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Posted: 14 years ago
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TBH--I havent had time to do PMs.. but u will atleast get 4 updates a week.. ..normally not on mondays n tuesday.. possibly nt thrusdays x Im gna send u another update in a bit.. prob in da next hour.. x
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 8
Geet felt someones arm around her waist. She turned to see the man she despised holding her. She looked at him at disgust. She didn't know whether or not to trust him. Her heart and mind were collapsing into eachother. She pried his hands off her and warned him

'kabi bi meri kaareeb mat ana samjeh aap.'

'kyun kaal raat ko tum ne nahi rooka'

'is liye kyun ki main main daar gayi ti'. Geet said stepping back towards the wall.

'accha tu tum disappointed kyun ti jab maine tume choona bandh kiya ta' Maan replied with a smirk walking forward. Geet looked at him and thought maybe her mind was right. He can't be trusted he is just playing with her waiting for the right moment to abuse her body use his rights on her.

'shut up. door raho'. Geet said taking another step backwards. Geet knew by this time the whole building was empty. Everyone had left for work. The street below had quietened down. Maan saw the fear in Geet's eyes. He loved playing with it. He walked closer towards her

'nahi rahoga toh tum kya karlongi Mrs Khurana'. Geet looked around the room, there was nothing that could help her. Maan had already unplugged all the phones. Her mobile was revamped so it could only receive calls from Maan. She was trapped.

'aap kyun meri piche parey ho' asked Geet as soon as Maan had blocked her exit by his chest and his hands on either side of her.

'kyun ki babes'tum meri ho aur main hi tumhara prince charming ho. Yeh tum jitni jaldi samaj jao otna better hai tumari liye'

'Tum mere koi nahi ho samje..koi nahi kaminey'. Geet spat across his face. That was it. Maan anger had shot up. He wanted to give her a chance to accept him but Geet wasn't listening. Instead she was treating him with disrespect which he hated. He grabbed her without warning tightly, he whispered hoarsely in her ears and said

'main tumhara kaun ho main tumhe abhi samjata ho'. Maan anger had fully taken over him. He loved Geet and if he had to force her to love him he would do that. He dragged her into bed . He pinned her down. Geet was afraid at Maan's sudden movements. Geet saw the fury the fire in his eyes. Geet knew she had angered him. She wanted to apologise remembering how civil he was the last night but she couldn't think or speak.

Maan started kissing her neck and throat aggrevisoy. Sucking biting every inch. He proceeded to remove his clothes. Geet's tears started coming out but Maan disacknowledge them. For him the only thing he needed to do was make his wife Geet understand that she belonged to him and who he is to her. He removed her clothes too and threw them angrily on the floor. He started kissing each part of her body aggressively. Geet wanted him to stop, she moaned in pain. But this was making Maan more worked up. she tried to say sorry but he had covered her mouth with the most aggressive kiss ever. He proceeded to make more marks on her body. Soon he moved in with his manhood. He began slowly but then increased his pressure. Geet whimpered. Maan didn't take any notice. For him, she was his property. He increased his pressure time and time again. Geet was breathing hard crying hoping for him to stop. His aggressive behaviour towards her was paining her. He reached in harder, being more aggressive. He wanted to show Geet she belonged to him only. Finally after the final climax he withdrew and let her go. He looked at her and smiled and said to her

'ab tume pata chala main tumhara kaun ho. aur yeh mat bolna keh tum sirf meri patni ho aur sirf meri ho. samji ab jaldi se tayyar ho jao tumhe aaj kam pe nahi jaana. Aur suno agar tumne kisi se bi kuch bi kaha to'.'

Geet looked at him with disgust. Her mind was right, her heart was wrong. After he left the room, she went into the shower to get ready. Seeing the marks on the body she felt disgusted abused and thought is this my everyday life?

Unfortunately for her, the question would be answered very shortly.

