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Posted: 14 years ago

part 9


Maan calls geet...
Maan: you have my card.
Geet: you only realized. I thought you suppose to be the cleaver one.
Maan: I spend all those money on texing you.
Geet: umm... You don't have to now. Are friendship officially over.
Maan: geet!
Geet: good by.

After one year.................................................

Maan and geet haven't spoken to one another for a year. There little diary friendship was over. So no point of flowing those silly rule.... But...

Bothe walks in to the house giving one another angry glare.

Geet: mum. I an tirade.
Maan: mum I am more tirade.

Dadi mum and dad looked at them bit worried.
Both looked older now... But no maturity.
Mum: I have told you.

Next day...
Geet looked more girly now. Maan liked his old geet.
Mum serves breakfast...
Dutta and sammera joins.
Maan: don't you 2 have any other works then coming round are house all the time?
Geet: I have invited them. They staying with us for a week.
Maan: what?
Sam: what's wrong with you I am your GF!
Maan: I have broken up with you year back.

sam: i am still ur gf
Geet surprised.
Maan: and I didn't break the last rule.
Geet: that doesn't apply anymore. I have broken them all.
Maan coughs
Geet: that was stupid anyway.
Maan gives her a glare... "fine!"
Maan: sam!
Geet: Dutta....

maan: Sam we are back togather...

geet: dutta we are bc togather...

Mum: everyone... Breakfast now.

Geet walks in maans room...
Maan: you really broke all the rules?
Geet playas with her feet for few second... Then hasitatly says no! I lied.
Maan: I didn't break the last rule.
Geet: umm.
Geet sits down next to him... They are 16... Mature enough to understand something... Guessing there was more then something there.
Geet: I forgive you...
Both holds hand... Maan holding it tight...
Geet: we missed are first kiss... She takes the diary out...
Maan: we have a year.
Geet: I want to do it now.
Maan: I want to make it special.
Geet: this room is special enough for us.
Both looked at one another that was the first time ever... They felt something.... They knew exactly what it was because it explained everything in the diary....

There lips hesitated for a minute. Not sure how exactly to start. There first kiss. They looked at one another lips for while... Trying to put them in a position... But it wasn't just working.
Maan: have you made are diary?
Still trying to fix there lips in a place.
Geet: yes... A box...
Maan: I hope you haven't designed in a girly way.
Geet smiles: half half...
Maan finally holds her... And there lips touch....
They kept there lips on place for while. Not exactly sure how that suppose to feel like. Maan holds her tight. Not letting her go...
Geet moves back: that didn't feel like anything. I have to ask Dutta.
Maan: no! I will find out.
Geet: what's wrong with asking him?
Maan: I have a older friend who can explain.
Geet: boy or a girl?
Maan: umm... Girl!
Geet: what?
Maan: she is just a good friend.
Geet: I didn't feel anything like your mum and dad.
Maan: umm...
Geet: call her now.
Maan: I will later.
Geet: why not now?
Maan: umm... Idk! It's 11. We might disturb her sleep.
Geet: fine....
She kissed his cheek and went to her bedroom.

Next day...
Both got ready for school... It's there last year just before collage. Both were mature and old... Maan looked more handsome then ever while geet more beautiful....
Dutta who could drive now decided to give geet a lift. Maan disagreed. Then obviously geet also would refuge...
Dutta had to take both...

Geet was delighted to met her old friends. They all looks so grown up. They all probably just hit there puberty...


Next: first KIsss...

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Posted: 14 years ago

part 10


Ridzy: you look so beautiful now.
Geet: of course. Geet hand jo hu.
Ridzy: what are you planning to do in collage next year?
Geet: I don't know. Biology... Geography and I don't know about other two.
Armaan runs up...
Ridzy: he is driving me insane
Geet: why?
Ridzy: he likes me.
Geet: that's good na!
Ridzy: I don't like him.
Geet: why? He looks pretty handsome. But Dutta is better.
Ridzy: I hope maan doesn't here that!
Geet: but he is more good looking then other two. Why would he mind.
Ridzy: you tell him that?
Geet: yes....
Armaan: tell who what?
Ridzy: go way!
Armaan: why?
Geet: don't be mean at bechara...
Armaan: you going to be my bhabhi soon... So behave with your future dever.
Geet: umm... That's like after I finish my university.
Armman: yes so.
Geet: shut up.
Armaan: Ridzy...
Ridzy: go way...

Armaan walks off.... Bumps in to maan...

