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nice one neela... couldn't understand anything wht mayank was saying. but really enjoyed reading this..

Jusr read..

Oye..

lol m waiting fr ur translation 😆

Ei OS e happy ending hoyeche eta bola jete pare..

Ek mulakat muskhatir si is nice one
lost in translation is cute one
waiting for your translation
thanks for the pm

Finally one os which leaves me smiling , without any complaints to you. Dnt worry, im not going to apply any logic and spoil the fun. Waiting 4 translation..neela , you know 7 languages? Great yar. I know only 3.

Originally posted by: NorthernLight

ki re bhai! washing powder diye dhue felle je? tao to shanti pele na ...jhaaki diya amare dori te tangaya dila..😆 Fari samajh nahi aaraha hass rahe ho ya roh rahe ho...khush ho k udaas ho ...meri tareef ki ya mujhe dho daala. complicated k bolo dekhi?

hmm...I hear you! As I said I will be experimenting few things. This was one of my old styles although I wasn't sure about it but now from the readers' reaction I think I can gauge that I have kicked off from where I left off. And abt FFs I dont think I will ever write a MaYur FF again..perhaps something out of fan fiction but just to keep the memories of my fav couple alive, I may just play with MaYur via OS or SS.

Abt 2nd part, as mentioned earlier, there is none! It was just a snapshot of a moment, not a story. No beginning no end...just a moment that passed by. By the way when did I promise abt happy OS on MaYur? That is so unlike me making such promises 😆😆

ANyways, check out the next OS..amar mone hoy tumi hashte hashte matite gorabe 😉 tokhon kintu ekta bishaal comment chai..bole rakhlam.

-Neela

p.s. Thank you! ami bhabini tumi amar thread e ashbe bole...its good to see you here!

@red- ami bujhlam na kivabe tomake dholai korlam
ami ja bollam ta shoja shuji bolechi- kintu ete tumi kemne dholai hoye gele bujhte parlam na..hmmm ami tou tomar proshongsai krolam ei bole ki thax GOD ei bar tou sad kichur haat theke rokkha pelam..😆

r promise er kotha- tumi amae kono ekta PM kore othoba reply a bolechile j FF gulo tou SAD hoi kintu OS gulo happy ending hobe. ekhon ami tou r oi kothat din khon , tarikh likhe rakhini ba oi PM o nai j tomake proof hishebe dekhabo...ki kori bolo tou???

Originally posted by: NorthernLight

abbbaaayyy...happy ending ka dushman nahi hoon! bas ending ka dushman hoon! 😆 I don't know...I just don't like ending a story. Although people think that I leave my readers on a cliffhanger but the truth is I believe I always give an open ending that helps readers to direct their thoughts to whichever endings they like. You're right! I am not comfortable writing confession stories like "I love you...do you love me? If yes, how much..?" such cliche! shaadi hogayi ...honeymoon pe chale gaye...phir kya? saas bahu k jhagre ya husband wife ki growing distance? daal chawal k bhao poocho ya bacchon k school k fees? Its difficult for me...I cannot leave a Mayank and Nupur happily married and end the story and then write another one where they face a different problem but ultimately get married again. And then write another one...let them thru hell and heaven but get them married...again! I have to leave them at a stage where they can re-live their love thru another story of mine. Something that is realistic ...yet immortalizes them. 😳

Anyways, I understand your frustration. So I want to really try something that does challenge me and the only way I can do it is get out side of MaYur. I will probably write something like that. I want to test it and see k waqai me kitna maza aata hai. Hope you will read something that is based on my imaginary characters but honestly speaking with MaYur...its tough.

Check out the next OS. shayed...may be I managed to meet your expectations...who knows? 😉

-Neela

OH OGD nilla how could i explain u i dont expect any cheap romantic story from u. and frankly speaking i dont like this type of story. as i want to feel happy yaar thats why i expect something sweet, light hearted story. in our day to day life we have to faced so many problems that we dont have strength to feel it virtually too. why yaar.???? ami ekhane ashi kichuta moza korte ba moza pete - so i alz try to avoid tragic ya sad story.. u said u understand my frustration but i dont think so. any way no prob.- sabki apni apni ek tarika hote hai likhne ka- and they are very much comfortable with it . so keep writing the way u want to write. :D😃..


accha onek bok bok korlam. ebar ashi tomar bangla OS ta te..

ashole k jano amar na mayank er upar keno jeno raag hocchilo ei bhebe j ekta gadaho bujhte parbe j Nupur or ticket cheker ra bangla bujhte parche na. but still he was using bengali.. kintu tarpor jokhon mayank bollo j he wanted to nupur in his own way then i loved him so much..
hehehehehe ekhan theke ekta lesson kintu aj pawa gelo- mayank jemon tar ekta nijossho way te nupur k jante chesta korchilo ,thik temni tumi tomar unique style a likhte chesta koro. 😃. tahts good u know...


thanx for ur nice writing. loved it really. and u can see the response today. no one is complaining u. isnt it a great achievement /??? ab aya na maza??