Mayank&Nupur SS-Hum Jo Na Keh Paye[Last Part PG23] - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
sajjal..........many many congrats for the job👍🏼
& abt the update.as usual to was heart touching..specially felt so sad for mayank & his dad relation here.......why mayank is not realizing if he lost his love like his dad did only becoz of his stupid ego then he will also become like his dad? & nupur ..sheh is also doing the same mistake*sigh......& yeah no debate i prefer happy ending for mayank & nupur anytime!!!!!!!!
waiting go the next update!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Congrats Sajjal 😊

And update was too good - it was certainly a date to remember 😆 , par gusse mein insaan kuch aise kah jaate hain jo kabhi wapas nahi le sakte.. Im sure Nupur didnt mean it - she just wanted to win the argument of the moment, but bechara Mayank 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tellycrazy

Hey Sajjal,

Do add me to your PM list😊I'm not sure of commenting everytime but I'll definitely read it.😃Comingto the update, Mayank and Nupur is indeed not realizing the loss they are going to incur after this cat and mouse game. First of all, when you love someone and there a lot of non verbal cues to show it, there is no need to say it aloud.
You'll be surprised because I can actually understand both their stands. Myank is afraid of changing his uncaring attitude about family if he openly confesses his love to Nupur. It would just go against everything that he held to himself. Moreover Mayank was not exactly treated well by his family either with his father blaming him for his mother's death.In a way he could be commitment phobic. Nupur,on the other hand, wants a promise fromMayank by making him utter those words. She is unconsciouly afraid of his fickle attitude towards relationships.
Ego might be a stumbling block in their relationship, but this can also teach them a valuable lesson in life. After all we all make mistakes in life but the important thing is that we learn from them. This is precisely why I wanted this FF to have a happy ending. According to me, both of them, especially Mayank, will take time to realize the folly he's committing in the name of their insecurity but I think this will only make theirrelationship stronger. Hope my POV made sense.
All the best for your interview😃
-Nithya

I don't want to say much but dear you have really nailed it! I'm hoping to show that they learn something from this so called Ego --- which does not at all stand for being a egg head but it stands for building walls around yourself, so no one can hurt you anymore!😳 Your POV made sense...seriously alott of sense its as if you peaked inside my brain!😆

Anyway, thanks for the Comment

Sajjal

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Posted: 14 years ago
Well ! This Part was so Nice !I dont like Mayanks dad so much ! Poor MayuI loved Mayu holding Nupurs hand😳😃. Awwie Nupur shoulnt have said that , Again alag Path. Hope its a new beginning and someone says I love you.Yeah Nups is rite he is the only one who will keep her happy. Hoping for the ego clashes et over soon 😳. Update soon and thanks for the Pm

