'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

fantastic update NIla
lovelyyy

u wrote d whole thing very beautifully
loved it
waiting for next part

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@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#342

First of all congrats on Half century of your Ff🥳

Keep it up dear

yar very Nice update

I really love our Sherni Nupur

kya thapar mara tha

I am really happy ka tammy Ko Mayank ka bara ma pata chal gaya

Warna mujha to us say bohat dar lag raha tha

Hope Mayur jald mil jae

Or han unha milana zaror plz apna last wala Ff ki tharaha hum Masom Mayurians pa zulm mat karna 🤔

thanks for pm

cont soon

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#343

awesome updt dear
thanks for the pm

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

awesome update dear...loved it sooo much...

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shaheen_memon

@shaheen_memon

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#345

superb yarr...so innocent confession 😊

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

superbbb

but mayur saath hi honge na :P

mayank jaldi wapas aao kahin tanmay ke liye bura

na lagne lag jaye :D

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#347

resved

lo...humain yaad hi nhi hum ny reserve bhi kiya tha...sorry

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#348

AADAAB...

pata nhi is update ko parh ny k bad...ek lambi se saas li hum ny...acha bhi ho k tanmay ko pata chal gaya...per...Khuda jany...

pata nhi neela...im short of words...

shayd ap ki akir lines ny humari zaban band kerdi...khabi khabi kis k likhy hoay alfaz...kitna sach hota hai...

ek aur khubsoorat tareer k shukria...aur comnt na moqamal kerny ki maafi chaty hai...

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: vampire_girl
see neela i am again first😎
is bar dua kijiyega yea firs ana humare liye lucky ho jaye😃
waise i am realy happy to be the first one to comment aur uo bhi apki FF ki half century par..yea to sone pe suhaga..hogaya..hope full century me bhi mai hi first aun🥳

ok now coming to the update
kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai ki yea nupur aur tanmay ka FF hai..jab nupur tanmay ke saath hoti hai to mayank kahin nazar hi nahi ata..aisa lagta hai as if he doesnt exist at all...jaise ki nupur ke liye mayank ka koi wajood hi nahi hai..pata nahi kyun

aur tanmay is falling for nupur??...OMG!!...i am so confused...har FF me pata hota hai jo bhi ho ending happy hi hogi par apke FF me..next parta ka bhi guess nahi kar pati mai..aur shayed yahi apki khasiyat hai😊

sare scenes tanmay ke saath horahein hain...use bacha bhi raha hai tanmay...batish bhi uo tanmay ke saath enjoy kar rahi hai...yea kya karrahi hain aap neela??
par amazing part as usual...and again those lines were awesome👏⭐️

thik hai fiza api ke saath hum bhi apna collection share karenge jo humne apke FF's se apne paas rakhi hai...aur apki book vampire nahi...bare bare writers parhenge😃
continue soon

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tasfia

LOL...yeh to humnain socha hi nahi. saare scenes to Tanmay k saath horaha hai 😆 yeh Mayank bechara to alfazon me hi qaid hoke reh gaya. per aap sab ki tasalli k liye yeh bata de k Tanmay ne usse nahi bachaya...in fact Tanmay ne Abhi ko bachaya. woh to khud Nupur se darra hua tha 😆😆 aur baarish me kahan Tanmay k saath thee woh...Tanmay bechara to paer k niche khara hua usse dekh raha tha. aur I love you bhi Tanmay ne suna per bola to Mayank ko hi hai na!! ok that was confusing..😆 😆

Waise congrats to u too...half century ka pehla comment aap hi ka hai. I too hope k century me bhi aap raho. and of course, thank you for the comments on the 4 lines (actually on the 6 lines)

-Neela