'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Neeelaa ur back... 🤗

& Ressssssssssssssss...Will be back with probably a loong comment...😛

I soo want to read it NOW.. But i have Uni tomorrow so will read and comment tomorrow....

Editeed...

First of all thank u soooo much for the dedication... & yes i know why... 😛😳

Its really sweet especially a very special update like this... Bohat bohat Shukriya.... 🤗

Okay what do I say... I read it tthree time just to comepensate for ur absence... Every time felt like the first...😳 '

Neela what do i say... Koi alfazhe nahi hai bayaan karne ke liye... Bas yehi kahenge ke bohat bohat bohaaat accha tha... & Again ur my all time favorite writer... Aap ki na hazri mein bohat ff's parhey par koi aap jaisa likhta kahan...

For the story... I find it really cute... How Mayank knows her every little action before she does...😳 Matlab abhi bi dil se dil ka connection hai dono ka...😛 Neela just wow... Ur updates always leave me in awe...👏

This last paragraph was just....😳

kaise bataye aapko k aap hi ki intezar me humnain apne bachpan se jawani ki yeh safar tay kiya'kaise bataye k aap se pehle aur aap k baad kabhi kisi ka khayal bhi hamare dil k paas se nahi guzra'kaise samjhaye aapko k yeh aap hi ki yaadein hai jo ab tak hamare jeene ki sahara bana raha. shukriya..aap hamare zindagi me wapas laut aaye'welcome to Nupur's world Mr. Mayank Sharma"

One thing i noticed was that Mayank when he talks, he talks very freely but Nupur's write or talk she talks with lot of respect... Usually Mayank would be like that since he lives in Us...par bhi it cute...

Mayank say "Tum" Aur Nupur "Aap" 😳 it's really sweet, but one thing does she just give him respect and therfoe she says Aap yah yunhi kehti hai?

What more to say... update parhne ke baad koi comment likha he nahi jata... Just simply amaziing update..

Haan agli baar phir na apni koi dissappearing act karna... Will track u down & kidnap u and bring u back....😛

Waiting for next update already.... 😛 😍 Mayank reply....😳

-Laiba

and yes i'll unres all my other comment on the weekens InshAlllah... I would have done it in ur absence par i didn't want to... Adhura ff parrne ka vbilkul dil nahi tha... But ur back...

Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago

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anju011

@anju011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

really cute update neela.
looking forward to the next parts.
continue soon

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

akhir kaar aap ne hamari tamanna puri kar hi di 😃

aap ne itni umda tehreer hamare naam ki us ke liye aap ka bohat bohat shukriya!

hum khush is liye bhi hain ke pehli baar kisi ne humain is qabil samjha hai.

ab itni umda tehreer ke baare mei hum kya kahein.....is ko parh kar to hamara dil khush ho gaya.

ab bus aap phir se ghayab na hon.........humain bilkul acha nahin lagta 😔

aise hi likhti rahein aur humain khush karti rahein

umeed karte hain is baar aap ka peighaan (msg) jald hi mile ga

tab tak ke liye Allah Hafiz 😊

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Wow neela

finally ur back

superb update

loved their letters

cont soon

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

superb....

the letter part was mindblwing....jst luved their feelings n thoughts

loved mayur

cont soon dear

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

kahin mai koi sapna to nahi dekh rahi na😲...neela laut ayi uo bhi update ke saath😲😲...jara koi mujhe pinch karo...🤣🤣
ok no more bakwaas😆....coming to the update.....
awesome like as usual...👏
kisne kaha ki ap story bhool gayin...hume to aisa kuch nahi laga.....😳
aww.....mayank laut aya...matlab letter to bheji na atleast.....😛
hayye.hume to aaj tak kisi ne ek fata ua paper bhi nahi bheja......🤣🥺
mayank memorie box😳.......aww.....nupur tum kitni sweet ho..par dekho neela par bharosa mat karna.humesha tum dono ko alag kar deti hai.....
nupur' reply was fab.....keep it up nupur.......😉
i hope jaldi se mayank wapas ajaye aur nupur ko doli me bitha ke le jaye........😍

and how can i forget to compliment those last lines....😳
just loved them......😳😳😳
i missed your shyari more that your update.....😆

pls continue soon😳
love
tashu

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

😊wow neela finaly u updated

the letters were really nice

loved the part

thanks for the pm

hope u update soon next part

😊

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Heyyyyyyyyyy neela
Hai ALLAH tumi tou naki tomar bhoot.
]koi din porpor kothai udhau hoye jao boloto????
hmmmmmmm kuch tou baat hain - kyun ki ye gayeb ho jana humari nila bibi ki adat baan gayi hai
very bad habit yaar-kyun bechari readers ko wait karwati ho????

ok bahut hogayi shikayat- ab updtre k bade main kuch bole
hmmmmmm mayanks first letter to nups- it was very nice

hahahaha so maynk nups acchi tarase samjhti hai- kab wo blush kar rahe hai, kab wo kaisa expression de rahe hai - everything.
loved this letter
and abt nups reply- amar ki mone hoy jano ekhane nupurer kichu ovimaan meshano ase.
maynk j etodin ok bhule silo kono jogajog rakheni -eta nups k kisuta holeu koshto diyese

khub khub valo update koreso
kintu plz ei promo size update diye amader heart attack korio na
next time try to update soon

r ekta kotha eibar jodi kono vabe sad ff bananor chesta koro - tahole tomar khobor ase........
purapuri murder hoye jaba.........
tumi jano ei tension a ami tomat ff tjik moto porte parina
mone hoy ei bujhi kono sad type kisu thakbe
.accha jai hok onek kotha bole fellam-tumi tou jano ami abar kom kotha bolte bhalobashiiiiii.LOL

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Hey Neela,

Nice to see you back !!! Hope you had a nice break 😊

The update was really good ,though short..No problem. Sorry for delay in comment.. I have reduced my online time nowadays.

Don't know why - I can't believe that letter was written by Mayank.. Won't believe unless mayank really appears infront of Nupur and says the same thing!!!😉 Tumhara Mayank ka koi baroza nahin😆

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

Hey Neela,

Its great to see you back!

Yaar sabhi log letters padhkar, reactions guess kaise karte hain?? I always feel the same thing!

Wow.....mayank guesses her reactions so easily....same like me and my friends...

And i loved the entire update.....but the thing that stole away my heart was ur ending lines...

I mean Nupur's thoughts as well as four poetic lines.......they just somehow touched a chord in my heart....

I am glad that i could read such a fantastic work.

Miss you :)

-Mahak

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