Natasha
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh i Forgot , Congo Sajjal on being a teacher !!wheres the Party ?😉🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it :) congrats on the job!! :) :) :)
hey BTW, I m sure its gonna be a happy ending. .dont ask me why 😆
thats the feel i get, maybe i m wrong, but dont prove me right/wrong 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Totally amazing update Sajjal loved it thanks alott 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 6: Karma
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Humein mahsoos hota hai
Zamane ki tarah hum bhi
Mohabbat k haseen khamosh jazbon per
Bohat kuch kehna chahte hain
Mager apni tabiyat k
Humein izhaar jazbon ka
Kerna nahin aata
Suna hai pyaar k din
Ye rasm nibhate hain
Per haya k daman se lipta
Ye lafz ulfat ka
Hum jo keh nahin paye...........
Just when when you think alls cool, and maybe life won't dissappoint you anymore. You come across a hurdle...a hurdle you can ignore or just face. Raj Singhgania, a businessman by proffession yet a true lover at heart, has fallen head over heels for Nupur Dear. Now her thoughts are completely different on the issue of Love, But Raj is her fiance and he does have full right on her whether she likes it or not. And also if we're not wrong--, wasn't she the one who decided she would move on? Looks like finally the time has come for moving on -- or hasn't it?
"come on nupur, your my fiance" his expressions were filled with annoyance but nupur was not one to give in easily Actually she was not even going to give in at all.
"Please raj, i do not wish to do all this before marriage" grabbing her sweater she made a dash for the door but unfourtunately raj caught her before she left, " oh come one, don't act i know how traditional yours thoughts are" he taunted her, Nupur threw a disgusting look , " Fine i'm the not the most conservative fish out in the sea, but this is totally wrong" Raj wouldn't let go of her, He caught hold of wrist tightening it as he moved closer and closer.
Nupur looked away, but that didn't matter to him. All he knew was she was infront of him and He would make her his? But was that his real intention to make her his? Or was something else going on in Lover boys mind?
Nupur took all the force she had and pushed him away, " eww, gross raj. Don't you ever touch me again" she commanded pointing towards him, " why i'm your fiance, I have full right on you. And anyways we are getting married in a few months" his grin made Nupur want to puke right there. Just the thought of them in a bedroom alone made her want to kill herself.
" So what, Even if we get married you WON"T ever touch me. Do you understand that" her voice was filled with anger as she stated her warning. Raj pulled her in again, " Why nupur? don't you like me?.." Pausing he traced his index finger up her jaw line, " don't you like it when i touch you like that"
Nupur looked fiercely into his eyes and before she could respond, raj let her go, " oh wait i know. You like it when the great Mayank Sharma touches you like that" he screamed, Nupur astonished by his words looked towards him, " Your wrong"
"Oh please i saw you two together at the beach last night"
"so you have started to stalk me now?" she looked at him in horror, wondering did he have a private investigator following her everywhere she went?
" Don't turn this around Nupur, You lied about Mayank!" he was angry and his actions were a full proof of that but there was nothing Nupur could say or do to make him not insecure, " do you love him Nupur?"Yes, her heart answered instantly, but her mind refused, " No I don't love him"
Raj walked towards her, " fine then prove it!"
her eyes held curiostity as he neared her, " Kiss me right now"
Nupur thought about it, she would have to do something but kiss raj? She would have rather jumped off a cliff and anyways no man other than mayank had rights on these lips. she still remembered the first time they had kissed .........
**FLashBack**
"stop nupur" Mayank yelled out to her as she kept on running further and further,
"No way, remember our deal first you have to catch me" sticking her tongue out she continued to run further along the shore of the beach. Finally after a hour, Mayank caught on to her and pulled her into his grasp.
"what are you doing Mayank?" Nupur asked nervously as his hands slid up to her cheekbones slowly and sensously.
"what? don't you remember our deal now? I caught you, so time to fulfill your end of the deal" looking away, Nupur blushed as the distance between the two lessend by the seconds.
It was long before he placed his lips over hers, taking her on ride of passion. Finally seperating to catch their breaths, Nupur hugged Mayank instantly to hide her shyness.
" Thank you for being my first" she said with happiness.
"Ohey i better be your last also, these lips belong to me ONLY" they both stood their hugging each as the sun continued to set.
**FlashBack Ends**
Nupur nodded apprehensively, raj took that as a cue and closed in But poor nupur as she closed her eyes all the moments spent with mayank replayed in her mind, " I love him" she said to herself, opening her eyes with tears brimming through them, she pushed raj away, " I guess you right Raj, I do love him" running towards the door she let herself out. Only to stop at her car , " I LOVE YOU MAYANK" she yelled out loudly as her tears had no stop to them, " I don't care what anyone says....your mine and I coming for you" opening the car door she plunged herself in the car seat.
