Living without you(Maneet ff)part 16-pg46 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
aww,.... such a lovely update...
thanks alot yaar ...
cant wait .. continue soon
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
wow nice update.. luved it.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
wowwwwwwwwww
i read your all part
that was really awesomeeeeeeee FF
cant wait for next part
update fastttttttttttttttt
pls add me in your PM list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Noori93

I am so sorry to hear about your frend,may your friend rest in peace.I know how hard it is,and I am going through the same.I cant seem to accept anyone right now.But hopefully I will find that one person who will accept me with my friend:(Just like you...

If you need a friend to talk to I am always here,although you have your husband for that:)
And its good to see that you are blessed with someone so understanding.....(L)Thank you for reading my ff,it is probably as emotional for you as it is for me.....You will be suprised to see how much my story will reflect on your life....Next chapter will be dedicated to your friend and my friend:)



Thanks for dedicating it to my friend. Loved your FF. Do continue..:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Tht was an awesome part...loved it yaar!!! Plz continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Ali's graveyard part was too senti
I had tears
Loved baki whl update
Vicky dosent leaves chance of flirting wit Geet
Loved how Geet mixed wit all
Loved Maan's love n care for her
She is really fab wit all
I wish she gets all the happiness
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey noori!!!!!!awesome update....loved it.....šŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
hi thank you for the lovely comments...
I love you guys....

As the family was done eating Geet said she would clean up,Maan had looked up and offered to help.This shocked everyone,because Maan did not like to pick up people's leftover.Maan's mother smiled and gave everyone a pointed look,gesturing for them to follow her.The twins who were so tired and did not utter a word during the meal came up to Geet and tugged her saree.

"That was the best food bari maa.Oops can we call you bari maa."Geet bent down and hugged them before telling them she would love it.

Maan had watched their exchange,he felt a tug in his heart.Ever since this morning,everytime Geet was around him he got a weird feeling.He wanted to be close to her,but he knew that she was his for eternity anyways.He smiled to himself,going in the kitchen he saw Geet washing the dishes.He looked around and saw all the servants standing there.Glaring at them he made his way to Geet,and tapped her on her shoulder.

"Why are you washing the dishes."Maan asked her as he saw her.His eyes gazed upon her body.Her hair was tied up in a messy bun exposing her creamy white back.Her sar was tied in front of her stomach in a knot so it did not get wet.Maan gulped taking her in.

"woh actually I like to clean up when I make the mess.Aur Maan kuch cook bemaar bhi hain.You need to give them their pay so they can go see a doctor."Maan just stood by her and grabbed a towel and started to dry the dishes.

"Maan,aap na karo I will do it na!"She said trying to push him but instead she got soap on his hands.She gasped not knowing what he would do,but when she looked up she saw a glint in his eyes.She looked off not knowing why she liked to look in his eyes so much.She gasped as she felt water drip down her back.She glared at him and took water and threw it at Maan.She smiled in victory,but was silenced by water splashing on her face.She moved towards him and slipped.She closed her eyes for the impact,but felt two strong arms grab her .She felt his warm hands on her back,making her feel comfortable.Maan looked at her,trying to control the need to kiss her.This black saree was going to be the death of him.He slowly helped her up,and was about to say sorry when he felt water drip down his face.He looked at her with a serious face before tell her she was so dead.

Geet looked at him before running as fast as she could in the saree.She ran to the living room where everyone except the twins were.Maan was behind her,yelling out her name.She saw the family look up,and look at her state.She rolled her eyes before going to hide behind Dadi Maa.Still confused everyone heard Maan come in with a bucket of water,and they knew what was going on.

"Dadi apka beta mujhe gila kerne ki koshish ker raha"Dadi watched as she hid behind her.


"Dadi apki beti ne Maan Singh Khurana per pani pekha"Dadi looked at him amused because Maan was never so playful.

"Haye rabba yeh maine kya...Maine Baba Maan sing Khurana per pani pekha chi chi chi"Geet said and Maan rolled his eyes as everyone laughed.

"tumainri toh"Maan said as tried to rum after her but she ran upstairs.

"Maa,yeh dono eik doosre ke liye perfect hain"Vicky said

"Haan maa, Dada ke jane ke baad maine Maan bhaia ko kabhi ase nahi dekha"Dev said.

"And ghar main rohnak agaie hai"Arjun said,looking at his wife Arohi who had a small smile playing on her lips.

"Inhe dono ko patha hi nahi hai ke yeh eik doosre se kitna pyar kertein hain.Aur ab toh yeh eik doosre ka sahara ban gayen hain."Dadi said

"Woh maine pandit ko boolya hai aaj.inki shaadi ki moorat nikalne ke liye.Abhi atein honge"Sanaya Khurana said before going to find the servants.

"Nakul yeh baki sare servants kahan hain"Sanaya asked.

"Woh ma'am geet maam ne unko chuti di hai.Aur paise bhi.Kuch bohot beemar the.Unho ne kaha ke woh saare kaam ker lein gi tab tak.Magar eik sharat pai,ke woh servants apke poore ghar ke liye dua kerain.Aur especially Arohi ke liye."Sanaya was again shocked,who was this girl.Actually she knew exactly who she was.An angel who was going to put her family together.Smiling she left.

"Dadi apki bahu ne ade se sare servants ko shuti de di hai!"Sanaya said shaking her head as she saw everyone's face become confused.

"woh kyon bahu."Dadi asked confused.

"Woh Nakul batha raha tha ke Kuch servants bemaar the.toh Geet ne unk ache khaase paise deh ker kaha keh jab sahi ho jayen toh ajana.Aur unse kaha ke iske badle unki duain chaiye hameri family ke liye."Everyone had tears in their eyes.

"Dadi are we dreaming ."Vicky asked.

"i hope not beta."

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Maan had been looking for Geet,for quite some time now.Finally giving up he lay in his bed and closed his eyes,drifting off to sleep.Geet cam out of the closet and sighed.She was about to lay down too,but Mrs Khurana asked her to come down with Maan.
She went to fix herself up,and came out holding a towel.Maan was was wet,but he lay in the bed.Great she would have to change the bed sheet as well.Walking up to him she gently shook him,but he would not get up.Getting tired she was about to walk away when Maan pulled her hand making her lose her balance and fall on him.Maan felt her light weight on top of him,her hair were hiding her eyes.He gently pushed her hair away and looked at her.She was blushing,when she looked in his eyes she saw something,something he saw in hers.Getting embarrassed she got up and offered him the towel.Maan took it and dried himself.

Downstairs everyone sat shocked,the Pandit had told them that the best day to get them married was in 4 days or in 5 years.Everyone had loooked at the pandit as if he was crazy.

"Pandit ji 4 din main shaadi kaise hogi!"

"Maa.its okay I do not want a big wedding,and niether does Maan."

"Beta magar"

"its okay mama."Geet said.


Precap:Yeh kiya ho raha hai dono ko.Kahen yeh pyar toh nahi?

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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Awe loving the nok jok between maaneet good to see geet getting happiness she deserves and haha all the family love her and why not she is perfect for their family and like how she has gelled with arohi knowing her pain and I like how maan has accepted geet and Ali the grave scene was just special and woop char din mein shaadi cant wait anyways great sweet update and cant wait to read more 😊
Edited by -shamima- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
amazing i think she put family together & help Arohi from her grieve lossing babies love Maaneet working together pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn thanks pm

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