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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
wow The Promo itself is Very Interesting...............
Will be eagerly waiting for Ur Update........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
OMG READ UR FF IN ONE GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 UPDATE UR KILLING ME HERE!!
plz add me to pm list thnx!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Interesting promo.
Can't wait for the update now. Please update soon.
And cliffhanger? NOooo.... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
m very excited bout how maan is going to save HIS geet 😊..............Plsssssss update ASAP...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95

OMG... IVE BEEN WORRYING ABOUT THIS STUPID ESSAY "ALLOWING JURIES TO GIVE VERDICTS WITHOUT REASONS OFFENDS AGANIST A DEFENDANT RIGHT TO A FAIR TIRAL AND THE OVERRRIDING OBJECTIVE OF THE CRIMINAL PROCEDURE RULES" DISCUSS>>>> ANDDDDDDDDDDD ITS NT EVEN BEING ASSESSED>> its due 2mz though

STUPID LECTURER JUST WANTS US 2 WRITE IT!!!! OH WELL IM GNA CHAT SHIT LIKE ALWAYS>> ANYWAYS UPDATE UP IN less than AN HOUR... then im gna start my essay LOL!!! which is a waste of time!!!
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Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
OMG!
d promo sounds intense!
so scared for geet!
hope everything will b fine!
update soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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GIST of the STORY SO FAR

Geet was a orphan or so she believed. Maan saved her from a shootout. He married her forcefully. Geet after a while falls in love with him. Maan true mission was to save her from her past. Geet's parents were criminals working under a main criminal Brij who killed Geet's parents due to betrayal to the police. Maan's father promised to protect Geet from Brij who had promised to ruin her life. Armaan is Geet's boss who she trusts. Armaan is seen to be Brij's son who is playing a game with Geet for her to trust him and break trust on Maan. Geet finds out the truth about her parents and Brij's promise to ruin her life. Geet suspects Maan to be Brij's man and playing with her life.

PART 13

Following Morning

Geet awoke early and saw Maan sleeping soundly next to her. She thought to herself how could a person be so conniving. She was disgusted she gave her heart and soul to a man who was only using her to ruin her life. What was he going to do later? Give her to Brij and then Brij would probably ruin her life more and in the end kill her. Geet knew that she had to run away some how. Geet got up and got herself ready. Maan awoke after her and went to the other room to make a phone call. Geet after getting ready, overheard Maan speaking.

'jee, maine Geet se kuch nahi kaha. Wo abhi tak apne bare main anjaan hai. Meine kaha ke main undercover police wala ho ausne wo manliya. Don't worry Sir Geet ko jab tak app na chahe Geet ko kuch nahi batana wala ho main, Brij ka sach aur Geet ka parents ka sach maine chupaya raka tab tak hum log kamyab nahi hojate'. Geet stood at the door and tears feel out of her eyes.

Maan maine app par vishwas kiya aur apne har pal mera dil keh saat kela.. ap yeh kaise karsaktey hai. I can't believe you. Aaj ke baadh koi bi ladki apne pyar par vishwass nahi karsakta. I Hate you Maan.

Maan turned to see Geet staring at him with blood shot anger eyes. He was shocked that she had heard everything.

'Geet mere baat suno'

'aur kya suna hai baki, mere parents ka sach mujhe kal pata chala liken aaj apka sach bi pata chala.. I HATE YOU.'.

The words I HATE YOU, hit Maan in his heart like thousands of needles piercing his heart.

'Geet suno'.

But it was too late, Geet ran out of the apartment and got into the first taxi available. Maan followed her on his bike, he knew where she was going to go. His phone rang and seeing it was an important number he picked it up via Bluetooth.

'Hello Sir, humne aus dhokebaaz police wala jo Brij ke liye kaam karta ta pakar liya aur humne pata chala hai keh Armaan Malik Brij ka beta hai aur wo Geet ke saat khel khelraha hai'

'Kya, Armaan Brij ka beta hai'.

In taxi

Armaan's men saw Geet took off and told Armaan that Geet was heading towards the orphanage. Armaan told his men to do something in silence. The men understood.

Geet rang Armaan

'Hello Armaan aap kaha ho please mujhe mere dost ka haat chahiye' said Geet worried and crying.

Armaan with his fake concern asked Geet the matter.

'aap sahi keh rahey te.. Maan hai jo mere zindagi ke piche hai main orphanage jara hi ho aap please waha aajaye'.

'ha tik hai Geet tum wahe rukna main tumne bachana aa raha ho'.

Armaan smirked putting the phone down and made his way to the orphanage.

Maan reached the orphanage and heard gun shots. He got worried thinking it might be Geet. He walked in from the door and saw Sister Maria shot stone dead. He checked her pulse but it was too late. At that moment Maan saw two men running out from the back door, he followed them but lost them.

