MaYur Gallery - Updated OS Page 29 - Page 17

Originally posted by: sreevijayan

nice work dear..loved it..u portrayed their emotions and feelings well...

Thanks! Glad you like it and thanks for your lovely comments too.


-Neela

p.s. By the way did you change your nick? You are in my bud list but I don't seem to recall your id. Apologies for that..

Originally posted by: anju011

That was such a beautiful os neela. Wonderfully written.
Happy to read ur os after such a long time.
Happy Christmas.

Happy to see you on my thread after such a long time 😊 Hope you are well and enjoying the festive holidays. Thank you once again for reading and commenting. Look forward to many more to come

-Neela

Look whose back!

It's Neela!

Glad to have you back!

The OS was simple and enchanting!

So much conveyed in so less words!

The work was simply beautiful!

Hope to read more from you soon!

Luv

Mahi

Originally posted by: NorthernLight

Nivi ki bacchi...ek saal kya 10 saal ka break leke bhi aaoon aur tumhare sarr ke saare baal bhi pakk jaaye toh bhi logical hat nahi utrega sarr se..nahi?? Anyways, again its good to see you too 😊 Hope everything is well settled now and you have bit more spare time in hand for IF and meri ghaltiyan nikaalne k liye 😡 😆😆

By the way, maine MaYur ko beech sadak pe nahi chhora, woh dono mile hi beech siriyon per hai 😆 so unn se jaake poocho k itne saal itna sab kuch notice kiya toh himmat nahi bani k ek doosre se baat kar le!! Aur yeh kya address phone number 😲 abbay situation ko samjho...achanak siriyon per mil jaate hai dono aur baaton baaton pe nikal aata hai k dono ek doosre ko pasand karte rahe per kabhi baat nahi ki ek doosre se. Ab achanak pehli mulaqat pe baat hona phir ek doosre ki dil ka haal pata chalna ...aisi situation per apna Mayank address maangega ya apni Nupur kitaab phaar k number likkhegi!

Ok..on a serious note (dil ki bharaas nikal gayi 😛) actually there is a happy ending! Remember what Mayank said in the end...I quote

M: haan per shayed Mumbai ki logon ko chote sheher k log raas aajaye. Who knows? He tries to gauge her reaction by looking directly into her eyes.

isska matlab yehi hua na k he will come to her to Morena and he was trying to see her reaction for this comment. But they got disrupted by the workers. Then again Nupur's very last line definitely showed how much she loves him..that's a 'Yes' na? So yes, its a happy ending. Itne saalon se meri writings parh rahi ho, inn sab baaton ka pata hona chahiye na ab! That I am so uncomfortable in writing happy shappy wala stuff that even after a year I do this in an encrypted and encoded message. Decipher and enjoy ...that's my slogan! 😆

I missed you Nivi...comment parhne k baad pata chala how much. Thank you...

-Neela

Happy Ending ki dushman
tragic queen- abhi bhi waise he hai. bilkul nehi badli..:(. i said na- u should try new things. try to make uncomfortable things comfortable- pher dekhna kya maza ata hai..

Originally posted by: aysha1989

Hi Neela, Hope you are doing fine 😊

First of all about the OS... Oh God I was so happy, so happy that I didn't know what I would actually tell you.. I am reading something written on Mayur after months and trust me when I say that this small yet lovely OS brought in that connection instantly with the same intensity... now I remembered why I was in love with Mayur and your writing so much 😃 Thank you so much for that!

True that I love how you use Urdu, but as I have told you earlier I would read anything and everything you write, be it in English or Urdu 😃 And I am sure that I would love it the same too... maybe even more.

And then comes your reply to my comment... I was... no I am still over the moon 😳 You were one of those people who inspired me to write and you appreciating my work is a reward... Thank you so much for mentioning it... I am really overwhelmed 😳

Will be waiting to read more of your amazing writings.

Take care ❤️

Awww...Thank you so much Aysha! You can't imagine what it means to me to hear such heart warming words from my readers. Its truly inspiring and I am so glad that my writing has such impact on you. I hope and pray you continue to write like the way you do and keep touching the hearts' of your readers just like the way my readers' do to me 😊

Thank you once again. Here's hoping that I can continue to keep up the standard and meet my readers' expectations. Bless you..