Looks like we have some confrotations coming up, but will she make it in time to confess or has Mayank Sharma decided to move on also? Life and Second chances never seem to go hand in hand....lets see if this time around Nupur & Mayank will give in or would this game of chess continue to rule their lives?
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"Shreya will you marry me?" mayank asked kneeling on knees, while ofcourse shreya was shocked, This was so out of order, " but mayank we just met each last week?"
"I know and I don't care -- I want you to become my life partner" Shreya knelt down beside him, " mayanks whats wrong? all this so suddenly?" she asked placing her hand over his.
"Nothing is wrong. Just say yes" he asked desperately, You must have realized by now, Mayank has decided to give up... they say if you love someone set them free....if they come back they are yours and if they don't it was never meant to be. Seems like Jr. Sharma has become a true believer of the saying. But what caused the changed, More so Why?
" Not until you tell me. Why the sudden change of heart?" shreya said wanting to break through the walls he had built up around himself to avoid getting hurt.
Tears fell from his eyes, pulling into her he hugged her, " I lost her Shreya, Forever -- "
Well ofcourse you lost her now, hugging another women infront of the only girl you loved is not the bestest way to confess your love? Is it now?, Nupur turned around slowly after seeing Mayank and Shreya togther...hmm Dear Nupur, we warned you..life and second chances don't usually go togther....but life and misunderstandings do!Maybe thats how it was suppose to be...this was their punishment for not being able to look beyond the past and accepting what was right infront of their eyes, "true love" .Nupur walked to her car, sitting inside she turned on the ignition, only to let her tears spill away as she came to realization, she had lost the only man she had loved..........
Coming back, Mayank and Shreya had seperated, " Who did you loose mayank?" she asked concerned.
"the only girl i had ever loved, Nupur Gupta" he confessed to Shreya who seemed shocked, If only Nupur had waited she would have been the most happiest girl in the world, instead of crying in her car at this moment.
" i lost her forever...because of my stupid ego and not being able to let go of my past" Shreya wiped away his tears, " mayank if your love is true...and you really did love her...then i'm sure she is waiting for you still"
"No she is not shreya, She has moved on with raj" his voice echoed sadness all over, But Mayank why can't you listen to someone else for once....for once in your life stop thinking with your brain ...and start thinking with the heart. Then you'd know true love is bound to come together at the end.
"Mayank listen to me, Nupur is the most luckiest girl to have someone as great as you love her. And i'm sure...no actually i know god would want you two to be together." she said smiling through her tears, Only some were lucky enough to find love as precious as this ....and too loose it would be a sin, " Now you get up, find her and tell that girl how much she means to you"shreya ordered him, Mayank laughed at her authorative tone but obeyed instantly, " Yes Mam"
Seems like finally people are learning to let go and move forward but is life willing to let them be together? Mayank Sharma the girl you have set free came back just for you....and you let her go. Now we know love is precious but is it that precious to forgive inorgance over and over again?
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After hours of crying out her pain, Nupur drove away. Poor girl lost her love twice in one day, because just as she drove away, Mayank stepped out. Now thats what we call karma, Nupur if you remember that same love knocked on your door millions of times but someone was filled with too much pride to let it in and Now that your ready to let it in, maybe its not ready to enter. Sweetheart what goes around....comes around too!
As she drove snippets of Mayank and Shreya's kept on appearing infront of her eyes making her angry. Stepping on the gear paddle unknown to what she was doing, she kept on increasing the speed.
The car spun out of control and "CRASH" ...... as blood oozed out of her forehead, mayanks smiling face appeared in her mind......" I love You Mayank" she whispered as her eyes closed slowly and slowy
Whats written in their destiny? will the two lovers ever meet? Or is destiny playing the same game, they both had once decided to play with it, when they decided to let their Egos&Pride intervene in the most beautiful feeling in the world, " LOVE"
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Okay thats it Guys, This is the second last Part. Next part is the Last one, i decided to finish it within this week because my job starts next week so i didn't want to leave it pending.
Also the Poem at the begining NOT BY ME, I found in on the net credit goes to the writer.
I hope you like it, its got a tragic end but ....who knows the last update could change everything😉
Do Comment/Do Criticize.
Sajjal

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh god..this was a superb part Sajjal! I LOVED it!!

The first kiss..and the Raj chapter! Eww..god such guys really erk me I swear! But the emotions she felt..and her running away...

And Mayank breaking down was so cute! awww =[

So early its ending?! :( Cant wait for final chapter! I know its gonna be AMAZING :):)

🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
OH GOD Sajjal.. Do you even think of giving us an unhappy ending.. it was a very nice update and the poem was damn good.

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