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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
great update..👏.. waiting for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
loved it yaar..awsome one ..wanna see how maan gonaa manify geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
great part.
waiting 4 the nxt update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its very good ......plz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
its a very good story... and could you please include the index???
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey awesome maaneet married n bechara maan ab geet uski band bajayegi
waiting for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maan looked at her confused

It was accident……………….

There is no option for saving u……….

Geet:who are u…..your the one who kidnappedme……and you are saying im in danger

What is it..who are u…………………

Maan:u need not know whom am I and just think one factor this is for ur safety….

Geet:what made u think I believe u……………

U bought me here…………………..i agreed………..

What the hell it is……………………..now ur saying..that what is going is accident

My mang………..my dress……………………..is it ……………………..all……….

She burst into tears………….

Maan felt someone Is breaking from inside……….his heart cried out on seeing her in pain

He controlled a lot to go near to her and hug her…and take the pain…………..from her…………………….

He moved from the room

Geet:babaji.what are the sins I had done……….u had taken my mother…………….my father deceived my mother………………………………I never looked for him…….

I had only one hope that one day one person comes and takes all the pain from me and shed my life with happiness………..but now……………………………all my dreams are shattered…………………………

She is crying………..

After that she changed………….and went into the kitchen…………………………

She is totally confused…….

Maan came out…………..

He reached a place…………mid of the jungle………….

He cried……………….he shouted………………………………………

He got a call………

Sir……..this is ……..ranjeet…………………a private investigator……………………….i got the information regarding..the girl…………………………………….

Her uncle is behind…..it….as geet is the sole …………..owner of lot of property.as her grand mother left for her……………..the person who marries…………………..and if anything happens to geet after marriage the property goes to her husband………….

That is the reason…….her mother's step brother wants geet to get married to his son……….for her property.but before that girl is missing…………………………..

It is good for her………..as if the marriage happens.then the girl may get killed…………………………………………

He cuts the phone……………………

That means……if I leave geet alone……then his uncle plan……………………going to kill her………………………….

Oh no……….how can close relatives be so cheep for property………………

He comes back………….to find geet is sleeping on floor near…….bed…………………and a plate of food is there.but she didn't touched it…………

He felt very bad………..

He came down…………

He is feeling alone…………..

So he picks the phone……….

He called….

An olderly lady………answered.finally my pota ko yaad hay k eek budiya…………..uss phone ka intezaar karthi bhi hay…………..

Maan:dadimaa…..pls im busy……………..

Dadimaa:maan is everything is ok…………………………..

Maan:yes dadimaa………………muttered……

Dadimaa:I know my maan…………….something is bothering u…………..and u need to tell me right now……………

Maan:nothing dadimaa……….little confusion……make sure once it clarified I will get back to u…………………………

He came back………..

And lifted geet and put her in bed……….and covered with blanket…………….

He saw the red thread on her hand……….

And tries to remove it…………..but geet twisted her hand………made maan to move little closer………………

Geet is in sleep………..

He try to remove hand………………….without disturbing her………but she increased her grip………………………………….

He smiled……………………

He can use his power………but makes her to disturb……………………..

As it is like she wants him to be her side……………

Maan………didn't have option…….so he lied beside her……………….

Geet cuddled more to him…..now her hands are around……………………

He moved and see geet is peacefully sleeping…he saw…..her eyes teared…………………lines…………………

He know that she cried a lot…..

I donot know what our relation..is going tobe…………

But geet ur ainnocent creature;;;;;;;;;;;;;;and I will protect u from the evils of the society…………………………

Part ends

Maan looked at her confused

It was accident……………….

There is no option for saving u……….

Geet:who are u…..your the one who kidnappedme……and you are saying im in danger

What is it..who are u…………………

Maan:u need not know whom am I and just think one factor this is for ur safety….

Geet:what made u think I believe u……………

U bought me here…………………..i agreed………..

What the hell it is……………………..now ur saying..that what is going is accident

My mang………..my dress……………………..is it ……………………..all……….

She burst into tears………….

Maan felt someone Is breaking from inside……….his heart cried out on seeing her in pain

He controlled a lot to go near to her and hug her…and take the pain…………..from her…………………….

He moved from the room

Geet:babaji.what are the sins I had done……….u had taken my mother…………….my father deceived my mother………………………………I never looked for him…….

I had only one hope that one day one person comes and takes all the pain from me and shed my life with happiness………..but now……………………………all my dreams are shattered…………………………

She is crying………..

After that she changed………….and went into the kitchen…………………………

She is totally confused…….

Maan came out…………..

He reached a place…………mid of the jungle………….

He cried……………….he shouted………………………………………

He got a call………

Sir……..this is ……..ranjeet…………………a private investigator……………………….i got the information regarding..the girl…………………………………….

Her uncle is behind…..it….as geet is the sole …………..owner of lot of property.as her grand mother left for her……………..the person who marries…………………..and if anything happens to geet after marriage the property goes to her husband………….

That is the reason…….her mother's step brother wants geet to get married to his son……….for her property.but before that girl is missing…………………………..

It is good for her………..as if the marriage happens.then the girl may get killed…………………………………………

He cuts the phone……………………

That means……if I leave geet alone……then his uncle plan……………………going to kill her………………………….

Oh no……….how can close relatives be so cheep for property………………

He comes back………….to find geet is sleeping on floor near…….bed…………………and a plate of food is there.but she didn't touched it…………

He felt very bad………..

He came down…………

He is feeling alone…………..

So he picks the phone……….

He called….

An olderly lady………answered.finally my pota ko yaad hay k eek budiya…………..uss phone ka intezaar karthi bhi hay…………..

Maan:dadimaa…..pls im busy……………..

Dadimaa:maan is everything is ok…………………………..

Maan:yes dadimaa………………muttered……

Dadimaa:I know my maan…………….something is bothering u…………..and u need to tell me right now……………

Maan:nothing dadimaa……….little confusion……make sure once it clarified I will get back to u…………………………

He came back………..

And lifted geet and put her in bed……….and covered with blanket…………….

He saw the red thread on her hand……….

And tries to remove it…………..but geet twisted her hand………made maan to move little closer………………

Geet is in sleep………..

He try to remove hand………………….without disturbing her………but she increased her grip………………………………….

He smiled……………………

He can use his power………but makes her to disturb……………………..

As it is like she wants him to be her side……………

Maan………didn't have option…….so he lied beside her……………….

Geet cuddled more to him…..now her hands are around……………………

He moved and see geet is peacefully sleeping…he saw…..her eyes teared…………………lines…………………

He know that she cried a lot…..

I donot know what our relation..is going tobe…………

But geet ur ainnocent creature;;;;;;;;;;;;;;and I will protect u from the evils of the society…………………………

Part ends

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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
awsome update yaaar...loved it but its posted twice...plese see to it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
nice update dear............ plz see it is posted twice nd moreover it ws short.... plz updte next part a long one nd tht too soon. i want maan to tell d truth abt her property to geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
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