-Neela

when will you presenting us new mayur story

Originally posted by: Maria.

I hope i'm not dreaming.😲.Let me pinch me to see its real.:D

so finally on 24th of December. you are finally back...yayyy.:D

Accha toh...Sab se pehle apka bohat bohat Shukriya itni khoobsurat tehreer likhne ka..Bohat dino baad Neela ka likha parhney ko mila..Dil bagh bagh ho gaya.

Ye apke Mayank/Nupur bhi na bohat complicated mohabbat kerte hain--na kehte hain aur na chupate hai..beech ka rasta ikhtiyaar kerte hain.Per hamain bohat ache lagte hain..

unki ye choti si guftagu bohat dilchusp this..khas ker ke hamari Nupur..itni bold,friendly but still innocent..you know i love her.

Likhte rahiye janab hum apka PMs ka intezaar karain ge...

Maria.

ermmm..how can you pinch yourself and see if its real or not ❓ What if you're actually dreaming and in your dream you're pinching yourself and feeling the pinch itself!! 😆 Good k date diary me darj ker diya ...wapas ghayeb hone per check kar sakte ho k iss daffa kitne din tiki 😆

Meray Mayank Nupur ko khabardaar jo kuch kaha! bechare haalat se majboor hote hai warna kaafi pyaare hote hai. inke fazal se mujhe public me jootay parte hai so they are very dear to me 😃 bas ab aage aage dekhiye kahan kahan k paani pilaatay hai yeh dono...Of course, meri khaatir daari me aap ka bhi dawaat hai..shaamil rahiyega 😉

Thank you for constantly reminding me that at least there is one person who will always be there when and if I ever started to write. Aur kya kahoon? 😊

-Neela

Originally posted by: Faria.

Welcome back neela

Thank u so much for writing Mayur OS

Its so sweet of u

Thanx GOD u wrote a Mayur OS instead of FF

Karon FF likhle tou otar sad or tragic ending hoto . r amar ota porai hoto na

Tai jokhon dekhlam tumi OS likheso tokhon tou ami moha khushi ki tragic queen ebar ekta bhalo kaj korlo. Hehehehehehe

This OS was short but superb

They care for each other even they noticed very small small thing abt each other and I really loved the way they express it...very beautifully written.

Waiting for part 2- I hope ki u don't apart mayur here as u promised w'll alwz write happy OS..

ki re bhai! washing powder diye dhue felle je? tao to shanti pele na ...jhaaki diya amare dori te tangaya dila..😆 Fari samajh nahi aaraha hass rahe ho ya roh rahe ho...khush ho k udaas ho ...meri tareef ki ya mujhe dho daala. complicated k bolo dekhi?

hmm...I hear you! As I said I will be experimenting few things. This was one of my old styles although I wasn't sure about it but now from the readers' reaction I think I can gauge that I have kicked off from where I left off. And abt FFs I dont think I will ever write a MaYur FF again..perhaps something out of fan fiction but just to keep the memories of my fav couple alive, I may just play with MaYur via OS or SS.

Abt 2nd part, as mentioned earlier, there is none! It was just a snapshot of a moment, not a story. No beginning no end...just a moment that passed by. By the way when did I promise abt happy OS on MaYur? That is so unlike me making such promises 😆😆

ANyways, check out the next OS..amar mone hoy tumi hashte hashte matite gorabe 😉 tokhon kintu ekta bishaal comment chai..bole rakhlam.

-Neela

p.s. Thank you! ami bhabini tumi amar thread e ashbe bole...its good to see you here!

Originally posted by: Angle.

Welcome back neela
hope now we will get some beautiful mayur FF and OS from you
this OS was superb
plz update next part soon

Thank you! I do apologize for this but what was your old nick? I cannot seem to recognize your nick at all. So if you can please either let me know your name or old nick it will help me a lot.

Either way, thank you for reading and commenting

-Neela

Originally posted by: tasnim.

Very nice OS

Thanks Tasnim and welcome to my thread. Its always good to see new readers 😊 Kindly send me a bud request should you wish to be included my PMlist.

-Neela