PRECAP: Maan drops Geet off at Work. Geet hides her marriage symbols. Maan sees her talking with Armaan happily and Armaan touching her hand. Armaan's agenda

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh my god!!!!terrific update..........i felt bad when maan abused geet.......i thought he would make love with happiness and not angry.......i feel sorry for geet........anyways want to know why is he hurting her......and whatz with armaan.......plzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats Mindblowing Dear........
Loved it.......
Is Armaan related to the Brij gang?
Eagerly waiting for the next part........
Pls Update Soooooon
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PART 9
Geet quickly got ready and walked out of her room. She was surprised to see breakfast waiting for her. She was angry but then she thought about her life and wanted to talk to Maan. He wasn't around in the kitchen. Maan was in the meanwhile was standing near the balcony thinking about what he has just done, was he justified. He remembered the days of his childhood when his mother always used to make his father feel like he was nothing, never respecting her husband, he remembered his elders never respecting there elders. He didn't like it when people swore and were disrespectful, he had seen his mother do it to his father before she walked out on them. He promised himself, he will not let anyone do it to him. He was feeling guilty for forcing himself on Geet but he believed that bad behaviour and disrespecfulness should be punished.

'Suniye Maan' Geet said trembling walking towards in. Maan came out of his thoughts and wondered why isn't Geet angry or upset. Maan walked towards her.

'please aap mere baat suniye'. Geet said looking down trembling. Maan looked at her seeing her scared he said

'tumne jo bi kehna hai kaho.. darne ki zarrorat nahi hai aur ha jo maine tumhari saat kiya '

'woh aap ka haq ta aur main janti ho maine aap ke saat bohot bora tara se peesh ayi ti. I'm Sorry. Liken ek baat to sach hai, main apko janti nahi nahi pyar karti ho. apne mere saath zabardasti shaadi ki hai. Humare beech hamesha gussa ya jagra hota hai. Hum dono ne kabi bi ek doosre keh samaj ne ki koshish nahi ki hai. Main yeh chati ho keh hum jagra na kari aur dosti karley.. aur shayad main aap se saat rehne main comfortable ho jao. Shayad aap ko pyar karo. Liken abhi main apse pyar nahi karti aur yeh sach hai aur aap ko mana parega'

'ha to bolo tum kya kehna chati ho'

'wo hum dosti karle aur deere deere hum ek doosre ko samaj ne ki koshish kariye aur jagra bilkul mat kariye aur jo abhi hua ta please jab tak main aap ko app na nahi leti mere kareeb mat ay hi yee. Main jaanti ho aap ko lagraha hai ke mai koi mazaaq kar ra hi ho. liken mera yakeen kariye.. hum pati patni hai liken yeh rishta to abhi joora hua hai. Zindagi bhar main akeli ti aur aaj aap mere saat hai. Mujhe aap par barosa hai aaj. Main apse wada karti ho, ek din main aap ko apna loongi. Yeh mujhe manne ki liye waqt chahiye kisi ne kaha hai pyar ka pehla kadam dosti hota hai.. '

'hmmm'

'to kya aap mujhe waqt denge? Kya hum dost bansaqteh hai' asked Geet taking her hand out. Maan looked at her and smiled and thought maybe she is right, I need to give her time to accept me. This is the best way to keep her out of trouble and not argue with her.

'tik hai.. aur tum jaldi se nasta karlo liken tum kisi se mat kehna keh tumhari shaadi kaise hui' He said shaking her hand.

'Tik hai.. jaise aap ki marzi.. app bi chaliye khana khane'

'nahi tum kaloo'

'dekiyee humne abhi abhi dosti ki hai aur dosto ki baat mana nahi karni chahiyee aur main akeli nahi kana chati'. Maan looked at her and agreed to have breakfast with her.

'suniye'' Geet said walking out the car smiling.

'kya hai'

'wo aap ne kaha ta keh agar main kaha jaouge aap ko batane keh liye' toh main yeh kehna chati ho keh shayad main office keh baad Pinky se milne chali jao..yeh lo pinky ka number' Geet said giving him pinky's number.

