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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
wow Thats Awesome Dear...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏........
Loved it.....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️..........
wow so Finally Geet realised that She Loves Maan..❤️❤️❤️......
Loved it soooooooooo much when Geet expressed her Love to Maan.......
Loved these lines soooooooo much.....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.........

'yeh keh main app keh bina nahi rehsakti..itni dino seh main apse door ti, baat nahi ki.. mere dil apke bina nahi rehsakta. Mere dil bohot becheen ta apke saat ke bina. I LOVE YOU MAAN'.❤️❤️❤️❤️

'Maan agar ap ko kuch hogaya to phir mera kya hoga main nahi reh sakti ho apke bina'❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Eagerly waiting for the next part.........
Pls Update Sooooooooon......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
awesome part. loved it.

finally geet openly confess her love to maan.
I guess armaan will do something.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
awsome update
excellent
great so continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
awesome update
loved it
loved geets confession to maan
armaan is scaring me
wonder what his new plan
cant wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Oh god... what have u done to my Armaan and Riddihma but I hope nothing come between them meaning Maan and Geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
heyy..nahhii armaan is evil :(..lol..loved the last update..i'm so glad that Geet realized her feelings and confessed her love to Maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Awesome....mindblowing...
I am sooo happpy Geet realised her feelings for Maan......
and Armaan........I hateeeeeeeeeeeee him......so he is Brij's son....and wants to take revenge from geet now.......but maan hai na....so fikar not....
waiting for the next part.

love
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
PART 12
Geet awoke early the next morning. She saw Maan sleeping next to her and kissed him on his forehead. She then realised that even though she loved Maan and Maan loved her she didn't know much about him except his family and childhood that he mentioned. She remembered him having a gun that night but if he was truly a criminal she wouldn't be alive today and she wouldn't be happy. She knew his day time job was CEO in another company nearby. But Geet still couldn't forget the facts that Maan did shoot people. She wanted to ask him about this but was unsure of his anger. Maan woke up and saw Geet in a deep thought. He knew she probably had questions in her mind about him.

'Geet jo sawaal tumhara maan main hai uska jawab main dena chata ho'. Geet spun to see Maan awake and sitting up next to her on the bed.

'woh aap ko kaise pata keh mere maan main sawaal hai'

'tumhari aakhon se, ab tumne mujhe apna liya hai aur hum dono ab ek nayi zindagi shuru karne wale hai to main sab kuch tumhe batadonga'

'Maan mujhe us raat jab hum pehle baar miley teh auskey bare meh'

'ha Geet, sach hai ke tumhe laga ke main ek criminal ho aur main ek kooni ho liken sach yeh hai keh main ek undercover police agent ho aur mere dad police commisoner te'

'to phir app ne us din mujhe kidnap kyun kiya ta aur zarbarzasti shadi aur''

'isliye kyun ke tum ne mujhe deka ta aur main tumhe samjana chata ta liken main tume pyar karne laga love at first sight isliye kya tum muj par barosa karti ho

Geet was silent for a while trying to take the information in.

'ha khud se zyada' Geet replied pecking him on the lips and going to the washroom. Maan got up and went to the cupboard to take his clothes out and thought Sorry Geet main tumhe sirf ada sach bataya ta.sach hai keh main tumse pyar karta hu liken main koi undercover police wala nahi ho. pura sach nahi bata sakta keh tumare jaan katre main ti aur mere dad ka wada.Main sirf yaha tumhe bachana aya hu aur bas. Kash sach main tumhe batasakta..tum muj par kitna vishwass karti ho.

At the breakfast table Geet decided to tell him about Dev, the real reason why she went to the police station that day.

'Maan main aap se kuch kehna chati ho. woh aus din main police station gayi ti. Ek ladka ke waja seh. Woh Dev Malhotra ta jo kabse college keh din se mere piche para ta. Isliye main tora dar gayi ti jab main aus din akeli ti chacha aur pinky mere saat nahi ta. Mujhe laga keh Dev mere saat kuch bi karsakta hai isliye maine police main complaint karwayi. Pata nahi aaj kal woh dik nahi raha. Acha hua.'

'Geet wo to filhaal police station main hai. '

'kya police walon ne kaha ta wo kuch nahi karsakti sivai injuction'

'ha liken Police ko us ke kilaaf kuch aur sabot miley te'

Geet smiled at Maan. Maan didn't want to tell her the real reason that he with the help of his father got him arrested.

Maan dropped Geet to work and assured her everything will be fine with Armaan.

Armaan was waiting for Geet to enter her cabin he smirked evily as he had started his plan. He kept a old newspaper clipping of her parents being criminals on her desk and also the part where the leader of the criminal gang Brij had declared that he had got them killed and will make there daughter suffer when he finds her. The truth of the matter was no news like this was ever printed. Armaan using his technologies and contacts managed to make a false newspaper clipping for his plan to work.

Geet walked into her cabin smiling like nothing ever happened. She decided she had to talk to Armaan first. She knocked on Armaan's cabin door he allowed her in.

