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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 5

Maan: nakul call Dr

Dadi: grab his arm ..who is she?

Maan: Mr Handa daughter....

Dadi: are you sure you reached right home?
Maan: dadi what do you mean?
Dadi:she should be a child? how she is that old?
Maan: dadi please let me freshen up please...removed her hand
Dadi: Maan aap kiase ko utha kar la kar aai ha...
Maan: dadi ab yeh jo koi bhi ha ha she will stay here.... walk out
DadI: yeh larka bhi , sirf aapni baat maanwata ha...she looked at Geet...
Maan: was picking things from car....
Dadi: what is this? shocked Maan who just order things helping himself
Maan:what now? dadi you sit there with her i am coming
Dadi: what is this?
Maan: just few things... he took her diary, jewelery box her book ... walk to his room...
Dadi: whats wrong with him? why he is paying so much importance to her?

Meera ( maan cousin married to dev ,has 2 kids ....every vacation she came to dadi ma to spend her holidays, nt, sasha & tasha are her sister in laws) (don't jump readers...... )

nakul: dadima your phone..
Dadi: who is it?
nakul:Meera di
Dadi: took phone "hi beta how are you?"
Meera: is Maan back
Dadi: yes he is
Meera : i hope that child didn't tease him..
Dadi: that .... saw Maan coming out
Maan: did you call DR?
Dadi: ask nakul ..
Maan: who are you talking to then? bit angry
Dadi: Meera
Maan: mera cell charge nai ha... give me phone let me call DR.. he snatch phone
Dadi: Maan
nakul : dr is here sir
Maan: gave her back phone...walk with Dr to her room..

Meera:who is sick dadi?

Dadi:that girl who he ....
Meera: he did bring that girl with him.... dadi we are coming tomorrow don't for get to pick us up..
Dadi: ok beta.
Meera: my kids will give are company.. see you dadi.. cut call

DR checked her Maan kept on standing in room"what medicine she was taking"
Maan: ordinary tablets
Dr: please hold her arm i have to give her injection,
Maan: looked out dadi was talking on phone. he sit on each of bed
Dr: please pull her sleeve up
Maan: carefully did that as if she is a fragile .. hold her arm...
Dr: please little up
Maan:did he closed his eyes as if he was injected
Dadi: walk in saw him sitting with closed eyes...surprised...to see him so concern for someone other than family...
Dr:hi mrs khurana how are you?
Maan: open his eyes

Dr:hi mrs khurana how are you?
Maan: open his eyes
Dadi:i am fine someone else is sick here...
Dr: yes Mr Maan told me about Miss Handa, She is just stress

out, she will be fine by morning
Dadi: Maan please see off Dr... with eyes ask him to get up.
Maan: jee jee.. pull her sleeve down cover her properly walk
out..
Dadi: kuch tou ha...followed Maan close the door.behind her
at Mumbai
Dev Mom...Meera
Meera: jee
Dev Mom: you are going to Delhi tomorrow
Meera: jee
Dev Mom take your sisters too with you
Meera jee woh mein
Dev Mom: beta they will have outing.
Meera: but i will stay for month
Dev Mom: so what they will stay for few days then they will
come back
Meera :but
Dev Mom: aaraya you are their bhabi you don't think about their future,

Meera: how their future ? paused..

DevMom: you have a cousin may be he like any one of them..
Meera: shocked at her thinking please you ask Dev first
Dev Mom: he will not object i know my son
Meera: ask Dev first

nt & sasha enter
nt: bhabi you don't want to take us with you
Meera : i didn't said that.
sasha: mama chora ...
Dev Mom: bhabi do so much for their sister in laws aik yeh ha
tanu enter...i am going to Maan mamoo home ...maasi
Sasha: thousand time i asked you not to call me massi

tanu.. yes yes aunty sasha

Meera: come here tanu...ran to her lap
Sasha : who is sick?
Meera: looked at her ..thinking she was hearing her... woh...
tanu: my nano ..
Meera: looked at her...
Tanu right mama
Meera: yes
nt: you should go then
Meera: jee...
Dev mom: you all three pack your bags you too accompany her...
Meera : looked at her helplessly
tanu: whisper why they are coming with us?
Sasha: we will look after your nano
Meera: walked in "i should call Dev"
DEV: what happen?
Meera: Dev mama is asking me to take nt. sasha & tasha with me to Delhi..