'Tik hai mujhe bata dena main tumhe lene aajounga aur agar tum ne aise waise harqat ki to'

'dosti par bharosa rakiye Maan chalo bye' She said giving him a kiss on the cheek.

Maan thought to himself was she playing games or is she genuine he didn't know. Geet walked into the office and hid her marriage symbols. For her she wasn't married, she hasn't accepted Maan yet. For her he was still a stranger and just a new friend. Friends come and go, Geet thought. Maybe this way after a while he will let me go. I don't love him and I don't think I ever will. He is not my prince charming.

Armaan 'Geet kaha ti itne dino se' seeing her walk into his cabin.

'woh sir I'm sorry.. kuch kaam agaya ta wo main ..'

'koi baat nahi Geet, tum yaha ho to ab sab kuch tik hai aur tum chinta mat karna agar kuch bi pareshaani ho to main hamesha tumhara maddat karonga' Armaan smiled. Geet smiled back. Thinking there one Man who forces himself upon her and another man who is so sweet and always ready to help her without even knowing her.

Few days pass

Geet and Maan speak to eachother nicely sharing life stories. Geet told him about her mishaps and her pranks that she did whlist Maan listened to her attentively. Geet still felt something for Maan in her heart. She thought he was a good friend but nothing more than that.

In office

'ji Sir aap fikar mat kariye jaise aap ne socha ta wohi horaha hai. Ha wo yaha hai tik hai nahi main nahi chookonga. Main sahi waqt par nishana laga donga' Armaan said putting the phone down.

PRECAP: Maan sees Armaan and Geet together. Maan breaks the truce. Geet confused with her feelings

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update.....loved the way geet took the step to let out what is in her mind......anyways plzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow Thats Awesome Dear....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏........
Loved it sooooooooooooooo much...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.....
wow Maaneet are friends now.....😃.....
I hope Geet falls in Love with Maan soooooooooon........
Eagerly waiting for the next part..........
Pls Update Soooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome terrific update............cant wait to read more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 10
'Hi Geet' said Armaan walking into the cabin that morning. Geet looked at him smiling. He always made her smile and feel special as a person never rude, always understanding. Twice Geet had been away from work without warning due to illnesses of the children at the orphanage who Geet took as her own. Maan used to drop her there and made sure his men were guarding the building from afar and used to pick her up. He didn't want to take Geet anywhere especially the orphanage because he knew that's where Brij's men would first look for her but seeing Geet's commitmenet for the children he had to comply. Geet forgot to inform work and she was anxious that Armaan would be angry but to her surprise he smiled to her like nothing happened and told her not to worry and she will still get paid for the two days she took off. Geet explained to him what happenened at the orphanange and he smiled seeing how caring she was for other people.

'Good Morning Sir, kaise ho aap kuch kam ta' asked Geet.

'ha Geet pata nahi kaise kahoon ek ladki hai, jo mere dost hai liken aaj bi wo mujhe sir bolati hai'

'agar dost hai to naam se bolana chahiye na haina sir'

'ha liken ausi kaun samjaye.. wo bohot sidi sadi acchi ladki hai'

'kaun hai wo ladki main ausi baat karti ho.. dosto ko naam se bolana chahiye na'

'phir tum kyun mujhe sir kehte ho, Armaan kyun nahi bolati'

Geet was dumbstruck.

'Sirrrr main'.'

'Dekho Geet Sir nahi, sirf Armaan, main tumhara dost ho na ab.'

'jee tik hai Sir mere matlab hai Armaan'

'ok bye Geet baad meh milte hai'. Armaan smiled and walked into his cabin. Geet sat back down having a new friend in her life.

Geet and Armaan spent the new few days in office together. There friendship was growing, but Geet still remembered to keep her secret marriage intact. She didn't want Maan to know of her friendship with Armaan incase he gets angry and use him to blackmail her.

'Geet kya lunch pe jana hai aaj'

'lekin Armaan main wo ghar se khana..'

