi laughs....
Geet: it's not funny.
Mum: but aren't they going out!
Geet: yes! I gave maan list of rule what he can do and what he can't.
Dadi laughs louder.
Geet: kiss and hug is not even in the list.
Mum suddenly realized.. It's so weird how there life was exactly like abhai and hena....
Dadi was a bit confused about there behavior as well...

Geet walked in to her room in strop... She looked through the diary and the list... No kiss and hug mentioned... So obviously that means no hug and kisses to anyone except her.

Geets room was tidy... Weird enough... But that's only for a little while... When sammera comes round to spend the weekend with them...

She walks in strop in maans room.

Maan: what happen?
Geet: what's sammera doing here?
Maan: idk!

Maans room is bigger now... And big bed... But still geet usually kicks him off from the bed...

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow another fic. congratulation for ur new fic. the story line is really nice. keep it up and I am sure u will make this fic also superb like ur other fics. continue soon..............
Edited by mamon.moon - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏 wow............... dear.... loved it... plzz cont
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
loved it yaar.... the list geet prepared so cute ....loved it .....do continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Nice yaar... I loved it . . please post soon.. and hope it will be long.. or post 2 parts ..please continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow.......hehhehehehe maan loves her n she loves him....childhood love...shooo shweeeetttt.....geet made a list of wat to do or wat not to....lolz very cute....
loved it....
mwaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 5


Geets hides under the spread... Next to maan...
Geet: tell her I am not here.
Maan nodes
Sammera: hello... Handsome.
Geet choked... Maan bit scared. He looked round... Then looked at his book again.
Maan: geet is not here. You might have to go back.
Sammera: I know. That's why I am here. You have to do it today.
Geet: do what?
Maan: do what?
Sammera: kiss.
Geet: no!
Maan: no. It's not in the list.
Sammera: what list?
Maan: the list geet gave me.

The duvet was fat and floppy. It was impossible to notice geet. And maan sitting up under the spread wasn't helping. Geet hides her face behind his back....

Sammera: geet gave you a list?
Maan nodes...
Sammera: am I your GF or she...
Maan: of course you.
Sammera: well I demand you to kiss me.
Geet pinched maans leg under the spread...
Maan: ouch..... I mean... Demand... She restrictedly told me I am only allowed to listen to her demand. And of course obey them.
Sam started to get irritated... : so I am presuming you gave her a list to.
Maan: of course. I will kill her if she kiss anyone.
Sammera gave a disappointed look at him.
Sam: and what about hug?
Maan: yes forbidden.
Sam: I don't know why Dutta is with her.
Maan: umm!
Sam: you can touch me right... Like hold hands.
Maan: let me look at the list.
Maan takes a list out.... Umm...
Maan: no.... I guss we can hold hand... But not now....
Sam: where is geet?
Maan: oh she in my b.... I mean maybe washroom. Go and check.
Sam leaves in strop...
Geet comes out... She grabs the list and quickly writes no holding hand.
Maan: oh!
Geet: turn off the light I want to sleep.
Maan: go to your bedroom. I need to study.
Geet: shut up.

Midnight... Maan falls on the floor...
Maan half sleep... Ugh....
Maan: GEET!
Geet: shut up I am older I have more right on this bed.
Maan snatches the pillow and both sleeps of....

Sam walks in maans room... Geet on his bed and he is on the floor.

Sam: GEETTTT....
Both maan and geet jumps up... Shocked... No one in the house dare not scream at both of them like that... Specially morning time...
Maan quickly jumps on the bed under the quilt...
Geet: are you insane? You just gave us shock of are life.
Sam gets more furious seeing maan going under the same duvet...
She walks of in tears....

Geet: what's wrong with her?
Mum walks in...
Maan: why did she cry?
Mum just looked at both of them... "when this two will understand?"
Dadi just smiled her way out...

Maan: what have we done mum?
Geet: yea...
Mum: nothing... Quickly get up and get change. Sam is waiting for you two. Dad will take you three out...
Geet: oh yes dad promised trope park.
Maan: oh no! Mum please I don't want to go.
Mum: but it's sammeras birthday...
Maan: oh no.
Geet: what happen?
Maan: I don't have any present for her.
Dad: what happen? Why sammera is crying?
Geet: OMG we going to be 14 soon!
Maan: oh no!
Geet: what?
Maan: I have to buy 14 present now.
Geet: mum can you Imagine me 100??? I will spend all maans money.
Maan jumped off and rushed in the washroom.
Geet tries to run behind him... But he locks the door.
Geet: Oy kute I suppose to be in there first.
Mum: geet! Go to your room...

Maan dad and sammera was waiting for geet... She was taking forever... Sammera still in a strop with geet...
Maan: geet... Hurry up...
Dad: maan beta could you please go and check on her...
Sammera more shocked... They were growing up and there family still treat these two like a 5 years old. I am his GF! Ugh I have more right on him... I just can't believe they even sleep in a same bed…




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