Dev: meera you know i can't stop them

Meera: ok then i am not going cancel my tickets
Dev: you go after week i will come to get them back Or i will send Rahul (dev younger brother)
Meera: you come yourself not Rahul.
Dev: ok i will ...see mama is calling me... mood theek karo apna please.
Meera: Dev try to stop them ... kissed her sleeping son

Tasha: she is talking to bro

Sasha: what he said?
Tasha: i think he said he can't help
nt: he really can't stop us...so girls we are going
Sasha: i what to do facial,
Tasha: i want to have a hair cut...
nt : lets go to beauty palour .. we all should look best , after all we have to impress Mr Maan..
Sasha: tanu Maan mamoo.

(reader don't kill me Please)
At Delhi
Dadi: maan
Maan:dadi don't look at me like that..
Dadi: what i said?
Maan: i have not done any thing wrong. if you were at my place you must have done same
Dadi:smiled as he was really worried...
Maan: she tease me all way now you are
Dadi: what she did?
Maan: recollected how she hug him.... ask him to promise ...a soft smile came at his lips.."kuch nai" check his pocket.... "where is my cell?"

Dadi : kuch to ha Maan yeh muskan.. saw him walking to his room.

Maan:dadi have you seen my cell?
Dadi: check there.. she pointed towards Geet room
Maan: yes may be i kept there... he walk in it was on the bed...he picked up ... looked at her ...just placed his hand to check her temperature.... ..Geet grab his hand... Murmur "don't leave me "
Maan: i don't want to but dadi... you sleep i am very close to you..whisper... made her hand rest on her side... softly remove curls from her face....
walk out let the door open ...sit on his rocking chair...from where he could see her...
Dadi: you are not tired ?
Maan: no..
Dadi:ok come & have dinner
Maan:ask nakul bring here
Dadi: why? she looked at him where he was looking again & again.
Maan: why so many questions?
Dadi: ok ok no questions
Maan: here is the number of her father call him
Dadi: you call
Maan: no you call then you will be satisfied ,i didn't bring someone else...
Dadi :i don't need to
Maan then top staring me like that , it was your fault you didn't remember age..
Dadi: smiled... why you are getting angry?
Maan: see you are smiling again
Dadi: ok aab hum nahi haasta ha...
Maan: started eating...
Dadi: how she teased you?
Maan: dadi phir
Dadi: bolo na
Maan: she was fighting with me stop car ,
Dadi:what you did?
Maan dadi...
Geet: shouted....
Maan: just ran to her room.

Geet: eyes was closed ...papa , beejee

Maan: shhhh shhhhh.. relax relax ..i am here no one will take you ... pat her cheeks sit her bed side
Geet: you are here.. grab his arm
Maan : yes i am
Geet: hug him ..."Promise"
Maan: Promise... take water... make her sit little made her drink....now sleep i am here.... he didn't care dadi watching them just calm her down
Dadi: "made for each other " closed door.... walk to her room
Maan: stretch his legs picked pillow placed behind his head..... he closed his eyes as her hug made him very relaxed ....
Dadi: came to check after hour .he was fast a sleep,,, she was sleeping same way her head at his chest holding him tightly...
she pull blanket on them closed light walked out...

to be cont.... hope you like ... please name meera son i am not getting any...first come first name....😉
Bharat Chawlaas Rahul
NT,Sasha, Tasha & Rahul are Dev step siblings..do comment
Kids are same just tell me name

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
liked the villain team
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
awesome updates.....liked dem soooo much...
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 part just luved it nd abt name take the name from the serial if they r not included in ur ff like pari n vicky or kavya nd anjali would be nice from kavyanjali😉
Edited by maansi007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey naddiya............. plsssssssss update soon........
can't wait.... pls yaar.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee update.
Loveeeeeeeee it.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome cute but jaldi karo update i cant wait next part pls do cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
IT IS REALLY SUPERB YAAR!!!
THANKS FOR PM
PLS UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
IT GREAT !!! I ENJOYED!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Naddiya

awesome update
Loved it
OMG bechari Myra villains k beech fasi hai............... ab yeh Geet ko tang karne aa rahe hai
lyk d way Maan taking care of Geet
eagerly w8ng for next part
plsssssss cont soon

Luv u
Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part......loved the way maan takes care of geet.......plzzzz update soon

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