He went back to the backdoor to see Geet crying next to Sister Maria's body. She looked up to see Maan with his gun out

Maan standing at the backdoor with a gun looking at Geet. Geet stares at him shocked. Geet is standing next to sister Maria body who had just been shot before Geet arrived.

'maine yeh kabi nahi socha ke aap itni girihue insaan ho saktey hai.. mujh tak poch ne ke liye aapne masoom logo ko mara'

'Geet aisa nahi hai meri baat suno maine kuch nahi kiya' Geet stood up walking back away from Maan whlist Maan walked towards her. Geet frightened not knowing what to do, as Maan's footsteps came closer saw a cricket bat next to her. She picked it up and wacked Maan on the leg who was inches away from her and ran for her life.

Geet runs out of the orphanage trying to call Armaan. Maan chasing was chasing Geet trying to stop her to save her. He sees Armaan at the clearing and gets worried. He knew who Armaan was. Geet sees Armaan waiting for her and smiles in relief. She runs up to him and hugs him tight. Armaan consoles her as he sees Maan coming. Maan looks at Armaan at anger.

'Armaan jaldi mujhe yaha se le chalo' Armaan smirks evily at Maan.

'GEEET Armaan jaise dikh ta hai waisa nahi hai tumhari jaan katre main hai auske saat maj jao wo brij ka admi hai' yells Maan running towards them

'Shut up Maan aur kitna joot Brij ka admi aap ho' Geet yells back sitting in the car. Armaan sits in the driver seat and drives off just as Maan reaches the car.

"GEEEEEEEEEEEEET"

In the car Armaan rests his hand on Geet's and said

'Geet tum tik ho na'

'ha kya hum police station ja sakte hai'

'liken kyun'

'wo Maan ke baree mein'

'Tumhe Maan se darne ki koi zarorat nahi hai. wo to bohot acha insaan hai aur tumhe bachane ki koshish kar ra ha ta wo koi brij ka admi nahi hai'

'KYA main samji nahi'

Armaan stopped the car in the middle of nowhere and turned to face Geet. His tone changed suddenly and the atmosphere. Geet felt scared.

'KYUN KE MAAN SAACH KEH RA HA TA. BRIJ KA ADMI AUR BETA MAIN HO GEET'

Geet looked at him shocked and betrayed.

'Nahi yeh nahi hosakta..tum to bohot bari admi ho Armaan Malik, Aditya Malik ka beta..'

'Geet darling Armaan Malik Marchuka hai aur Aditya Malik bi.. aune marna para Darling tumhare wajah se mera naam Armaan Brij Rathod hai'

Geet looked at him shocked as the world came crumbling down on her. She realised that she was never in any true danger with Maan but now she was. She tried to open the door but it was locked.

'Kya kar ra hi ho Sweety tumhe pata hai tum kahi nahi jaasakti aur Maan to tumhe kabi nahi milsakta. Tumne Maan par barosa nahi karke mera kaam kitna aasan kardiya'.

Geet slapped Armaan. Armaan got angry and slapped Geet really hard. Blood started oozing out of her lip. Tears fell out of her eyes.

'mujhe tappar marne ki himmat bi nahi karna samji'. Geet struggled more to open the door and Armaan kept laughing at her.

'MUJHE MAAN PAR YAKEEN HAI ARMAAN, WO ZAROOR AYEGA' Geet said looking at Armaan with confidence. Armaan laughed at her confidence,

'Agar woh zinda bacha to'

'TUM MAAN KO KUCH NAHI KARSAKTEY, AUNKE PASS MERE PYAAR HAI WO AUSE KUCH NAHI HONE DENGE'. Geet told Armaan in a matter of fact voice. Armaan was getting annoyed with Geet's talking and moving around trying to get out. Without warning he grabbed Geet's hand and tied her hands because he knew she could touch the car controls and could cause trouble.

'Ab ghar chale Sweetypie'.

PRECAP: WHERE IS MAAN?

WILL MAAN SAVE GEET?

WILL GEET ESCAPE?

WILL ARMAAN TORTURE GEET

WILL BRIJ TORTURE GEET?

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey great update.....pls continue as m dying to no how maan is going to save geet........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG Thats Mindblowing Dear......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.............
Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️......
Loved the way U carried out the Story....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️........
Thats so Beautifully Written......⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.......
Thank God Geet came to know abt Armaan...............
I hope Maan will come soon and save her............
Eagerly waiting for the next Part...........
Pls Update Sooooooooooooon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
god!
awesome update!
m so glad atleast geet now noez d truth tat maan is d nyc guy n armaan d bad 1
but is maan fine?
hope ntn happens to him!
update soon!
can't wait to noe wt will happen!

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