FF-manet***ESOTERIC LOVE*** Thread 1 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
cute kiss......practice makes man perfect.....hope maan and geet gets perfect in kissing🤣....they should do every night😉.........anyways plzzz update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
never did i think a 1st kiss would be like this
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ur update ssooo gud
love maaneet theyr soo cute
they jus kiss !lol
plz update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hye keyama,
"wish u a Happy Birthday" sweetheart God bless u
aowsome all d updte r superb I hope u enjoy u r day u get whatever u want in u r life
maaneet r so cute n possesive about eachother
hope u update soon n more parts pls updt n give us treat
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heermeher

I just luve this FF its tooo innocent plsssssssssss update 3times a day 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part dear
really loved ur ff
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update pls cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
aaaawwwwww!!! how sweet n cute they are :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 11


Geet on maans lap... Something weird happened to there body...
Geet: I like that.
Maan still nibbling on her lips.
Geet: can we do it again.
Maan: now?
Geet: can we do it everyday?
Maan: hmm... If you want.
Geet: why don't you like it?
Maan: I love it.
Geet: then do it again.
Maan: you could start. Why should I start.
Geet: fine... And she did... Saliva was slipping down... But they didn't stop.... Both fell sleep on one another arm... Geet were to lazy to go back to her room... Maan falls on the floor again...
Maan: ouch... GEET!
Geet jumps up... "what is it?"
Maan gives her a glare and he picks him self up...
Geet: I should go.
Maan: let me check outside...
Geet nodes...
Geet crepe behind Maan... He walks with geet to her bedroom... It's 2am...
Geet: good night...
Maan smiles... Geet gives him a peck on the lips instead of the kiss on the cheek.
Maan: good night...

Next morning... Geet was blushing whenever she seen maan... Thinking about last night kiss... It was a long kiss... There first sweet 16 kiss....

In school...

Ridzy: have you two done it?
Geet nodes.
Ridzy: how was it?
Geet: nice.
Ridzy: explain.
Geet: do it with armaan you will know.
Ridzy: no! Not with that duffer. I want to do it with someone special. Like you and Maan.
Geet: we are back to are diary. And we are making are own one. Well I am. He is so busy with the study. He must be so tirade. I kept him wake till midnight.
Ridzy: what? How long was the kiss?
Geet: we didn't have track. Maybe hour!
Ridzy: is it that fun?
Geet nodes.
Sammera joins them... "what is so fun?"
Geet and Ridzy dint like her at all. They don't consider her as there best friend. Specially how she always drool over maan. And they still Are BF and GF.
Geet: ugh....
Ridzy: what happen?
Sam: I hop you and maan done with that rule book.
Geet: umm!
Sam: I hard you 2 have. I am glad. Now we can... You know! is time to grow up.
Geet: yea...
Ridzy: I am going to get some lunch... Do you want to join me geet.
Geet: Defo....

Geet passes the football ground... Maan playing... He runs up to them... Hugging geet.

No Dutta to see... He is in collage... Not in school anymore.
Sam was observing from far... Some annoying girls were drooling over boys... Specially maan...
Armaan walks towards them waving to the girls...
Geet was turning pink seeing maans lips... Maan realizes and hugs her from the back... Hiding his lips...
All 4 were laughing... Giggling....
Armaan: se... Why can't we be like maan and geet? Even though they have there own BF and GF... They still so close. Why can't we do that?
Ridzy: shut up.
Armaan: all the girls drool over me.
Geet corrects him: all the girls drool over my maan.
Armaan: what ever.
Geet: even Ridzy does.
Ridzy emrrassed: no I don't.
Maan: really?
Geet gives maan a glare.
Armman: you better not.
Ridzy: I don't. She was turning red.
Geet: we are going to buy some lunch. Do you boys want anything?
Maan: I am so hungry.
Geet: I will get you something.
Maan was topless... Geet twists round... Pokes maans tummy... Oooo you have 6 pack.
Maan loves sport. He does every type of sports including his best study... And top of it spend quality time with geet.
His body was building up...

Maan: ouch!
Geet: only I am allowed to hurt you.
Geet: I love mussily boy. Make some mussel.
Maan: umm... I am too young.
Geet: start at 18.
Maan nodes...

They walks off....




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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sweety,

awesome part......loved their kiss....loved the way maan is asking geet to start this time......however this geet is so demanding.......poor maan he puts everything to fullfill geets wish....anyways hope sameera doesnt hurt them.....plzzzzz update soon cant wait to read more.


anyways HAPPY BIRTHDAY sweety😊
Edited by vinithaa - 14 years ago

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