Geet smiles at maan then walks off with Ridzy... Maan lost in her smile.

Ridzy: what's going on between you and maan? I never seen you smile like that.
Geet: we kissed yesterday. But it didn't feel like anything special. Like it explained in the diary. So we will try again.
Ridzy: but I thought you dating Dutta!
Geet: no! I broke up with his when maan broke up with sammera.

ridy: but those 2 are saying u and them.....

geet: hu....
Ridzy: oh! So you two are gather now?
Geet: he didn't ask me yet. So I don't know.

Maan calls his friend Nakusha... he Was Extremely Embarrassed to ask her. It was a bit weird... They were 16 and didn't knew how to kiss properly.

Maan: umm... Actually....
Nakusha: what happen?
Maan: how do you like kiss....
Naku laughed out loud... "Doesn't your GF know?"
Maan: we kissed yesterday! But it didn't feel that special.
Naku laughed louder... That how innocent and sweet maan was.
Naku: well... She started to explain... Maan felt more embarrassed... That how could he even ask something like this to her... She went more in a details... Which he became red...

Geet walks in the room... Finding maan all red... She sits up.... It's after dinner so no one will disturb them now...

Geet: have you asked her?
Maan didn't say a word... The word licking already eating his brain.
Naku: give her the phone.
Maan: No! He snaps....
Geet: I want to talk to her... I want know how to kiss to.
Maan: NO!
Naku: well show her then... And don't get over bored... Maan more embarrassed
Geet: so did you find out.
Maan: I think we should leave it.
Geet: no. I want to feel what your mum and dad felt.
Maan: no seriously leave it.
Geet came close... Why? Are you scared Maan Sing Khurana....

Oh! Oh! She was daring him... And you know the prize....

Maan: don't do that geet....
Geet: why not?
Maan: because...
Geet: because what....
Maan locks his door.... Geet makes her self comfortable on his bed... He turns the light off.... Just leaving the side lamp on....
Geet: we suppose to kiss... Not to turn off the light!
Maan: we need that...
Geet confused...
He comes to the bed...
Maan turns off the side lamp...
Geet: I can't see anything.
Geet could feel maans breath on her lips.
Geet puts her hand round his neck...
Geet: do it na...
There lips touch.... Maan frees her again.
Maan: don't seal your mouth.
Geet: ok!
Maan: leave it open.
Geet: ok.
Maan: this might feel weird.
Geet: dis nakusha told you that? Or have you tried with other girls?
Maan: shut up. You are my first kiss.
Geet: good. I better be the last one.
Maan: same other wise I will kill the boy who tries to kiss you.

There lips touch again... Maan pushes her against the bed railing.
Maan: copy me.
First he starts to nibble on her lips... It tasted amazing... It took time for Bothe to realize the pleasure... But they done it...
Geet: emh... You.... She didn't want to speak anymore they got the hang of it.... Maan tongue started break her lips seal... It was in... Geet was in surprise... But she copied him... There tongue plaid in one another mouth.... Geet found a new taste in there saliva... Realizing there first kiss and how pleasurable that was.... That was there first physical contac... It was weird.... But they done it... And they loved it... There was no pressure.... Simply enjoying the kiss'.


next: geet gives maan a peck on the lips instead of there young kiss on the cheek''.

:D hay you all' 2 parts.. umm well haha there innocent kiss. LOL.. ok the title will soon change'.. and and umm they willl also grow up sonn' :D be eady for that.. hehe

xxx TY SO MUCH FOR ALL THE LOVELY COMMENTS>>.. LOVED THEM DON"T FORGET TO PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON.

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lol the title is perfect- They are veryyy Innocent.
nice updatess
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Posted: 14 years ago

awww...that was adorable updates....poor maaneet

they are not together.....and they are just so

possessive bout one another.....

loved it and do keep writing

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Posted: 14 years ago
omg.............awesum update...and u update so fast.........lud it!!!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow interesting.. can't wait for more!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
love ur all stories they r just wonderful😊...................

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow u r fast.............. that was great....... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was just awesome.....part 9 and 10 were awesoem
loved emmm....really superb....and maaneet finally kissed
okies....going by ur words...we will se grown up maaneet soon
and there seem to be some problems wid them......
hope u don't separate them......
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Posted: 14 years ago
There first kiss. That was so innocent nun knew how to kiss. And there relationship grown. That is soooo well I am waiting for the twist. It could like take 360 turn. OMG
. Loved those talk between kiss. Made me blush
Xxx

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