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Posted: 14 years ago
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As in the confusion

Instead of the dulha and dulhan

Where the people coming in the direction.took the dulhan and dulha with them

As…………..

Every one aware of the fact that geet and maan in the mandap.

Maan…………is looking for other direction

Where geet is completely unware of the situation.

She is so tired of running..

A sshe is weak.

So she is not ina position to listen.but she can assume that there is some pooja is going out……………….

At that time………………..

The pandit chanting …………words.and ordering the dulha to do the rituals.

As maan know if he refuse then they are going to caught.

He looked for a while.then he followed the orders.and after sometime..

Within a short term……………………….

He put manglasutra and sindoor in her fore head………………

But he is surprised as geet is totally confused……..

As maan had given instructions to open her gunghat…………………..

On the other hand……

Maan isthinking of…………………how the dulha is changed.

As the people searching for dulhan…

He peeped intoher room..

He found the wrist band and bangles of ……the dulhan…

With a single shot.he took it…

And he placed it on …………………….geet hands

Due to the reasons the ladies believed geet as ………………………………dulhan…………………….

And maan weared the darban……………

For the dulhaa…………………….

at that time…………………..

the goans had taken the actual dulhan and dulha………………..

and as they opne their faces to find that ………….there are not maan and geett

as maan found that geet is not opening eyes

as maan touched her………..

she falled in his hands………….

As she is so weak

Everyone was teasing………………….

As maan took geet down to the stairs……………………

At that time……………………..

He remember that she is running with him……………

And he is a running champion…..and he is used to all………………..

As she is so weak.

He cursed ………himself………..

Then he looked at geet………..

Wh o is sleeping peace fully in the truck..which he asked for help………………………

He opened the geet gunghat……………………………..

Andsee her face is so tired…….

And he saw the manglasutra…………………..and also sindoor on her forehead……………………..

And he remembered that pandit had enchanted the mantras..

To live a happy married life

In a minute life is completely changed…..

Unknowingly geet handa had became ……………………………………..geet maan singh khurana,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He smiled…….

And looked the innocent face in front of him

He then registered that is the reason……..

As she is not in senses………………….

That is why she didn' t protest

As that time.he lookover her phone……………………….

As he gets a signal…………………

He calls ahmed…

And gives his plan….

And they get down………………………

As he saw the truck driver smiling………….

He picks geet into his arms………………………………….

And walks………..

Lovingly looking at her innocent face……………………………

And a smile in his lips……………………….

Before he move…………

Ahmed comes in the jeep………….

Sees his boss get up

And gets shocked………………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
wow. they married. want geet's reaction on this....... update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..geet n maan r married..
cant wait to see gee's reaction.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
wow !!! they are married now !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ff..liked da concept......do continue nd add me too to da list
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The priest remember,……………….the two people……………….

He smiled

The destiny binds them………..

He is the saviour……….for her……………..

At that time.

Armaan is very angry…………………………

I don't know why……………….who is the person

The other person answers

We donot know the girl…………….

But ur dealing with a very higher person

He never misses the opportunity……

A person with several thoughts

And one powerful person………..who can fight with anomous……………..people…………………..

His mind Is quick……………..spontaneous……………..

He cannot be tackle……..

And no fear……………

He is a distinct person…………….

Only one person created by god…………………with a one known identity………………………….

On the other hand…

Maan took her dulhan to the room………….

Ahmed………….looked at confusion……….

At that time………..maan slowly put her in the bed…..

As geet is in his hands……and she is sleeping………………

He placed her…………..

And as he got up…

His chain,.stuck up with geet manglasutra

Now at that time….i used to protect u as ur my duty….

Now unknowingly u had became my wife……..

So ur protection had became my responsibility……………………………………..

He removes curls from her face……….to see her beautiful innocent………….face……

Ahmed comes down………

Maan explains everything……….except marriage……………

On the other hand…..he strongly wants to know the people………….after geet…………….

At that time………..he calls someone………………………..

And gives some details

On the other hand………….

Maan:ahmed….i want to shift the place

Ahmed:sir.but it is not safe………….as u know………..the security

Maan:no ahmed..now it is important for geet safety……………………..

Ahmed:yeh sir………ko kya huwa….pehle baar kis ee ke liye parishaan hoti huwe dekha…………….

I didin't know what is wrong…….

But why im thinking about her a lot……

He comes back to his room………….

\he finds geet is sleeping in the same room…………..

It was a cute scene………….

As he remembers…the wows in pheree…………..

I don't know the reaction.of ur geet……..but I promise……………….i will always protect u……………………..

On the other hand……………………….

The lady praying to god…

Mann halka huwamere…………iska matlab…………..geet teek hay……………………..

Maan came back to the room

He looked at the sleeping form…………of geet

She is in red lehenga….in awedding attire………………….

He smiled that how beautifull her dulhan is……………..

She is so pure,fragile………………..

Chup chaap itne acchee hay.

Par pata nahii..subha ka kya hogi……………………………….

Tan se badi hay…par mann se bachii.hay he remembres playing with rabbit…dreching in rain……….

Everymoment……

He smiles and sleep………..

What ever in the life………

It changed in moment………

In a moment………a stranger had became life……………………..

His life

He has right…………….

He smiles for his thought

Why it happens……

I want to stay away…….and life is bringing her so close……so that I cannot avoid…………………it..

What 's wrong with me

I cannot deviate from my mission…thi s was not my mission

Maan singh khurana never misses his mission andhis target……..what is happening………………

He is still confused

He closed his eyes..

As he know what is in his dreams…………………

Geet woke up the morning…….

She found…..she is in bridal attire………………………

Maan is at chair…………….he is still in wedding attire………

He close his eyes……………….

He is in sleep…..

She is confused….

She remembers…..that they are in a room……….

And she felt dizzy////////////as she is walking along with maan……..

And after that she remember nothing…………..

And she moved to bathroom…

She find sindoor……in her head,………

As she remember…….

Mama……..pati kaun hay…………….

Geet beta……pati who hota hay.jiska sindoor and gale ka manglasutra hum pehentee.hame unkee har baat maan leta…………………………….

How she is married……..what about the prince……

She is shattered..

She isburst into tears.

She is totally confused,,,,,,,,,,,,

She comes out….

She looks at maan….

In a shock

Part ends

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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
awesome part
i am waiting 4 her reaction
Edited by ambbiha - 14 years ago

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