'Armaan, wo main apse kuch '' Geet started

'Geet gabrao mat bolo jo bi bolna hai'

'wo aap propose kiya ta aur maine inkaar kiya ta aap ko bohot bura laga ta'

'Geet tum chinta mat karo hum kal bi dost te aaj bi hai'

'Thanks Armaan'. Geet left his cabin to go to her own whlist Armaan smirked evily.

Geet went to her desk and was about to call Maan when she saw the newspaper clipping and was shocked. Her parents were criminals, her life was in danger. She couldn't believe it. She was in shock, she was the daughter of criminals. Because of them Geet complanined to babaji that she was alone but now she was upset because of her parents people were after her. Thank God she thought to herself that everyone thinks she was a orphan except a few people, Vikrant uncle Maan, and sister Maria and Pinky. Only Vikrant and Sister Maria knew her parents. Geet started crying at the facts of her parents past had suddently put a cloud over her future. Armaan seeing Geet in tears walked in and asked her the matter, she told him everything. He put a comforting hand over the shoulder and told her not to worry he is there for her. Then he suddently looked at Geet and said

'Geet tumhara pati, tum ausi kitni acche se janti ho'

'matlab'

'matlab tumhari shaadi ausne zabarzasti hue ti na'

'aap kehna kya chatey ho'

'shayad woh '..'

'MR ARMAAN MALIK kyun keh maine aap ko tokradiya iska matlab yeh nahi keh aap Maan ke kilaaf kuch bi bolo.'

'I'm Sorry Geet, shayad main galat ta'.

Armaan walked out and thought to himself he has to work harder. He has to break the trust Geet has on Maan no matter what happens.

Geet had a phonecall that afternoon from an unknow person

'Hello Kya aap Geet Handa ho'

'jee ap kaun'

'Tumhari jaan katre main hai, tum kisi par vishwash mat karna.. apno ko par bi nahi'

'liken aap kaun ho khena kya chatey ho'

'apne dosto, apne orphanage walo ko, apna pati par kisi ko par vishwass mat karna..'

'liken aap ho kaun'

'tumhare wellwisher..Brij keh admi tumhari bohot pass hai tum ausi pechan bi nahi paogee' He said putting the phone down. Geet turned to look at Armaan but he was busy talking to a few people in his office. Geet knew Armaan couldn't stoop that low and he couldn't call her at the same time whlist he was talking to people.

Geet was confused, she trusted everyone easily, she trusted Maan and Pinky, and sister Maria who was her confidante, but why did the man say not to trust anyone. Geet decided to keep mum and not talk to anyone about the newspaper or phone call. She had to find out the truth. But she knew one thing, it wasn't Armaan playing jokes and he was a business man why would he work for Brij. He was a well respected man who had so much money and he wouldn't stoop that low. Armaan, Geet thought was the only person she could trust at the moment.

The seed of suspicion had been planted in Geet's mind. She couldn't trust anyone. As she walked out of the office that evening she kept looking backwards and forwards to see if anyone was following her, but there was no one. Geet went to Maan who was waiting for her and sat in his car. She didn't say anything. It was unusual for Geet to be quiet.

'Geet kya hua'

'huh kuch nahi bas tori si tak gayi ho'

'Armaan ke saat'

'wo tik hai.. hum sirf dost hai ausne manliya hai'

'tik hai'.

When Maan and Geet reached home that evening, Geet ate her dinner in silence. She wanted to tell Maan everything but then what if he was the one, she didn't know everything about him, and police undercover agent, why didn't he tell her before, why use force, why kidnap her. Geet started having loads of questions about Maan. One question was that she had never seen him out of the home, or go to work. Maan looked at Geet and thought to himself whats wrong did something happen at work did Armaan do anything

'Geet tum tik ho na'

'ha Maan main tik ho'. Geet thought she would have to act normal. She had to act like today was a normal day.

'Maaaan mujhe movie dekni hai'

'huh abhi tumne kaha keh tum tak gayi ho'

'toh movie nahi dek sakti'

'acha acha tik hai kaunsi'

'urmmm DDLJ'

'yeh kya hai'

'Dilwale dulhania le jayenge.. pleaseee app niche wale dukan se lekar aayee'. Maan said okay he went and kissed Geet on the cheek and smiled. Geet quickly went into her bedroom knowing Maan would be back in five minutes. She went to Maan cupboard and started searching for proof if he was connected to Brij or her. She found a file with all her details and her life story up to date. Geet was shocked. She also saw everything about her parents about Brij, police reports that her parents gave to the police.

'Kya Maan Brij ka aadmi hai,?' Geet was shocked. She heard footsteps and quickly closed the cupboard and ran into the bathroom.

'Geet, kaha ho'

'Bathroom main ek minute'. Geet turned the tap on and started to cry. Turning the tap on wouldn't allow Maan to hear her cry. I TRUSTED HIM and HE USED ME. WOH MUJHE PYAR NAHI KARTA. WO BRIJ KA ADMI HAI. BABAJI MAINE YEH ITNI BARI GALTI KAISE KI

PRECAP: SEED of Doubt.. becomes stronger' Geet trusts Armaan. PHRASE 2 of Armaan plan begins.

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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excellent update
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Awesome update
loved it
wow armaan is clever
can't believe geet thinks it's maan
can't wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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