'ha wo tum rehne do ya dinner pe khalena ab chalo'

Geet and Armaan go to lunch at a nearby caf. Smiling and telling jokes. Geet was feeling more comfortable with Armaan everyday. He was coming close to her heart. Maan was about to walk in the caf when he saw Geet sitting with Armaan. Anger glared up in his eyes. He wanted to go right there and drag Geet out but he couldn't. He thought he would have a word with her at home.

'Armaan thanks lunch ke liye liken dosti ki hai na to is ka bil ya 50/50'

'liken Geet main de ra ha ho na'

'Dosti chahiye Mr Armaan Malik'

'Tik hai Miss Geet Handa'. Geet suddenly looked down remembering her own name. she had forgotton that she was no longer a Miss and her surname was not Handa anymore.

'Geet kya hua' asked Armaan clicking his fingers in front of her face.

'kuch nahi, urm chale'

Armaan and Geet left the caf. Maan watched them from a distance. Geet was about to trip when Armaan grabbed hold of her. Maan watched this and got angry. He walked back to his car and sat there and thought

Geet maine tumhe moqa diya ta keh tum mujhe samjo. Liken tum ne galat fida uttaya iska. Maine tumhe waqt diya ta. Aur tum mere peet peeche kisi aur ladke se mil ra hi ho. Tumne kaha ta keh tum mujhe ek din apna maanogi. Phir tumne ye mazaq kyun kiya. Barosa tora mera. Tum sirf meri hoy eh to tum janti tin a to phir'.

Geet quickly left the office, at the end of the day wishing goodnight to Armaan. Geet quickly took out her marriage symbols and put them on as she hurried out of the office gate looking for Maan's car and there he was waiting.

'Hi Maan, kaise ho aap'. Maan didn't reply. He looked at her at anger.

'okayyyyyyyy then,, chalo ghar challein main bohot tak gayi ho' Maan clenched his fist. Geet noticed that.

'Maan kya hua sab teek hai na'

Maan didn't look at Geet and started the car and started driving fast without speaking. Geet got scared as she was afraid of fast driving as this is what took her parents away. She pleaded with Maan to slow down but he didn't listen. All he could think about was Geet and Armaan. Finally after half a hour Maan stopped the car in the middle of no where. Geet feeling sick and in need of air walked out the car and stood outside leaning against the car door. Maan walked out and went towards Geet and Geet looked at him.

'yeh kya ta Maan, apko pata hai mujhe tez gariyo se nafrat hai to phir'

'tumne mujhe samaj kya raka hai huh, koi kilona.'

'Maan yeh aap'

'Tumne mere saat mazaq kiya, keh ra hi ti keh main tumhe waqt do mujhe aapna ne ke liye to phir tum aaj kisi aur keh saat kya kar ra hi ti. '

'Maan aap galat samaj ra he hai'

'Galat main tumhe samaj raha ta.'

'Maan wo mere boss ta'

'waa boss, tum boss ke saat lunch karne jaati ho'

'Maan akir ap ko ho kya gaya hai'

'Geet main tumse pyar karta ho aur main tumhe kisi aur keh saat nahi deksakta'

Geet was silent, she knew he married her and abused her on the night of the marriage seeing her as his property, but he now claimed he loved her. Geet looked at him and her heart starting to feel something, but she knew it wasn't love.

'I'm sorry Maan, Liken saach abi bi yeh hai keh main confused ho. Main abi tak tumse pyar nahi karti'. Geet replied silently unaware if Maan would be angry at her. Maan looked at her and was angry as he thought after all this time they had spent together she would start to love him. He walked up to her. Her back against the car his chest against hers. Geet body started tingling with sensation. Her breathing increased. Her heartbeats started going erratic. Maan then kissed Geet passionately. He wanted her to be aware of his love. Geet lost in Maan and his closeness responeded with full passion, with tongues playing biting and sucking. After a while they broke apart. Maan smiled at Geet. Geet looked at him in horror, she had kissed him and responded to him even though she didn't love him. What was happening to her?

PRECAP: Armaan proposes to Geet. Geet confused between Maan and Armaan. Armaan true identity

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago

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